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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 2

Adi threatened Sasha to keep quite...that's the only way to deal with her.
chura liya...the song that was played by Geet, it was as if the feelings of Maan resonated with it..and now Maan wants to propose Geet..will it go smoothly



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Posted: 9 years ago
It was told in Part1 that Sasha n Adi belong to Geet's place.So they know what happened to Geet


Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06

awesome update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...Maan is falling for Geet...😛...what dark secret of Geet are sasha and Adi are talking about and how come Sasha knows about it but Maan is unaware...😲...Maan asked Geet to play violin in the party to which she played by staring in his eyes...😉...Maan complimented her singing...😎...He confesses his feelings to his family...👍🏼...He decides to propose Geet and takes her to a restaurant by lying to her...😉😛...Geet becomes nervous...🤔...can't wait 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

It was told in Part1 that Sasha n Adi belong to Geet's place.So they know what happened to Geet



oh ok..I forgot...hmmm but I hope Sasha doesn't blurt it out to Maan...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
Loved it
all pic beautiful
continue soon
Waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
fabulous update...👏 👏 👏
Adi warned sasha to shut her mouth regarding geet's past in front of maan...
So maan was in love with geet...😎
Maan take geet for date ...😃 ❤️
Lets see how story going to unfold...
Curious to know about geet past nd geet's reaction on maan proposal or confession...
Continue soon ...
Thanks for the pm...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part two
Superb update
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am really thankful for supporting this very short story

The blooming rose Part 3

Maan took a rose flower and caressed her passionately.

She closed her eyes drowning in his passionate touch.

Pee Loon Tere Neelay Neelay Nainon Se Shabnam
Pee Loon Tere Geelay Geelay Hoto Ki Sargam
Pee Loon Hai Peenay Ka Mausam

She moved away from him.He caught her hand.

He came closer to her holding her by her waist.

pulled her closer.
M:I love you Geet.

She could'nt believe it.
He looked at her eyes deeply:I was tensed about your reaction.But now I have no tension.Because I can see love in your eyes for me.

She became emotional.

ere Sang Ishq Taari Hai
Tere Sang Ik Khumari Hai
Tere Sang Chain Bhi Mujhko
Tere Sang Bekraari Hai
Tere Sang Ishq Taari Hai
Tere Sang Ik Khumari Hai


He leaned towards her face and rubbed his face with hers.She closed her eyes drowning in the passionate romance.He blew air at her eye lids passionately.

She forgot everything in that passionate moment.

Tere Sang Chain Bhi Mujhko
Tere Sang Bekraari Hai
Tere Bin Jee Nahi Lagda, Tere Bin Jee Nahi Sakda
Tujhpe Hai Haare Maine Vaare Do Jahan, Kurbaan, Meharbaan, Ke Main Toh Kurbaan
Sun Le Zara, Tera Kurbaan


Suddenly she came back to her senses and moved away from him.
Geet was upset:No Sir...
Maan was shocked:What happened Geet?

G:Sir...I am sure that you might have heard a lot of bad things about me.
M:I won't deny it.Initially I believed it and was even angry with you.I am sorry for that Geet.
G:No sir.Don't say sorry to me.I don't deserve either sorry or love from you.

M:Why are you talking like this Geet?
G:What do you know about me Sir?You just know that I am an Anglo Indian and is living with my parents.What else do you know?
M:Geet...I don't care about your back ground.
G:You should know more sir.My dad is bedridden after a stroke.I am working hard to make money for his treatment.
M:Don't worry.I will give him the best treatment.
G:There is one more thing Maan sir.2 years back I gave birth to a baby.
Maan was shocked:What?
Geet was crying:Yes Sir.I know that you hate me now.
M:How could you think that I will hate you that easily?I loved you with all my heart.I can't hate you like that Geet.

Hosh Mein Rahun Kyun Aaj Main
Tu Meri Baahon Mein Simti Hai, Mujh Mein Samayi Hai Yun


Geet looked at him in disbelief:Why don't you hate me?
M:Because I know that you are innocent.
Geet became emotional seeing his faith in her.


Jis Tarah Ki Koi Hum Nadi, Tu Mere Seenay Mein Chupti Hai Sagar Tumhara Main Hoon


M:Where is your child?
G:I don't know sir. ...my pregnancy...
He kept his finger on her lips.

M:I don't want to know more about your past Geet as I don't care about it.

Geet was emotional.
M:I will help you to find your baby.
Geet became sad:No need Sir.
M:Why?
G:There is no use of searching.
M:But why?
Geet's eyes got filled with tears:Because I am an unfortunate mother who does'nt have the luck to be with my own child.
M:I can't understand anything.
G:Maan sir...certain things are difficult to understand.So it's better not to explore it.So I myself has dug it.
He held her hand:Anyways all I can say is whatever your pain I want to have share with you.I will always be with you.
Geet became emotional.

G:Maan Sir...I will tell you everything about my past.

M:I told you already Geet.No need of knowing anything about your past .I don't want to hear anything about your past.I don't want to know anything about the man of your past.I can't bear it.For me I am the only man involved in all your life.I am that possessive about you.

Geet's eyes got teary:How can you love me so much Sir?
He smiled.

Pee Loon Teri Dheemi Dheemi Lehron Ki Cham Cham
Pee Loon Teri Saundi Saundi Saanson Ko Har Dum
Pee Loon Hai Peenay Ka Mausam

M:Will you marry me Geet?

She nodded smiling.He embraced her in excitement.

Tere Sang Ishq Taari Hai
Tere Sang Ik Khumari Hai
Tere Sang Chain Bhi Mujhko
Tere Sang Bekraari Hai
Tere Sang Ishq Taari Hai
Tere Sang Ik Khumari Hai
Tere Sang Chain Bhi Mujhko
Tere Sang Bekraari Hai-



Maan went back home.
Savitri:Did you talk to that girl?
M:Yes.And she said yes.
All were very happy.
Dev and Naintara clapped hands.
S:Now give me her details.
M:I have invited her for the Diwali celebration.She will be coming here.Meet her directly.
S:Can't wait to meet her.

Diwali day...
Maan brought Geet home.Savitri came.
M:Dadimaa,this is Geet Rose.Your daughter in law.
Geet blushed.

Geet touched her feet.Savitri blessed her happily.
S:Maan's choice is perfect.You are very nice beta.
Savitri kissed her forehead.
Geet smiled.
M:Dadimaa...where are the others?
S:Your bhabhi is busy making arrangements and Kavita is sleeping.Your bhaiyya is getting ready.Geet beta...wash your hands and come.This is your first visit.I will give you Diwali sweets made by my hand.
M:Dadimaa is an expert at making sweets.
Maan showed her the washroom.Geet walked to the washroom.
On the way she bumped into Dev.
They both saw each other and got shocked.
G:Devji!
Dev:Geet!You...here?

G:I came with Maanji.We both are in love.
Dev was shocked.
G:You are Maan's brother?
D:Yes.
Geet is shocked.
D:Did you tell Maan about me?
G:No.
Dev was relieved.
G:I wanted to tell him.But he refused to listen to my past.

D:Geet...I swear...I have no problem with your marriage with Maan.I am happy for my brother that finally he found his soul mate.I will never try to destroy his happiness.

But Geet...I request you not to tell anything to Maan.Please don't tell him that your child's father is none other than his own brother.I won't be able to face him.Tell Geet,will you tell it to Maan?
Geet was numb.Her eyes were full of tears.

They heard someone's voice from behind and turned back only to get a shock.

Edited by jasminerahul - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update dear geet try to tell him her past but Mann told him that he is not interested in it and told that he will find her daughter Mann brought geet to mention and daddi is happy they geet met with dev he told that to not reavil to Mann that geet baby father is him
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update with great twists
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update. .

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