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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#151

beautiful update

that was what i want to say reading it

geet lost in maans thought

finally she herself came infront of him

n their world stopped

she was w8ing for his one word n after making her cry he said it

he missed her

superb

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ankita

@ankyyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Awesome update...

Maan and geet both were being equally stubborn...

They both were away from each other for soo long and now when they got the chance to meet each other they are busy playing this stupid game...

But am glad that finally geet showed up on his birthday and they got to see each other...

The whole scene was described so beautifully and that conveyed actually what they both were going through...

Geet was so sad when maan didn't mentioned her name but this only gave them the opportunity to be together away from everyone...

Their hug showed how much they have missed each other all this while...

Updateee Sooonnn

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#153

a little confused with their behaviour..

they had such relation.

maan with his ego and geet being stubborn.

how much maan wanted to see her face but his ego didn't let him.

and finally she decided to show in his party.

told hoe much they missed each other ...

loved it..

awesome update

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#154

hi thanks 4 da pm n marvelous update! superbly written! Maaneet r so stubborn! Past well incorporated! she appears at his party! Maan happy! She greets him n they have a chit chat! Maan says he didn't miss her! she is sad! he then says he missed her so much! update soon

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vj2102

@vj2102

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Beautiful start.. Love their simple yet complicated relationship.

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#156

oh at last...both confessed they missed each other...

Geet come face to face ...Maan blown away...

beautiful mesmerizing update...

thanx for pm...

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..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Nice update...

Maaneetlicious... ❤️ finally they met.. 😳 after 3 days of Maan's arrival..

Their scenes of childhood are always like a treat to read.. I loved those kinds of scenes ❤️

Maan's confession that he missed her brought tears of happiness in Geet's eyes... How sweet ! 😳

Awesome read!

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#158

Beautiful.. Beautiful.. and Just Beautiful ❤️
I just love this kind of genre.. ❤️
Fairytale style,..I'm imagining geet as Rapunzel with long long hair 😉
And Maan as a royal Prince 😳
finally they met after 10 years and 3 days seperation 😳
Wow love that moment when she walked into the party n Maan was just gone lol 😳 😆
Aww that hug was so beautiful ❤️
Cont. Soon

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Interesting story.
Awesome update maaneet are friends from childhood.But sometimes maan behave so indifferently.. .Finally both r in each other arms . .Looking forward to read more...