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hottyangel

@hottyangel

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#361

wonderful update... possessive maan and innocent geet...

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#362

wow lovely breezful update..te way geet ki restless and wen she saw my maan her nervous and holding his hand like soothing him and my maan to feel peace with her was lovely bliss..te way my maaneet ki heart talks was lovely,.no words is need to confess they heart,their silent is enough..wat ever may be his possessiveness and wen geet asking him sory or my maan ki anger or naughtyiness..i love te update yar

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Aishwarya

@Drashtirocks1

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#363

Can't believe I am commenting on chapter 3 right now.. had read all the updates but just didn't get time to comment.. So now gonna make up for all the missing comments.

Chapter 3

Firstly I love all the flashbacks, Maan's innocent possessiveness and his way of showing his need for her.. her innocent submission to all his requests and demands and their innocent love. Its beautiful and fun.

He is no doubt stubborn but in no way does it come between his love for Geet. He was angry yet the only face he sought in the party was Geet's. He didn't want to acknowledge his feelings yet her hug and Geet's words made him confess that he missed her too...

You conveyed both their hearts desires and complaints, their love and their hurt beautifully.

Edited by drashtirocks1 - 9 years ago

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 9 years ago

#364

Lovely Part...😃 Super exciiited to see what s coming in the future updates...😃

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#365

Awesome part.. Maan apna aap par angry hai aur khud ko dard de raha hai lekin geet kaisa maan ka pain dekha sakta hai wo uska pain kam karna ka koshish kar rahi hai dono ek dusra ko pain ma nahi dekha sakta aur dono ka beach ka relation wo magic kya hai usa samjhana ki koshish kar raha hai aur hamari inncoent geet na phir sa maan ko angry kar dia dev ko importance de kar maan ko ignore kar dia aur geet ko maan ka possesiveness pasand hai lekin dev ka koi problem ma help karna ko maan ki wish puri nahi ki aur geet ab koi vi punishment ka liya ready hai maan ko mana na ko.. Precap Dewanna maan ka wait.. Waiting for next part.. Kya aap apne updates mujha pm kar sakti ho pleasee.. And Waiting for your new ff...

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#366

Lovely part... Maan is very possessive of geet expect 100% attention on him... The other side geet stuck with helping dev as a fren which provoke maan anger... End of the day geet love to pamper his possessiveness... The are soo deeply in love but can't name it... Pls cont soon.