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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Finally both r in each other arms .lovely update full of aishuness (he he new vocabulary ) I could feel u aishu behind every word of ur update
Mesmerizing Update.

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Awesome update their feeling was conveyed perfectly every word was like visualizing it in scene

Continue soon

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Cynthia

@Maaneet-Cia

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Awww!!! It was a sweet touching update Aishu!!

From the time he went away all she had been doing was waiting for him..

And this Maan always answered her with that stern negative reply...

'Nahi, Jasmine..' I like this dialogue a lot... Though it makes you feel hurt but it only shows the authority he has on her when he ends the dialogue with her name, Jasmine!!!

Finally she showed up at the party surprising him to an extent where he was completely bowled over her!!

Romantic dance and a brilliant update...

Thanks for the PM dear..!!!

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Wonderful part

As said maan avoided Geet he didn't come in front of her but he knew she was taking part in making arrangements for his birthday and welcoming party...finally Geet keeping her stubbornness aside came in front of him and he just stood still there looking at her all grown up and turning into a beautiful women. .dev and Geet danced and maan was thinking why she wasn't talking with him the way she was talking with dev...Geet and maan got the chance to dance together..Geet asked him whether he missed her not and maan answer made her hurt and sad...she left from there maan also came there and he fed her cake ...he agreed that he missed her and both hugged each other

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Hemlata

@nitika20

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Finally ..
Geet Princess Maan leaving their ..
anger ..
uff .. Jasmine ne at last Apna Face dikhaya Maan ko...
Hehehe ..
Why Maan didn't said he missed her the most ...
Geet cried ...
but They talk ..
thoda sa hi but for now .. Its okay ...
Update next part soon...

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

amazing update maan is so stubborn

finally they meet

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Lovely update

Waiting for next update. .

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Wow ye tho mere kind of story hoti ja rahi hai...

Bookmarking for now...

I don't think i would be able wait for the story to get complete... But ye wali poori ek saat padne me zada maza ayega!!😃

Do keep writing❤️

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Fabulous Update

Both Maan and Geet been stubborn staying away from each not showing each other their faces but finally Geet caved in but Maan too was wanting her to be there at his party he felt hurt and disappointed when he did not see her and the moment she arrived his world froze all he could see was his Jasmine
dancing with her and she ask if he missed her and when he says no she feels hurt she feels that she waited for him for ten years and he never missed her once but surprisingly he came outside and also fed her cake and both hugs both confessed they missed each other

Edited by taahir004 - 9 years ago