(MG-SS)MLS SEASON 5(OBSCURE LOVE) THREAD 1 (PARTS 1-7)

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tania90

@tania90

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#131

loved the story nd maan is a killer nd he killed a girl nd saved geet nd now geet got to know tht he killed that girl wht will happen now waiting
nd do send me pm I am new to ur story

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mishtib

@mishtib

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Lovely start

Maan killed a girl one side n saved another one

How will geet come out from maans clutch ...

Now geet too came to know about maans doing...

Let's wait n watch...

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SGuru

@CuteTommy

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#133

nice part...

Geet was betrayed by someone and was sold at the bar for his debts...😲 how can a girl believe in a person who is far away in another country n whom she doesnt hav any connection n not met even once n doesnt know anything other than his name..

n she had come all the way without even informing her parents..

n Maan...hope he is an undercover cop as always...but he is killing a girl.. n tat makes me confused...

is MK going to securely make her reach her place or he is going to keep her as his captive???

waiting for the mystery to get revealed...

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Rashmi234

@Rashmi234

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#134

superb start
geet is tricked by some online frnd
geet seeking help from maan
now maan is helping

waiting fr nxt

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

awesum start...OMG!!!geet trusted an online frnd and came to India frm Canada...maan helped geet out frm one mess but she landed in other with him...continue sooon

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Tanuoberai

@tanuoberai

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Nice part awazing dekte hai ab maan geet ko kaha le jata hai waiting for next part update soon dear

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Almina shaikh

@almin25

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Ohwww ohww sabse pehlee solly dii 😔
GC ka birthday tha do din se I was busy in trending for him 😊
nxt time ill reply soon,Solly once again 😊
ohoo what an update dii,pehla hi update itta intense,secret wala hai toh aage ka ki hogaa abhi se hi main soching 😳
poor geet kha fass gayi fb ke jhote love main,nd on top of it that idiot boy,using her to get saved frm those ppl 😔
maan did save her,par aage ka hoga??
Cz use pata chl gya mk ne kiya hai khoon 😲
Waitinggg dii for the nxt one
thankuu dii for the pm
waiting for RM tooo 😊
hope ull update all soon 😉

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#138

loved it

did Maan actually killed a girl or its a decoy

n Geet is such a fool she flew from Canada to meet an online friend is she nuts n that to without informing anyone

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saf24

@saf24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Superb start to this one and would love to continue getting pms. Loved the first interaction between Maan and Geet and I was glad he chose to stay quiet and help her out of the restroom. Always liked how alert he is and that comes accrosss quite nicely when he makes it known that she is following him. Fab job and looking forward to what is in store next.