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Angeline124

@Angeline124

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Nice start

Wanna read more

So Maan is using her for child?

Do continue and pm me na

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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: love2_soma
jiss relation mein pyar nehi sirf physical need hai woh toot jaana hi sahi hai...geet ne sahi decision li hai...interesting starting...loved it very much... thank u very much fr d lovely update... eagerly waiting fr d nxt .continue soon plz...

thnx 4 comment

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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Angeline124
Nice start Wanna read more So Maan is using her for child? Do continue and pm me na

thnx 4 comment will try

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Awesome start.

so its just means for procreation for Maan and Geet want divorce.

eagerly waiting for the next and Maan's pov.

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

aha.. gr8.. Geet wants divorse...not wanted to carry with Maan's demand about son..😕

waiting for next update

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Awesome start..

Maan wants a son from Geet and Geet a divorce..

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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Jyoraj
Awesome start.so its just means for procreation for Maan and Geet want divorce.eagerly waiting for the next and Maan's pov.

maans pov wont be soon have to wait thnx 4 comment

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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Thank u all for ur likes n comments .Updated part 2 plz do read

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

OK.. U are an awesome writer😃

Now coming to the story...

U know when I was reading the first part... I was so stupid n was hoping geet would say I love you😆

N I was counting that i love you has only 3words then what could it be...🤣

N when I read the last line u can't imagine my reaction😲

But on the whole it was so well written!!👏

OK now the second part...

I thought u would update the whole story at a time... As you've mentioned... It's already written... That's the reason I didn't comment yesterday😛

Greedy reader I am😉

This maan has a complex character... Jyse bacha na ho microwave me rakha popcorn ho... Y THE BLOODY HELL THE POPCORN ISN'T READY YET!!😡

Idiot kahi ka🤣

Geet na mere pass option h na mai tumhe option dunga...😈

Typical husband!!🤢

Anyway... Waiting to know how u take the story further...

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

nice update ...
I don't understand this maan ...I mean what he want ..from his tlk it looks like he was forced to marry geet ..n now he want a boy ...
n geet she want a divorce but she still love maan ...she wants maan to believe her lie ...
want to know the past ..
continue soon...

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