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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Lovely update so geet has a bro who is wildlife expert she went to meet him they both had a really good time geet has a job which seems to be too hard but geet is determined to finish she is drunk but not so much Sam is quiet as maan wanted her to be which seems to be bothering him he choose shirt she was sneezing also trying to tell abt the shirt but maan didn't listen dadi pointed out the shirt he went to change seeing his maid with allergy bottle kicks her out he saw a figure in garden who I am sure is geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
geet met armaan
he is her bro
what is geet upto
im sure sam is geet
n she said jerk as maan interupted her taking allergy med
or to say alcohol
but he saw a girl at midnight in lawn
he thought 2 find it out..
nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Congrats for new story.
Interesting updates.
Mysterious story. Geet has entered Khurana Haveli in disguise of a villager and given responsibility of cleaning Maan's room. She named herself as Sameera.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

confusion...confusion...😆

ring tone se le kar drink ki bottle tak...😆
maan ka ek maid pe itna dhyaan dena????
jaldi jaldi solve karo warna main behosh ho jaaungi...😆

haha abi mat behosh hona ...boht saray parts bachay hain confuse karnay k liye 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: fict

nice update. suspense is incresaing with every update😆 Whats going on with Geet and Sam.

geet and sam going on together 😉😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: vrinda22

geet met armaan

he is her bro
what is geet upto
im sure sam is geet
n she said jerk as maan interupted her taking allergy med
or to say alcohol
but he saw a girl at midnight in lawn
he thought 2 find it out..
nice part

u mixed it ..allergy syrup was actually that one only which she took from maan's room ,,,
but the one who was drinking in in medicine was not the same bottle as it was in maan's room 😕
hope i cleared it 😕😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: nakh5683

Lovely update so geet has a bro who is wildlife expert she went to meet him they both had a really good time geet has a job which seems to be too hard but geet is determined to finish she is drunk but not so much Sam is quiet as maan wanted her to be which seems to be bothering him he choose shirt she was sneezing also trying to tell abt the shirt but maan didn't listen dadi pointed out the shirt he went to change seeing his maid with allergy bottle kicks her out he saw a figure in garden who I am sure is geet

Geet sam ,sam geet ..golmaal .. u guys gotta get new update now 😉😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part : 05


" I will destroy him .he will be finished... he won't find his own identity for the rest of his life .. people won't know MSK even existed ... " saying so she cut the call , but was startled , when someone put hand on her shoulder .. she spun around and looked the person , trying to hide her expressions , praying that he didn't hear her ...

" tussi kon ho g ? kis se milna ha ?" sam said in her usual thick voice . The man scrutinized the girl in front of him , this girl is something , he thought , but she is so ugly ..

" no need to act .. I heard ur conversation " ... said Rahul Malhotra , whose haveli was beside khurana haveli and he was best friend of maan ..

Her expressions changed .. she didn't expect someone to hear her , or she didn't expect it this sudden

" u won't tell it to anyone else I would kill u right here .. and no one will ask me too " .. she said in her stern tone along with her famous smirk ...

"ahh !! I liked the attitude miss .. "

" Miss Sameera .. " she told him , while she tried to maintain the composure ...

"so miss sameera , what makes u think that I won't tell anyone ?"

"I know u are his good friend ,still I would do anything , for u .. just keep it a secret"

"anything ?? "

" yes ! what do u want ?"

" will tell u with time ... but one thing I will tell , our motive is same "

He smirked evily and left ... she kept looking at his retreating figure ... "motive is same ? matlab ? "

" dushman ka dushman dost " ... " par dost ka dushman , dushman " ..she smirked and followed inside ..

...

On the lunch table .. maan Rahul dadi and raj were sitting .. having their meal , when rahul said

" my old maid left the job and I need to search a new one "

Rahul eyed sam with a smirk , as she cleaned the frame on opposite wall .Sam gave an unsatisfactory expression ,as if trying to show that she isn't liking what he is heading to .

" Maid , hire a new one Rahul whats the big deal " . maan said casually .

" that's the problem maan , I cant hire anyone in our haveli , u know we cant trust anyone, specially these maids now a days "

Maan was about to say something but raj cut him

" U r right Rahul , these people cannot be trusted , they can do anything "

" Dad ! all of them are not bad , just few are like this "

" and we don't know those few maan , so better search before hiring " .. Maan gave like " okay " look ,while they heard something dropping on the ground . It was photo frame that fell from sam's hand .

" maaf karna , maaf karna .. " she said loudly almost crying , as usual her voice was unpleasant .. quickly she started picking up the glass pieces , and one pierced in her hand , she hissed and looked up muttering " hum se galti ho gayi , aisa phir kabi nahi ho ga " .. she eyed , maan and raj ..

Maan noticed that she didn't pay heed to her wound , and looked truly afraid as if they would punish her ..

" its ok , tum jao apna haath dekho , koi baat nahi "

She happily removed her tears and went off while idea stroke Raj's mind

" Rahul this is the new maid I hired , she actually has no one , as she left her husband who was harassing her "

" nice cover story " Rahul thought . while maan continued eating , being uninterested ..

" hmm ?"

" actually I hired her for time being , as she was helpless but I think she don't have any particular work to do ,as maan would leave for KM in 15 days "

"hmm "

" so u can keep her as ur maid , I mean she can be trusted "

" But Dad , she does my chores , how can she ... " he thought for a while , what got into him , anyone would do his work ? she just choose his daily wears and cleans his room . don't even talk to him from long time

" atleast keep her till I m here "

" Maan rajji will do ur work , let Rahul take her , he needs a maid "

" ok dad " .. he said and resumed eating , while rahul smirked at sam who was standing on the upper floor ..

...

" haan bol aaru ?" .. said geet answering her phone ..

" Geet whatever information you needed is ready , but u have to visit me if u want to know about it "

" Ok , I will visit tonight .. "

" why not now ? is everything working well ??"

" hmm , I haven't found anything yet .. I am still working on it "

" don't u think u are taking a lot of time ..it's been a month now "

" hmm , It took longer than I expected ..anyways ..keep everything arranged , I will come tonight " ..



Note : The story has different folds and anther side too 😉 i know it confused u all , some guesses are right though 😉 , and it will be clear soon .. till then enjoy the mystery updates 😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Lovely update yaar mera sir gum raha ye suspence se do sameera wants go destroy maan rahul hears her she is scared said will do anything rahul wants Sam as his maid which he very cleverly suggest that he can't trust a stranger rahul want to destroy maan as well maan dosent like his maid going to rahul who seems to be scared as she dosent know what this rahul is planning on the other hand wonder what geets planning srmaan wanted to meet her but she can't come yaar plzz solve the mystery now it's getting really confusing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
I know Sam is dangerous with hidden motives

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