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hottyangel

@hottyangel

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#421

amazing update... loved maaneet moments..

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#422

Why does little Maan want to watch horror movies?😲

He is a little horror himself. Dusht Danav in training. Bacchi ko kitna dara diya.

But somewhere the evil kid inside me is giggling at his antics.😆

Bachpan mein dosron ko darane ka maza hi kuch aur hota hai😛

It happens so that you find a certain place around you where you could safe keep your world, where you are not scared to be yourself and be able to express your innermost self so freely. And that was perhaps their bakula tree, their safe haven!

I loved these lines. Under the Bakul is where their real world revolves.The tree is their anchor and their place of solace.

I like where they are right now, but I feel they are complacent, especially Maan. There needs to be some kind of curveball that is thrown at them that will add even more depth and dimension to their love story.

Waiting eagerly to see how you will progress from here😳

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#423

Awesoome one,,,suuuper exciiited to read more

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#424

Awesome n lovely part. .

Fb of their childhood n dadi's birthday party was cute... maan geet n witch scene was kinda funny

N present scenes are also amazing

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#425

Lovely part... Maaneet fb was funny yaar.. Who don't like sounds of music... My favourite yaar.. Maan don't like it..geet reminded maan about dadi birthday... Dadi sense the changes in maaneet relationship... Maan had a stressful day n wanted to stay near the office to avoid the extra stress n geet sad to hear it.. Can't wait for next part.

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#426

Amazing update. Lovely past moments of celebrating Dadima's birthday, watching 'Sound of The Music' and many chocolates and cookies. Geet and Naina sleeping in Maan and Dev's room. Maan scaring Geet by becoming a witch and taking a pledge from her of not watching this movie again and not singing that song of this movie. In present also it is Dadima's birthday and Maan forgets it. Geet make him remind and asked to come early. But he is late. When he went to Dadima's room, Geet is there watching same movie and singing same song that he hated most. Maan told Geet that he is shifting to an apartment near his site as it is becoming difficult to travel so long everyday.

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soch_ti

@soch_ti

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#427

Spellbound!
The way in which past and present are interlinked... its so magical...while reading I could actually see them. Words were like poetry. Oh! I love that tree...
Thank you. ❤️ 😊