O Saathi Re (2) MG SS - Ch 13, pg 134 *** new thd link pg 1

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maneetarsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#661

Superb update, stupid police men they need be punished very severely. They frightened already shaken Tara that she ran away from the house. Good that maan was back in time and stopped her. Geet realised that she can't loose maan and she will wait for him. Atlast they hugged

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#662

A will to live is the most important thing for survival and that has not dimmed in Tara which is very positive. I like the way Dev is handling her. Giving her space yet coaxing her and making her comfortable with him. I want to see more of jealous Maan.

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LM1991

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Posted: 9 years ago

#663

Lovely heart wrenching update! Sometimes police can be so insensitive especially with a rape victim!! Maan recalls when he mother was dangling on the cliff and he couldn't save her. Really traumatic time for Maan!

Avi, as I'm a new writer and don't have as much experience as you, but in my limited experience, please write the way you planned !

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komol

@komol

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Posted: 9 years ago

#664

Loved the update.
It was shocking to learn how Maans parents died.Its still a little unclear though.I would love for you to delve more into the past so as to see how they got where they have.Btw I'm also waiting for the flowing white curtain scenes.
Frankly speaking I do like reading dev Tara scenes but I'm far more interested in MG scenes.So if you ask me I would like a more of MG than dev and Tara.(Maaneet fan ^_^)
Anyways the other matter is maaneets very cryptic past after the separation has my curiosity peaked.
All in all loved it!
Looking forward to reading more :)

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Kkiran

@Kkiran

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Posted: 9 years ago

#665

OMG THANK GOD MAAN CAME AT THE RIGHT TIME AND SAVED TARA! Those police officers need to be locked up! Tara is going to need a lot of work mentally and emotionally so she can fight for justice! Maan knows there is a connection it just a matter of time regaining his memory!

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Madhu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#666

Nice part

grrr...that policemen..🤬

Poor Tara..thank god Maan saved her at right time😊

The 2 policemen got nicely from PC😆

Did maan's parents to died like this??

Maaneet scenes😳⭐️

I like DevTara scenes more..plzz don't cut short it!!😊

Thanks for the pswd and pm!!

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kabslocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#667

Superb update. Tara is too afraid. Dev understands her mental situation. He put some eatables outside the room and went out of cottage. She unlocked her room and ate food. Maan is furious on Geet for ignoring him. He ordered her to take care of his breakfast that she refused to take. When they reached the cottage where Dev and Tara were staying, Maan felt Jealous on seeing Dev as he is young and handsome. He blamed Geet for telling lie. Get blamed him of forgetting promises.

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shruti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#668

Nice update

And emotional too

Hate those police officers

I love reading both MG N DEVTARA parts

So write the story as u want

Update soon

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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#669

nice part poor tara so scared n those police what type of person they are feel like killing them n our society will just blame her so tara tried to attempt suicide glad maan came on time maaneet came close a little because of this incident loved their hug nice update thnx 4 pm

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Preethi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#670

Nice update dear police came and blamed the dev and the girl Tara is not able to harm dev and geet for her justice so thought to end her life but at mean time Mann came and recused her com. Came and suspected them