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congrats on your new story...
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Part-1
No wonder sasha was wrong to spread rumors about Geet but why did maan need to trust on every word she speaks against geet? He could have confirm the news first with adi since he was the one who recommended geet for that post
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interesting update dear...sasha brainwashed maan about geet...but the mu soon cleared...
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amazing . so geet got job in kc. Maan was very impressed with her.He shouted on her. IWaiting for next dear.

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Story soumds interesting and lovely CS.
Looking forward for it 😊

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Nice update...
Maan appointed Geet as his PA and felt an instant attraction.
Shasha filled Maan's ear against her and he shouted but Aadi made him understand and Maan stops Geet from tearing the papers though he didn't aplolgise to her and also give a good dose to that Sasha 😊

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Hope jaldi geey maan ki best employee banygi
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nice ud
sasha plan gets flop
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I am really grateful to u all 4 this surprising response.

The blooming rose Part 2

Thanks to KINGKHANFAN for the Maaneet red dress pics.

Sasha was getting irritated seeing Maan and Geet together.
S:How dare she is always hanging around Maan Sir?This is her character.
Adi got angry:Sasha,control your tongue.First you talked rubbish about Geet to Maan Sir.You got nice firing too.Still talking ill of Geet?
S:Adi...you know very well that I am not lying,You know about Geet very well.What wrong did I say about Geet?Tell.

Adi became dull.
Adi:I agree that there was a dark incident in Geet's life.But just because of that you can't call her a call girl.
S:Stop supporting her Adi.Truth can't be changed.If Maan Sir comes to know the truth he will throw her out mercilessly.
Adi became tensed.
Adi:Sasha,promise me that you won't say anything to Maan Sir.

S:Why should I promise you?
Adi stared t her:If you can't understand when I say something calmly understand that I can even throw you out from here as I am very close to Maan Sr.So better you keep your mouth shut.
Sasha became nervous.
S:Sorry Adi.I promise...I won't tell anything to Maan Sir.
Adi:Ok.But if you say anything to Maan sir..you will know the after effects.
Adi thought:If Maan Sir comes to know Geet's past how will he react?His temper is uncontrollable.How will Geet prove her innocence?
Sasha thought:Even If I say the truth to Maan Sir he won't believe me.Then why should I waste my time in that?

3 months passed.Maan's attraction towards Geet is on high level now.
Geet came and submitted the file.

M:Is everything is included in the file?
G:Yes Sir.All the details are included in the file.

M:Good and I just asked for a formality.I know that you will do everything the way I expect you to do.I trust you Geet.
Geet looked at him happily.
Geet was about to go out.Suddenly her duppatta got stuck in Maan's chair.

G:What happened?
She turned back.She saw the duppatta being stuck upto his chair.She came towards the duppatta with nervousness to take it back.But she slipped .Maan held her by her waist.

But she ended up falling on Maan's lap.

mere paas hai, mere paas hai tu mere paas hai
mere paas hai tu mere paas hai
mere saath hai,mere saath hai

He held her tight preventing her from falling down.
They got lost in each others eyes.

Mahi...Mahi...

tera naam maine liya hai yahan
mujhe yaad tune kiya hai wahan
tera naam maine liya hai yahan
mujhe yaad tune kiya hai wahan

Their eye lock deepened as if they both wanted to drown in each others eyes.

bade zor ki aaj barsaat hai
bade zor ki aaj barsaat hai
mere paas hai tu mere paas hai, mere paas hai tu mere paas hai
mere saath hai, mere saath hai

G:Maan Sir...

They both broke their eye lock.They were embarrassed with their present pose.

Slowly she got up from his lap though in his mind he wished she had'nt got up from his lap.
Maan removed the duppatta from the chair.Maan and Geet looked at each other.

He extended her the duppatta.


She looked at his face:Sorry Sir.And thank you.

Slowly he put it around her shoulder.She was shy.

mere paas hai tu mere paas hai, mere paas hai tu mere paas hai

M:I did'nt do anything to say thank you and you did'nt do anything to say sorry.
Geet remained silent.
M:Geet...Adi said that you play violin and guitar very beautifully.You used to take violin guitar classes for kids?

G:Yes.But later I stopped teaching violin them and guitar.

M:Why?
G:Violin and guitar are my passion.But unfortunately I left that job to join for a new job as with the less salary I was not able to manage my household activities.


M:Oh!Geet...I know you are desperate to pursue your hobby.I will fulfill your wish.As you know tomorrow we have a small get together in our office.You should play either violin or guitar.
G:But Sir...

M:Will you?No one disobeys Maan Singh Khurana.
She smiles:I won't disobey you Sir.I will do that.
He smiled.
They shared a sweet eye lock.

mere saath hai, mere saath hai
mere pass hai, mere pass hai
mere saath hai, mere saath hai
mere pass hai, mere pass hai(Taal).

(I could'nt stop myself from using this song for this story.Because in the serial Swararagam,they played a bit of this song's instrumental music for the scenes of the Hindu guy and the Anglo Indian girl)


The next day's get together function...
All were dressed in trendy clothes though it was just a small get together.Geet came in red frock

She looked the prettiest.Maan was lost in her beauty.

M:Geet...did you forget your promise?

Sasha and Adi:Promise made by Geet to Maan Sir?
Geet who remembered him asking her to play violin or guitar became nervous.
G:But Sir...
M:Nobody refuses Maan Singh Khurana.Do you have the guts to disobey me?

G:No Sir.I will keep my promise.
M:Then do it silently.
G:Sorry sir.I can't do it silently.
M:What?You have the courage to disobey me?
He was irritated.
Sasha smirked while Adi was upset.
Adi:Oh Maan Sir's anger is uncontrollable.
G:Music can never be silent.Then how can I do it silently as per your wish?

Maan was embarrassed.
Geet couldn't control her smile:I can never do music silently.

Everyone including Adi laughed.
Adi:This Maan Sir...sometimes you are so funny Maan Sir.
Maan stared at Adi.Adi who got scared of his anger suppressed his laughter.


Geet smiled and took out a guitar from her bag.She started singing beautifully by playing guitar.

Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko, najar nahee churaana sanam
Badalke meree tum jindagaanee, kahee badal naa jaana sanam
Oh le liya dil oh hai meraa dil, hai dil lekar mujhako naa behlaana
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko, najar nahee churaana sanam
Badalke meree tum jindagaanee, kahee badal naa jaana sanam

Unknowingly her eyes got fixed on Maan while moving her lips as if he was singing it for him.Maan smiled.

Bahaar banake aau kabhee tumhaaree duniya me
Gujar naa jaaye yeh din kahee isee tamanna me - (2)
Tum mere ho ho tum mere ho, aaj tum itana vaada karate jaana
Chura liya Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko,
najar nahee churaana sanam
Badalke meree tum jindagaanee,
kahee badal naa jaana sanam
Ho (sajaaunga lutkar bhee tere badan kee daalee ko
Lahu jigar kaa dunga hasin labo kee laalee ko) - (2)
Hai vafa kya iss jahan ko, ek din dikhla dunga mai divaana
Chura liya
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko,
najar nahee churaana sanam
Badalke meree tum jindagaanee,
kahee badal naa jaana sanam Le liya dil haay meraa dil,
hai dil lekar mujhako naa behlaana
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko,
najar nahee churaana sanam
Hm hm hm hm, hm hm hm hm...(Yaadon Ki Baraat).
All were immersed in it.
Everyone said:Truly beautiful Geet.IWe did'nt expect this much when Adi said.
She smiled:Thank you .
Adi:Yes Geet.Mindblowing.
G:Thank you Adi bhaiyya.
Geet looked at Maan whose opinion is the most important for her.He walked away silently.She became upset.Adi became dull.Sasha smirked.
Geet walked to the room Maan went.
Maan turned back:Why did you follow me?





G:Sorry Sir.But I wanted to know if I did wrong for which you ignored me and went away.
He took a paper piece which was folded and threw it down.Then he walked out.
Geet became upset:What happened to Maan sir?
Suddenly her eyes fell on the paper he threw down.
G:Why did Maan sir do like that?
She took the paper and unfolded it.She read it:The most beautiful thing in this world,your music Geet.You are really the combination of the beauty of music and fragrance of rose.

She was surprised.Suddenly Maan appeared before her.
G:Maan Sir!
He smiled.
Suddenly he put attitude and saidYou made fun of me in front of all.Right?I should do at least this much to scare you in return.Right?What do you say?

Geet smiled at him sweetly rolling her eyes on him.
G:Thank you Maan Sir.

He smiled sharing a sweet eye lock with her.

Mahi...mahi..

Naintara was running after her 2 year old daughter Kavita to make her drink milk.
NT:Kavita...stop there.
K:No mumma...no...
Dev laughed.
NT frowned at Dev:Dev...you are her father.You should also take responsibility.Go catch her.
D:Ok dear.


Dev caught Kavita.
D:Papa's dearest daughter...drink milk.
K:No no..
Savitri giggled:It's not easy to make Kavita drink milk.
NT:I know Dadimaa.Only Maan can do that.
Maan came.
NT:Finally Maan came.Maan..please make your pet Kavita drink milk.
Dev:Yes Maan.Please do that.We are tired running after her.
Maan smiled:Leave it to me.Kavita beta...drink milk cutie.
K:No chachu.
M:How can you say no?Chachu will say a cute story.
K:Really?
Kavita got excited.


Maan started saying a story.Listening to the story Kavita drank milk.
Savitri:Maan beta...I have to admit that you will make a great father.

Maan blushed.
Dev:But for that Maan has to get married.Right?Since how long are we trying to get him married?
NT:Maan..it's high time now.Get married soon.
Maan blushed:Very soon bhabhi.
All were sirprised.
NT:Means you are in love?
Maan blushed:Yes.
Dev:I can't believe that my unromantic brother is in love.
Savitri:Thank God..you made my Maan fall in love.I can't wait anymore.
M:But she is an Anglo Indian.Not our religion.
Savi:Maan beta.You know that I am not conservative.Religion is not an issue.Tell me who that girl is.
M:I can't reveal her name now as I am not sure of her feelings.I have not confessed my feelings to her yet.
Dev:What?That girl is unaware of your feelings for her?How stupid!Go propose her as soon as possible.
S:Yes.I want a new daughter in law soon.
Maan smiled.
NT:Don't be shy Maan.A sensible girl can't reject you.
He smiled.

All the staffs went home after the working hour.But Maan purposefully gave Geet more work to make her remain in the office,so that he can be alone with her.
Maan gave a cover to Geet.
M:Geet...you wear this and come with me.
G:Where Sir?
Maan said in his mind:It's better not to tell Geet that I am taking her for a date.She might refuse to come with me.
M:There is an offiicial party.You have to be presentable.That's why I gave you this saree.
G:Official party?But no one else told me about it.
M:Should anyone else have to tell you about it to believe it?You don't believe me?
G:Nothing like that Sir.I will wear this come.

Geet came wearing the saree Maan gave her.Maan was stunned to see her sizzling beauty.
He took her to a vacant decorated restaurant.
G:Maan Sir...no one is here.
M:Because I booked the whole restaurant.

G:But party?
M:There is no party here.I lied to bring you here.
Geet's heart beat fast.She started sweating due to tension.
G:Why did you bring me here Sir?





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