|| MG - His P GF||Part 11 Page 58|| 11th March 2017

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Awesome, lovely,beautiful update

Each n every scene is mind blowing

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Nice update

Loved tom and jerry fighting...

Geet ka plan toh flop ho gaya...!!!

Maan jeet gaya par humari sherni bhi kuch kam nahi...

Woh haar man ne walo mein se nahi hai...

Kuch na kuch jaroor karegi...

Waiting for it!

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aroobasiddiq

@aroobasiddiq

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Very nice ff continue soon

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taanee

@taanee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

aww its such a cute update Zabardast going

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

hi mitu..i am loving this concept of writing story on pictures. it must be something different feeling to write story without knowing what will happen as image can be given showing opposite emotions of what you actually want or thought..part 1 to 5 i like the way you have connected it pictures..but dadi having not problem after knowing about maan's pregnant gf come as a shock to me. this is not big deal but keeping in mind indian culture it seems like a very big thing. i like the way maan handle things. i like every thing but don't know i just feel i want dadi view about this whole thing..i don't know...ok i will comment again after reading next part

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Mitu

@Mituag

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Neeju
hi mitu..i am loving this concept of writing story on pictures. it must be something different feeling to write story without knowing what will happen as image can be given showing opposite emotions of what you actually want or thought..part 1 to 5 i like the way you have connected it pictures..but dadi having not problem after knowing about maan's pregnant gf come as a shock to me. this is not big deal but keeping in mind indian culture it seems like a very big thing. i like the way maan handle things. i like every thing but don't know i just feel i want dadi view about this whole thing..i don't know...ok i will comment again after reading next part

Aww thank u ...

And yes dadi pov will be in image 9 or part 9 as it has dadi in pic ... which was post by Priya in zara hatke image contest ...

I have updated till part 7 ... read left parts too 😳

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

hi mitu

read part 7 ..

geet is naughty ...all she knew is to make maan's life hell and hilarious ..she wantedto take revenge on maan for teasing her ..maan ne bolti band ki apni hi style mein

thanks for update

waiting for next

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

part 6,7...i love this SUCK thing..when i read maan saying his life sucks because of geet i just know what will happen next 😉😆..and maan did the same thing by showing how his life sucks😆...geet is like normal girl..i said normal because i kind of know many girls around including me who like cartoons every much...specially tom and jerry..we girls are never in hurry to grow up...boy always wants to look like man but it will be hard to find girls who mind if you can them girl instud of women..they like to remain young at every step of age and some times behave too young and other think of them as child..ok no more my philosophy over all i like this story...keep it up..and i will be waiting for dadi's view point..it will make the story complete

Edited by Neeju - 9 years ago

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Awesome part geet maan sa kaisa revenge le ya soach ta soach ta maan ko usa tease karta dekha kar days after days wo vi bhual gayi aur ya maan ko geet ka cartoon dekhna par vi usa pareshan kia aur geet ka revenga style is unique par msk ka style vi to hatke hai lol.. Waiting for next...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

hi thanks 4 da terrific update! Well written! Maan teases Geet n den taunts her abt being a kid! Geet angry n gets her revenge bt singing that song! update