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xAishuuux

@xAishuuux

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Posted: 8 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: Soju.

Un peu d'amour... un brin de miel
Et je danse, danse, danse, danse, danse, danse, danse... 😆

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xAishuuux

@xAishuuux

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Posted: 8 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: Soju.
sorry baby, after some part of the comment i was so into the comment i coudent reply... but i loved every word of it... thanks for the beautiful and looong comment... ILYSM...waise in the start replies are in red... paper correction... Yeah I'm pretty sure about that 😆😆 I'm sowwieee 😳❤️ I love the paper correction 😆 ILYTSVM ❤️🤗 The paper thing reminds me of "Fck the paperwork!" ☺️😆

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

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Posted: 8 years ago

#533

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#534

will update dimensions in an hr or two...

until then you can check this thread...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4780545/maneet-ek-jashn-team-mishty-update-page-2

Edited by Soju. - 8 years ago

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xAishuuux

@xAishuuux

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Posted: 8 years ago

#535

If I'm not the first one to res then no one should be 😉 😆

❤️ 😳

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This is indeed a long, poignant, beautiful, fantabulous, amazing, awesome-sauce, freaking gorgeous, effin' intense update ❤️
I don't even mind losing few hours of my sleep devouring this masterpiece, you know it. 😆 You even know how much I love sleeping, but as usual I like writing such comments in the night... 🤣 My inspiration level gets really high at this time! 😉 Awww... I absolutely love this update 🤗 ❤️ And the fact that it is a big big update makes my heart sing and dance with joy ❤️ I can never have enough of your updates... or you ❤️ You know that naa... 😭 Reading this update was like a roller coaster ride, from an extreme point to another, every kind of emotion of the characters, every single SHADE ☺️ I already BMed (BMWed<3) this, to read it every time I miss you... 😳 Whenever I read your stories it's like talking to you, because I can see you arranging every word, making it vibrant, poignant, giving it life ❤️ You're such a busy be(a)e! I don't know what should I do first... be proud of you or crying for my own pain 🤔 😆 Still I would always come back here. ❤️
Okay enough of my blabbering here, damn annoying... that I am, I know. Bear with me, love. It's my right to be so annoying 😳
I'm already feeling bad for you baby... you must be already tired of reading this and I didn't even properly started it 😆

Coming to the update, you literally depicted such a journey in just one update I am so much impressed by your writing skills and focus on every story... how do you even manage to get everything so perfect? 😆 Maan's possessive side was just so well described here, I was literally trying to breathe in and out while reading the update 🤣 Your choice of words take my heart away. Which you know it's yours... ❤️ 😳 I don't even know how to react on it, as a very possessive person I can totally understand him. 🤔 🤣 Whatever he does is out of jealousy... but he should always listen to her version of the story too. 😆 And I'm really glad he resisted and left her alone without making her do something she doesn't even want to hear about... 😳 The sentences kept having such a big impact on my mind, I was imagining every detail of the story... 😆 Geet's fear and concern were beautifully portrayed here ❤️ There is just so much power in your words baby... 😳 I love you so much ❤️
Maan is becoming a beast... and you're just nailing writing every single emotion :o Hard to control in front of her... he may hate her but he loves her too. And his love speaks way more about him :) Just her yelling at him to stop and he understood to need of it. The feelings here are HUGE, burning my poor display or whatever... but it becomes so addictive I can hardly stop reading 🤣 Geet feeling relieved... I'm sure deep inside her she was grateful for that. For the fact that her beast can also stop at her demand... 😳 And what a thing here! He loves dominating her but a single complaint from her and he is becoming a poor puppy ☺️ Just love the fact that you included Maan looking at her face and noticing her emotions and he lets her go ❤️ Isn't it sad when he wants to exercise control over everything including her but he can't protect himself and loses control? 😆 I find it so intense... and against his own will. As I love breaking the rules ;)

Seems like only with the help of medicines Geet can have a normal and peaceful sleep. Damn, this girl must be so stressed right now... her life is a mess and she isn't even the one controling her own life. Other people are doing that for her and she is lucky if she manages to escape every time... Here comes another shade of Maan: the protecting side of him, that moment when he himself feels so weak in front of her ❤️ I think even if her brain keeps warning her regarding his intentions, her heart is at peace whenever he's near her ❤️ Their souls recognise each other, despite them dancing with the demons in their minds. Sleep is very good sometimes, indeed... 😉 Love that cuddling session, I know how is it to wait for that and when you finally get it it is pure bliss CC... ❤️ 😭
Loving the "roller coaster" line added her in the end, just perfectly describing the situation... ❤️ I was reasing this with such joy, baby So continue making me happy... 😳 😳
The moment he wakes up. You can just feel the war being there inside him, torturing him, causing him pain... his heart says something, his mind goes against that. A mesmerizing part where I was getting very emotional... next time I'm keeping a tissue box with me 😆 Fevicol and tissue boxes became an important part of my life since I've met you 🤣 But I don't wanna miss a thing ❤️
His inner turmoil, his care, his concern, all in few lines... I am loving the build-up here ❤️ "I hate you like I love you" type of situation there about him... 😉 😆

Loving Geet's reaction towards Maan here, she knows fighting with him about that is in vain cause nothing's gonna change whatever happened 😆 And and and I looove this! Maan making her eat something 😳 Lots of flashbacks in my mind right now ☺️ 🤣 Deja vu I guess... I'm loving this, keep making her eat 😆 ❤️ She should stay strong for you... 😳 Upar se, she cries so much so she gets weak easier 😳 😆 Dining table 😆 I don't know, I can totally understand Geet. I love food, but sometimes can't eat anything so someone keeps ordering me to do it 🤔 😳 And he already knows her so much, he knew she's gonna say that and act like that 🤣 This also shows how much attention he pays to her. 😳 When you add details like these I the story you know how much I love ittt naa baby 🤗 I feel like cudding you to no end ☺️ 😆 Annoying you to no end too ;) Also the previous peck on her forehead was adorably sMexy...
And YESSS, I knew it 🤣 😉 He had to say that he's completing the task right there and now 🤣 Under the table or on the table? Please do enlighten me... 😳 😳
And I love the fact that Geet started eating so she can get rid of his demands 🤣 Unlike me, she doesn't really enjoy the table game 🤣 She misses a lot :o

I see, I see... Geet is worried about the collectors. Bechari needs to do sometjing about this fast warnah... or should I believe the hero would come and save her? 🤣 I guess I should 😳 Oh damn, she is so very much concerned about that so she skipped her lunch! I was sure something bad is gonna happen after knowing this... she still thinks about keepig his imagine clean, though I know it must be because she's afraid of the beast 😆 But maggi... 🤣 I know, maggi... long great saviour 😆 getting flashbacks again 🤣 You are seriously so adorable baby 😳 🤗 I want to eat all of you but (Ai) need(s) you too 😆 The fact that she searched every corner for maggi was just so cute... 😆 And the joy on her face after finally getting her maggi back 😳 I love how you combine intense and funny cute scenes... such talent, I swear 😳 ❤️ Thank you so much for making me go crazy about u ☺️ 🤗 you know it...

The maid and all of them found her on the floor... this is just so sad I knew Maan is gonna be so angry! This girl never takes enough care of herself... 😳 But I am loving reading about him going mad seeing her in such state... 😳 Some people are so difficult 😆 Does he actually know what he wants? 🤣 Nvm, this part is absolutely amazing... ☺️ I love your line about him making her wake up... so much in character I was sure he's gonna call the doctor... the damn doctor 😳 😳 I don't know but I'm finding myself in such a difficult situation... 😆 I love ittt.
Ohooo Maan is getting jlo even seeing the doctor checking her up :o 🤣 I bet he's damn possessive... such an awful disease, I swear 🤣 It kills your every nerve... :))) 😳 Makes you go mad, lose your brain, increases BP etc. ☺️ 😆 I wonder if Geet is gonna love Maan's possessive side... 😳 All his gestures that clearly tell he's being jealous, you just nailed it, my baby... 😳 And love the fact that he tries to control his own emotions... even I can't do that 😆
This part is just WOW... 😳 Maan declares her as his wife in front of the doctor Even doctor's words about Geet's state are so realistic... 😆 At least lab does some right things too 😆 but I'll never forget whatever it does wrong ❤️
Here comes another shade of MSK... the loving side I am sure even if he was angry with her, he felt very proud of naming her his wife in that moment 😳 😳 And the doctor scared for a minute part got me like 🤣 Hahah, damn hilarious and amazing! 😆 Come here, come here 🤗

OMG, I still have a lot to say but Imma keep it quite short 🤣 It's like I'm also writing updates 🤣 But it is only for you... 😳 Cause I really appreciate and love your work and you 😳 ❤️
Again, Maan's reactions tell a story... Something he's afraid of saying... he should say it often 😳 And awwwieee, taking care of her when she's feeling unwell ☺️ There is just so much magic in these lines ❤️ and then I remember this is a roller coaster journey and I shouldn't dream that much 😆 (small note: I swear I'm writing "ai" instead of "i" like every single time unaware of that and then have to delete it and write it again 😆)
Maan's anger strikes again... loving his concern words Who else can write that better than you baby? 😳 😳 I love it when you say it... ☺️
Loving the way they look at each other and him slowly ^.^ her... ☺️ 😆 I'm sorry but that kind of emoji reminds me of you and ai damn love it 😆 ❤️
Geet's question is really meaningful... 😳 Even he started thinking about it and went away to be alone with his own thoughts 😆 Totally enjoyed this part, love... ❤️

So glad to know that Geet's health is improving. :) I'm sure she gets a lot of care from that beast. He can sense her even if she is away from him. You explained it so well He wants to be her haven instead of being the storm... but he knows he wants revenge so this overcomes all his caring and loving thoughts Ermmm, this is kinda frustrating me out... 😆
I adore the "dancing heart" expression you used ❤️ So beautiful and awesome, just like you... 😳 I do know the song, but you should lead my steps 😉 😆 😳
The build-up in the following scene is shocking and amazinnggg :o Those idiots trying to touch her, how cheap 😡 That too when Maan is there... this would never happen when he is there to protect her! 😉 I guess hard times are coming up after this... Finally he gets to know about the debt... and her family is truly awful 😭 I am feeling so sad for everything... 😭 😭
Beautiful part... Maan taking her in his arms and making her sit on his bed ❤️ I don't know why but I love "his bed" words... 😳 😳 His warmth made her calm down ❤️ How beautiful and tender I am going mad... mad... 😆 He destroys her but she makes her stronger too. He literally changed her whole world 😳 And the again the roller coaster strikesss 😆 The aww moments I felt a minite before turned into suspense seeing them fighting 😆 But this is one of the reasons why I love this story so much Never gets you used to one idea... never gets you bored 🤣 We have suspense and that too all the time ☺️ "Angry lion" another side of him, woh bhi hai... in a moment he forgets everything happened and threatens her again. Their dialogues are just perfect baby... it's getting more and more intense and I can feel what is there to come 😭 His jealousy makes him forget everything and question her character The beast is here to stay...
I know I missed explaining a lot of parts. I did that on purpose... because this comment is already a pain in the a** 😆 Hell yeah, I'm not gonna stop!

Finally, I can return to tell you how much I loved this looong and wonderful update, baby 🤗 ❤️ You are such an inspiration for me... 😳 Always taking your little bit of free time and writing these stories for us 🤗 It really means a lot. 😳 ❤️ Keep it up with your gorgeous work and take care of you in these times of hard work and lab! 😆
I am mentally prepared for everything comes, you know it... I just need you by my side, love 😳 ❤️
Thank you for making me go crazy through your update 😆 Waiting for the next one. And the one after this. And the one that follows. 😳 when you feel like posting.
☺️ 😳 You are simply the best okay? ILYTTMAB ❤️

Edited by Aishuuu. - 8 years ago

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xAishuuux

@xAishuuux

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: Soju.
will update dimensions in an hr or two...

until then you can check this thread...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4780545/maneet-ek-jashn-team-mishty-update-page-2

This reminds me I have to unres there 😆 I mean... I already did it in my way 😉 😳

Had it written since the day you updated 😳 but kept it for myself ;)

Regarding the team thread I have few questions... Imma ask you but not now... and not here 😆
But read the second part too and loved it ❤️

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Anotherstar

@Anotherstar

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#537

Nice update

Geet have to pay so much money

She should tell maan everything

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

#538

hi thanks 4 da dramatic update! superbly written! Poor Geet! Maan tries 2 touch her bt she pleads! He stops! Geet unwell! Maan loves n hates Geet! he is unable 2 forgive n forget her! Geet is forced 2 eat! Geet faints! Doc comes! he assumes Geet is a maid! Maan corrects him n says she is his wife! Geet worried abt the debt collectors! She doesn't want ruin tarnish his name! she caught by goon! he wants the money! Geet tensed as he gets closer 2 her! Maan comes n takes her! the guy taunts Geet! Maan wants 2 knw y she owes so much money! Geet says its personal! Maan asks y she was so close 2 stranger! Geet shld tell Maan everything! update soon