O Saathi Re (2) MG SS - Ch 13, pg 134 *** new thd link pg 1 - Page 70

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SGAYATRI thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
U should have given 2 slaps to the police by Ranawat .Tara was so scared .Maan remember few more of is memory incident .Geet being senti and maan comforting him great .Y u think i am not reading i read each and every update and comment on all the parts
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved how Maan understood her actions and gave her the much needed hug. Its really pathetic how the policemen behaved harassing the victim. Pathetic but a harsh reality in India. I have actually heard of such a thing happening quite a few times. I am confused how exactly Maan doesn't remember his exact moments with Geet but remembers everything else.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SGAYATRI

U should have given 2 slaps to the police by Ranawat .Tara was so scared .Maan remember few more of is memory incident .Geet being senti and maan comforting him great .Y u think i am not reading i read each and every update and comment on all the parts


The message was not for regular readers but those who don't even open the PM😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
o gosh i understand how scared tara might be.. thinking about the taunts and also the trouble that dev would undergo due to the this...
somewhere maan is probably getting a hint of dev.. but I am glad he could save tara... poor geet could not wrap her mind around maan getting hurt ... love can never fade away for geet its a reality and for maan probably a distant mirage...oh it was so cute to see maan hugging geet and making her feel better.. but will he understand her pain and remember the past...

I am reading this story and commenting pls dont cut it short
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Posted: 9 years ago
Of-course pasand aay, aey vi koi puchne di gal hai

amazing update and you nailed it Avi
every dialogue and poor Tara
and last scene was superb one
let see what happen next
waiting eagerly for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice Update
Maan wants Geet to work with him.Police men are disgusting.




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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all I am eagerly waiting for your pm
And reading the updates regularly
We need your pms
Ch 11
As usual policemen asking unnecessary questions
that shows the mindset of them

Tara terrified of the questionnaire
Fled out of the room
And our saviour Maan is there to save her
And remembered something from the past
May be this accident is the reason for his memory loss
And
Coming to the MG
Unconsciously Maan wants Geet near him
He is all black with jealousy
God sents him or should I say Avi sends him an opportunity to be close to Geet
And we can feel MSK smirking
How much he wants that ordinary girl

And here after the fall
Love has its own language
Geet is worried about Maan
She comes to tend his wounds
And he again dhows his arrogance
Jaldi karo
And her sweet 'ji'
Now he observers the O G
Silken glowing skin
Eyes as big amber pools
And ordinary hair has special sheen
And
Dabdabai aankhen
Geet ki munh maangi murad poori
He is unable to see grief stricken face
And gathers her in his arms

Please do continue the story as per your plan
Don't make it short
We are loving it like all the other of yours
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update. Tara is too afraid to complain abut her culprits. She refused to complain. Geet consoled her. Dev is also scared about Tara's safety. Maan got a call from Tasha about non availability of female doctor for fair. Maan got the idea of Geet working as his PA. Two policemen came and instead of writing a complaint they started blaming Tara, Dev and Geet. Listening their words Tara got out and tried to jump from the cliff. Maan came at that time and saved her. Police commissioner came and scolded his men. Geet is hurt to see Maan in this condition.She bandaged his head injury that he got whike rescuing Tara from dangling to the cliff.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 10
Felt so bad for Dev today as a doctor he can see how much his patient needs his help.. but she was refusing that help from him even damn scared of him .. Gosh.. it was obvious to feel an anger for those criminals N victim's condition in front of his eyes.. somewhere Dev has developed soft corner for Tara too.. It's not pity but it's empathy as of now..
Next to maneet.. Gosh de are fighting like tom n jerry lolz..n more than dat.. Geet is highly irritated with his I am d cool attitude.. finally for his jhooti remark she gave him back in a good way.. n I am loving J Maan.. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 11
Oh god that inspector.. Really really Rape victims are already mentally weak n such police officers add up der miseries.. I t looked like Tara was ordinary girl just she became victim.. but it's not her fault but at this time this is impossible to make her understand.. avi di We want to see this angle of ur writing too So keep writing on DEv and tara too..
Maan saved tara but it triggered his one memory of his life.. It looks like all des 4 people come together to set everything right in each others life.. One is victim in one an other way and another one is healing balm ... Somewhere Maan has noticed how much Geet cares for him.. n der is something which stir his heart when Geet is in front of him..
Edited by Teju_wkar - 9 years ago

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