The Guava Thief ( Chapter 2- Pg 11) 18th March

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Hemlata

@nitika20

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Achha .. Daadi Ne Jaanke Last me bomb phoda .. Rano finding Groom for Geet...
Hye re hye ..
Abb Maan emergency leave lekar aayega ..
Hahaha ...
Maan IAs officer Nice...
Update next soon ...

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Sneha

@neasya

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Wow...nice start... Maan a collector but is away from family ... Waiting to know what will maan do about the boy hunting for geet...

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Firstly ,I must say "guava theif "title is catchy nd will defo make readers to peep in. Interesting. Start nd seems to b maan is already in love with mischievous. Geet continue. Soon

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

interesting title! terrific start superbly written! Maan is an IAS Officer! he calls n speaks 2 dadi n asks abt everyone hoping she will mention Geet! when she talks abt Geet, he pretends nt to remember her bt he does! she is with him so hw can he forget her? dadi tells him Rano is looking 4 a boy 4 Geet! update soon

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

superb start ...loved the first part ..
maan is a IAS officer ...he is away from home coz of his job ..
dadi is teasing maan about geet 😛
continue soon..plz

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annirogc

@annirogc

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

intresting start .. eager to read more

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Amazing concept
likd dadi n maan convo..
maan likes geet
n here geets parents r searching a match for geet...

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

amazing concept ..maan sa IAS officer ..becahra dadimaa ko kuch nahi bol paya ..

geet parents searching match for her ..

dadimaa kuch karro

thanks for update

waiting for next

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divya22

@divya22

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Lovely story...

N lovely start...

Ah maan chuparustam..

Bt dadi is also nt less...

Eager to read more..

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Whoa woman you patthar..aka you rock😆

I don't know how I ended up on this thread, but I read the name somewhere it intrigued me.

Then I read the name of the writer and I knew I was definitely in for a treat.

And boy was I right...😃

I am hooked lined and have sunk into the Collector from Uttarakhand's story.

Dadi is a riot and having a blast at her grandson's expense. She definitely knows😉

I absolutely adore stories of unrequited love😳

This whole set up kind of reminded me of Balika Badhu or a Hrishikesh Mukherjee movie.

I don't know why but I felt like this story has the feel of a softer by-gone era.

As if I am looking at life through sepia colored glasses

Or perhaps I am making up a whole different story in my mind and this story is nothing like what I am imagining. But whatever it is it is beautifully written and I am greedy for more.😃😃