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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
sweet surprise

but u don't give link😭


like the concept

welcome in world of writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Its Fab Taahir !!!

Package ...must be human right
Characters ...Awesome

Waiting Buddy For Your Update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Awesome concept...
lively characters in teen...
looking forward to read it...please do pm me😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1

The Handa Villa was buzzing with preparations for Geet's Farewell Party , her parents were very proud of her and this was just one way to show her while her Shamila Bhabhi was very sad she could already feel the emptiness seep into her .


In Barbados Radhika Mehra and Quintin Scoff decided they would be Business partners and had a mutual understanding that neither one of them will betray the other as they deals were high risk and dangerous and needed trusted people . they had heard about the Handa family and gathered all the information they could about each member and now Quintin Scoff had to attend the Farewell Party of the "Princess"


Hours later Shamila walked out her bedroom looking Beautiful in an evening gown and it would have really been impossible to tell that she is pregnant her husband Jeet met her at the bottom stair smiled and said You Look Beautiful and murmured to himselfeven more beautiful than my dreams , As Jeet held his wife he received a phone call and left to attend the call telling his adorable wife to head to the Limousine as she walked her gown hooked onto the Mermaid Statue and she tripped falling down to the ground with a huge scream .


Geet who was also coming down saw her Bhabhi on the floor crying out in pain and she went blank she did not know what to do but hearing footsteps she came back to her senses and rushed to her Bhabhi while her Bhai followed shortly been shocked seeing his wife on the floor bursting with panic Jeet screamed at Geet asking her
"What have you done to my wife how could you do this , whats wrong with you "


Geet shocked that her brother actually thought she could harm her Bhabhi but kept quiet knowing that he is in panic state


The House Steward had already called the ambulance when Shamila had fallen and he called the Nurse Maid to come and attend to Shamila while waiting on for the ambulance The Emergency Unit rushed their way into the Villa and attended Shamila telling everyone they need to call in an Emergency Helicopter but Jeet told them they have one if she can be shifted until the Helipad than they can get to the hospital immediately , The Emergency Medical Unit lifted Shamila carefully placed her on the stretcher so that they could escort her to the hospital via the Helicopter within 15 mins Shamila was in the Emergency Operating Theater


Restlessness and Helplessness was filled the air as both Jeet and Geet waited for any news on Shamila

Geet's parents had asked her to come to the Venue and once people Congratulate her than she can leave again to the hospital , she did not want to go there it was baseless having this farewell party while her Bhabhi was fighting for survival but than she was surprised when Jeet hugged her and told her to go as her Bhabhi is still in Theater , Geet wondered if her brother had forgotten he accused her or he really did not want her at the hospital

Eight Hours later the Doctors came out of Theater telling the entire Handa Family that Mrs Shamila Handa had given birth to a baby girl but the baby is very Premature and extremely weak as the baby was born before 26 weeks the Doctor also told them that the baby is at high risk but will need 24/7 natal care Jeet and his parents wanted to know for how long the baby will than stay in hospital and the Doctor said again the baby is Preterm meaning she is extremely weak her stay at the hospital will depend on her gestational age that is how well she develops and if no other health issues arises but they should pray and keep faith .

Geet than asked how her Bhabhi was doing and that is when all realized after hearing about baby they had forgotten to inquire about Shamila but the Doctor told them that she slipped into a coma and they not sure how long it would take for her to revive into her senses , Geet was devastated so was Mrs Rano Handa while the men did not show any emotion on how they actually felt .


Sitting lost Geet's mind took her back to the Party , she was very upset with her parents but could not go against them too as her father proudly announced that his daughter +A Student with grading of 5.22 the Highest grade the country has ever seen and now she will be leaving to USA to do her Juris Degree/Doctors of Law . Champion bottles popped as if on cue , hand claps and laughter filled the air , she waited for her parents signal to leave but that did not come instead the Band Group announced the floor is open to dancing she hated been there and wanted to leave just Quintin Scoff made his way to her asking for a dance she politely refused and said she has to leave urgently his entire demeanor changed as he took her refusal as an insult ...







Edited by taahir004 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1...geet's bhabhi love her... She fell down from the stairs ... How can her brother blame her and then seconds later be so calm as nothing happened... Geet was hurt ... Didn't want to leave her bhabhi in this condition... Mehras were planning against handas.. These people are behaving weirdly...
Edited by doll.12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Will Update in a while
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004


Will Update in a while

Okk... 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Amazing update.
Loved it so much.
So the love story is hopefully going to kick start.
Tfd pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: _Ms.Funnybee_

Amazing update.

Loved it so much.
So the love story is hopefully going to kick start.
Tfd pm.



That Will Take a while 😆

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