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Part 43

New morning brings new hopes in life..today's morning was different for maan he welcomed the new day with new zeal..while getting ready in front of mirror..his mind was somewhere else..he wanted to confess his love to geet but his inner voice always blames him for geet's condition..her cold behaviour towards him was still fresh in his mind

He have realized how much pain he had unknowingly given to her.. he want to erase her bad memories related to him with new happy memories , so he thought before confessing he should make her feel special..he should make her believe that he genuinely loves her , she might have expected a lot from him and in his denial he had hurted her a lot but now he will fulfill all her dreams which she dreamed with him .. but first he wants to ask sorry from her for all his previous mistakes...but he want to ask it in some different way so that geet too can feel special but how is the main thing??

If he was asked to say a sorry to geet he would have simply gone to her and said sorry which he did previously but now he is doing it to make her feel special so it should be something like how boys do to impress their girlfriends..

Maan was totally inexperienced guy in this department he never had girlfriends nor he tried to impress girls in his teenagers..looking at himself in mirror maan pitied himself

Maan(st)- at least one girlfriend should have been there she would have made me learn something..what should I do now!! , maan was irritated with himself from half an hour he is standing in same position but not a single idea has came in his mind to make geet feel special.. at that same moment nakul knocked on his room's door

Maan- come in..

Nakul- good morning sir.. dadima is calling u for breakfast.., Maan looked at clock which showed 8:45 am that is he is late for breakfast..

Maan- hmm..coming..

Nakul left from there while maan was still wondering what to do..however he tied his tie and left to have his breakfast..

On Breakfast Table

Dadima, Vicky were having their breakfast silently while maan was thinking what to do.. he looked at his dadima and then he looked at Vicky

Maan(st)- should I ask dadima?? No maan not al all..she will tease me...should I ask Vicky..hmm he might be experienced in this department but then what will he think about me..and he might tell this to dadima too na..bad idea..

Here Maan was thinking whom to ask and whom to not when dadima noticed him , he was lost in thoughts not at all eating his food..she observed him closely but was not able to guess what's going in his mind... but maan and dadima were disturbed with vicky's voice..

Vicky- dadima kya hua why are u not eating ??

Dadima- ask this question to ur bro Vicky..

Vicky looked at maan while dadima hawk like gaze was already on him.. kyu maan why are u not eating??

Maan- w..what?? who said I'm not eating..

Dadima- hmm..that I can see ..dadima eyed his plate which was still filled with food..now tell me where are u lost?

Maan-l..los..lost..kya dadima aap bhi..

Dadima- accha!

Maan thought its better to go out from here before getting caught..so he hurriedly left to office saying he is getting late..

Vicky- weird! For the first time in my whole life I saw bro behaving like this..i'm sure there is something fishy..

Dadima- me too!

KC

Maan was so tired of thinking but still he was not getting anything appropriate..his restless mind was not ready to concentrate on any of the office work too..he thought fresh in mind with a cup of coffee ..he went to cafeteria to prepare a coffee for himself

All the office staff which were present there were shocked to see their boss preparing coffee for himself it was not a usual seen for them as before maan used to ask his peon to bring his coffee.. all eyes were on him only while he was busy in pouring his coffee from coffee machine , but the continuous gaze of his staff made him irritated and as a result he shouted on them

Maan-I don't pay u all for looking at me..get to work everyone! Hearing his roar everyone left from there in hurry..

As he was moving back to his cabin he heard two guys talking...

Guy1- I'm not able to understand this concept yaar..and they have used such technical words to explain it in this file I wish I could read this same concept in simple words..

Guy2-try to search it in internet..

Guy1- would it be available there??

Guy2- yes..on internet u get info about everything!

At this moment finally the bulb in maan's head lighted up..he immediately moved towards his cabin and opened his laptop..

Maan(st)- really maan ur brain has totally stopped working...smiling at his stupidity he connected his laptop with net and opened the google page.. now one more question came in his mind what words to type in the search bar..

Maan- how to make ur wife feel special... he typed it and pressed the search button..he opened the one of the searched sites and started reading it..the first option was to take her on vacation..not possible here she is she not even ready to have a proper talk with me ..vacation is too far..next option was surprise her on bed..reading the topic only made maan blush..he did not even read its contents as he already guessed what it may contain..he moved further but nothing helped him everything was over the top for maan ..it was not possible for maan to do such things for geet seeing their current situation..this net is full of junk..can't they suggest something normal and simple the only thing they suggest is this shit! He was fully frustrated when someone knocked on his cabin's door and came inside.. Maan was not in a mood to attend anyone at this time ..he didn't even say come in but looks like the person's luck was not with him today as he entered inside without hearing come in..but it was not his mistake he was habitual of doing this...so today he did same and entered inside..only to get out

Maan glared at him with full anger , poor adi too for a second thought he did some grave mistake..

Maan- did I call u inside adi??

Adi-n..no..si..sirr!

Maan(sternly)- then get out!

Adi- but..s..sir..

Maan- don't u heard me GET OUT!!

Poor Adi has to surrender in front of his boss and got out without saying anything..with hanged head adi came out and faced nishi who was waiting for him..seeing adi she moved to him

Nishi- adi sir..so when is the meeting??

Adi- meeting..which meeting??

Nishi- which meeting! Now only u said u r going to ask to schedule a meeting to discuss about mine and vicky's project to maan's sir and now..

Adi- oh! I'm sorry nishi..i don't think he is in good mood..wait for few more hours then I will try to talk again..

Nishi- what do u mean he is not in a mood ..what happened to him??

Adi- I don't know..saying this he left from there leaving behind a confused nishi..

Here in cabin maan eyes were gulled to his laptop screen finally he got something which was possible for him to do and seeing their current situation it looked appropriate to maan..

Maan- it looks okay..sending her fav flowers with sorry card will be good.. girls like flowers geet too might like it..this will be my first gesture for her.. a smile covered his face with this thought..but which are her fav's flowers roses?? Lilys?? Or something else ..i don't know..now what to do! Maan held his head in his hands in tension..at the same time nishi entered in his cabin after knocking.. maan looked up seeing nishi , he saw new ray of hope in her..

Nishi was saying something to him but maan's mind was thinking something else

Maan(st)- yes nishi! She is closest to geet ..she will surely know her likes and dislikes..should I ask her..there was bit of hesitation in maan whether to ask or not as he was never that open with nishi..maan don't lose the opportunity ask her for geet..so finally keeping his hesitation aside he was ready to ask..

Nishi was almost over with what she was saying..would it will be appropriate sir??

Maan who was till now in his own world just heard this much only and nodded his head in agreement , giving her a picture that he was listening to her..

Nishi- thank u sir..,saying this she was going to leave when maan stopped her, she turned back and looked at him..yes sir..

Maan- aa..woh..nishi..a..a..what's ur fav flowers?, after blurting it out maan realized what mistake he did

Nishi- what??

Maan-I mean which flowers geet like??

Hearing geet's name , nishi attitude which was till now calm and compose changed completely and unknown emotion covered her mind..

Nishi-why are u asking this??

Maan-that's personal..i just.. but nishi cut him in between..

Nishi- I don't know and I don't think a person who don't even care about my sister should ask something like this!, her tone was accusing maan..

Maan- see nishi I know I was wrong but I'm trying to.. but nishi cut him in between again

Nishi- don't even try ur every action will give her pain only!

Maan-tum..

Nishi- I haven't came here to discuss my sister's personal life ..i came here for professional matter..its over now! Glaring him she left!

Maan- weird! She don't even want to hear me out!

Taking a deep breath maan again concentrated on his matter and thought , he himself will go and select a bouquet for geet and send it to her address.. He was going to enter in lift when he encountered Vicky in the way who was in hurry,seeing his bro going outside he stopped him..

Vicky- bro!

Maan looked towards him

Vicky- bro..where are u going now??

Maan- Vicky if u forget then let me remind u this is office !

Vicky bowed down his head as he realized his mistake..

Vicky- sorry bro..i mean sir..actually I wanted to ask after 15 minutes we have a meeting scheduled then where are u going??

Maan- which meeting??

Vicky- meeting regarding mine and nishi's project ..she informed me that she came to meet u in ur cabin and talked about this matter..u even agreed for this meeting then now??

Maan then realized for what she came in his cabin and he without even listening to her properly nodded his head in approval..

Maan- a..vicky I wouldn't be able to attend this meeting do one thing u both discuss everything with Adi !

Vicky- but sir..

Maan- Vicky ..no arguments now..i have some other urgent matter to handle now !

Vicky- office work se jaada kya urgent ho gaya inke liye!

Flower shop

Maan was surrounded by all kinds of flower in the world..every flower has it own specialty which was making maan more confuse which to select..confusion was clearly visible on his face..seeing his confused state the owner of the shop which was an elderly lady came to him and asked..

Lady- sir do u need any help??

Maan- no..

Lady - okay sir.., the lady was going to leave him when he stopped her..

Maan- wait..can u please suggest me some flowers which a..a.

Lady - do u want to gift it to ur lady love??

Maan- ..yes..

Lady- then u should give her flowers of her choice..

Maan- I don't know her choice..that's why I'm confuse..

Lady-oh new love. She giggled a bit , which embarrassed maan. Don't worry young man I will help u..give this red roses to her..

Maan- roses??

Lady- yes every girl love roses..

Maan- she is not an ordinary girl she is different so she might like some other flower..

Lady- oh ho...interesting but for a safer side give her roses only as majority of girls like them..

Maan- hmm..thank u!

Lady- my pleasure young man ..the lady smiled at him and was going to leave when maan again stopped her..

Maan- mm..can I get a sorry card along with them..

Lady- sorry card??

Maan- yes..woh I..

Lady -its okay dear..i'm sure ur this sweet gesture will surely melt her..come with me..the lady showed him many sorry cards , he selected one for her..attach this one..

Lady- won't u write something??

Maan- so many things are already written on it then what should I write??

Lady- these printed words won't touch her heart , its ur words which will touch her.., the lady gave him pen and left to attend other costumers..

Maan thought for a while and then wrote..geet.i don't know what exactly to write..but..please forgive me and give me a chance please- Maan..he looked at his note then cut out Maan and wrote Yours Maan..

He moved to the counter paid the bill and left to geet's apartment , keeping the bouquet at the door he left hoping to get at least one reply from geet...

Late evening

Yash was back home after the tiring day at office as he reached at his door he saw a bouquet of beautiful roses kept his door step , he picked it up

Yash- wow beautiful ..he saw a sorry card hanging with it , he opened it and read..oh maan bhai sent it for geet.. good meera is making geet learn how to drive a car now ..i will keep this bouquet in her room , she will get surprised seeing them!

Finally meera and geet were back..yash saw them

Yash- so how much geet learn today??

Meera- yaar I must say she grab things so quickly ..i'm sure in 2-3 days she will learn driving too..

Geet- I'm not that good ..i don't even know how to park a car till now!

Meera- that's the last step ..phele driving toh seekh lo!

Yash- okay girls now go and fresh up ..baate baad mei kar lena..yash wanted geet to see that bouquet as soon as possible ..

Meera-hai hai jaa rahe hai..don't order us!

With that both geet and meera went to their respective rooms.. as geet entered inside her room the first thing came to her view was that bouquet of red roses , they were kept right in front of her on bed..her curious steps moved closer to them..the sorry card was hanging and it was open a bit ,moving more closer to it Maan's name was visible through slightly opened card..her steps halted at that moment only..her mind was in dilemma whether to accept it or not..

Geet(st)- don't do the same mistake geet..its not right! Closing her eyes in order to control her pain she grabbed the bouquet but as she grabbed it one of throne from the stem pricked her finger..

Geet- ahh..she looked at her pricked finger a drop of blood came out from it , her eyes filled with tear but contradicting her eyes a smile formed on her lips..these flowers too rejected me...

KM

Maan was lying on his bed looking at his phone expecting a reply from geet..but it didn't came..he waited..waited n waited...

thank you for reading it..

waiting eagerly for reviews..😊

Edited by ..Maroon.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update..
maan ki dimag ki bulb jali finally n woh geet ko manane ka idea search bhi kar liya net se ...Haye...bada cute lg raha tha usstym 😛
n he was behaving like a teenager ...hehehe...
but geet toh cold ho gyi ekdam ...so I would only say ..try harder Msk 😉
nishi she is confusing yr ...I seriously hope she is not feeling J hearing geet's name from maan's mouth 😕
thnx for the pm dear...continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update!!
Maan like a teenager thinking of what to gift to his Geet😉
Maan thought to ask NIshi but her reply was not soo good...kaam toh kiya hai maan ne aise
Maan bought flowers for Geet
but everything went in vein!!
thorn pricked her and she thought that it too rejected her :(
Here Maan waiting ..but no response from Geet
Maan babu..keep ur hard work!!!
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Awesome part poor maan do so much of research to ask sorry from geet but its not easy maan has to work harder waiting to see what will maan do next so update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update maan is in action to manofy geet but poor him doesnt know what to do but his first attempt is geet red roses n sorry although geet doesnt melt a bit so he have to try harder lovely update thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow. Maan trying different ways to apologies and ask for a chance. And geet even tho tempted is afraid of moving forward. And poor thing thinks even the roses are rejecting her. Maan babu you have to try harder
Love how distracted he is he should talk to dadi openly and ask her just because of experience and knowing geet she might have some solid helping the other hand I want him to try on his own

Waiting

Do not like nishi too much. Yes she is defending her sister but not looking T her sisters happiness lies with maan
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
maan is tryng 2 mend his mistake nd startd 2 wrk also bt geet is badly affectd by his rejection
waitng 4 d nxt part update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing Update
Geet has waited for Maan for years held onto his rejection as if it was her life
now that Maan has discovered his feelings for Geet he however cannot seem to wait
he wants to make her believe that this time both will work on the relation all he needs
is a chance , I've always wanted Geet to have self respect first than get strong and also
get serious about life and that is exactly what she is doing and now at the same time too
Maan has decided that he wants Geet in his life
it will first be difficult for her to believe he is serious at this stage she does not trust him
as she knows like always after a few days he will ask her to stay away from him
so maybe its time he really felt what Geet has felt all the years maybe than he will learn to respect her and than he can truly say that he loves her
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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan wants to geet to forgive him a give chance to their relations. Maan behaving like teeanger. Always adi will be bakara. Nisha is not ready to give maan details of geet. Yash ready to help maan idea from inyernet is rejected waiting now what maan will do.

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