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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#711

@sohpiexxx - honestly, i have never been to that part of the world. so i am taking my writer's liberty. but now that u have mentioned its ur place, somewhere it scares me to venture there😕

--> did i manage to scare you off again, i promise i don't look like this

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or is this your payback for my 😕 expression last time 😆
any who let me ensure you you'll like it especially in west Yorkshire, primarily Leeds and Skipton have amazing freindly people, especially with it coming from a Mancunian (me) we're a very sarcastic bunch 😆

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Sudha

@babelicious

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#712

Thanks for updating so regularly. It makes us follow the story closely... Such lovely updates. Have a lot of questions regarding how their past proceeded and wht made her lose sight. Very nicely written story. Looking forward to more updates

Edited by ms.nautanki - 9 years ago

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#713

Awesome and beutiful part..
Past ma puri family vacation ka liya gaya hai and sab ek saath hai time spend kar rahe hai and geet dev ko uska love life ma help kar rahi hai uski gf ko agree karna ko jo angry hai and msk ko sab pata hai aur maaneet ki closeness sa dev doubt karta hai maan ko puchta hai toh maan geet ko apne gf kehta hai ya suan kar geer shock hai kyun ki maan unka relation ko ek name dia hai and maan geet ka silent language samjhta hai and geet ka dil ko jaan kar usa surprise vi karta hai par uski family na geet ko shock de dia hai rishi ko wanha bula kar pata nahi maan ka reaction kya hoga
Present ma naina ka ane par geet khush rehti hai and maan naina ko tease kar ka pareshan karna ma laga hai and maan geet ko confident dekha rahi hai jo apna aap ma manage karna sikha rahi hai akela and maaneet thoda romantic ho rahe hai par geet ka ankho sa ansu aa raha hai wo apne wish and dil ki chaht maan ko kehna sa hichkicha rahi hai yasha kyun...
Waiting for next part..
Do pm me please...

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POULOMI22

@POULOMI22

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#714

a devil r u to leave us with that😆

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ankita

@ankyyy

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#715

Awesome update...

Maaneet were so happy in the past...

I was somewhere thinking that when Dev would be liking geet only but thank god that didnt happen...

Maan finally named their relation and called geet his girlfriend in front of dev...

But their mother's seem to have chosen a guy for geet and I really don't know how will maaneet react to it...

I loved maan and naina's scene and it was really cute to see them fighting like kids...

Naina's coming has really made geet a lot better and I hope to see her old version soon...

Updateee soonn

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#716

Awesome pt

dev realized masn geet comfort eith each other and he question maan about what relation he share with geet snd

he told his bro she's his gf

maan playing with naina snakes and ladder and maan irritating her and enjoying hr reaction

maan saw geet wearing hr old clothes heblost in hr looks

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#717

finally maan confessed that geet is his GF😊 so cute and dev let out his secret
but who is this Rishi now 😲

what is it with geet and maan i understand they are married ah! so much mystery 😊

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#718

Chapter 13 ...

Past is so dreamy...

Geet was totally awed by the place ... maan did feel happy to see her like this ... later on... while talking to dev maan and geet were comfortably sitting in each other arms making dev suspicious about them and he questioned him .. And yes.. maan told him that she is my girlfriend giving name to their relation.. LOVE ... dev told all about his love and they are very happy ... maan pulled geet out for spending some time.. there geet kissed him on cheek ... sweet .. but afterwards it should be somewhere else .. ok?? Hehe.. her mother and aunt were excited and behaving oddly ... that's when ... someone knocked on door and geet opens just to see a very handsome man standing there.. oye hoye... what gonna happen?? ..

Present .. geet is all lost ... and maan teasing her sister ... maan was really happy to see his wife standing up and trying to walk by herself ... kiss was heavenly beautiful... whom she was lieing ?? He knows everything. ... she wants him ... he can feel it .. u ended it on wrong ... update soon

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#719

Pheww read Chapter 7-10 as well 😊

Wow this story is inspired from your parents story ..your parents really have very interesting story to share 😃

So much happened in 4 chaps going with past n present ..for once i though in past MG coming close & in present they are drifting apart (atleast from geet's views) but this 10th chapter proved it wrong ..

So many questions to get answers for ..when MG got married, what happened with geet, why geet felt maan is drifting apart from her ??

hoping i'll get some answers is remainging updates 😊

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#720

Fantastic updates !!

MG's closeness increasing both in past n present ..& nothing can be hidden dadima, she caught maan-geet's chori-chori mohabbatein ..whole party sequence was really nice, maan's own style of inviting geet as his plus one 😉 & their dance n talk about their feelings ..

so dev finally also opened up about his secret love-story with priya 😊 ..but looks like MG needs to wait to reveal about theirs since currently both mothers invited 'Rishi naam ka haddi' in between them 😛

And asuasul im egerly waiting to wait what happened in past ..how geet saved maan frm going in dark and all & whats the reason behind geets present condition ..