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Gudiyeet

@Gudiyeet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Maan impressed seeing Geet n give to her job

Maan scold geet get angry on her thinking sash a words adi explained to maan geet was innocent

Maan again went to meet geet told her he was testing her adi knows maan hide it real truth sash a was j seeing maaneet went to maan again told geet bad about her but maan warned her don't talk personal life nice update

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Kawan

@Kawan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

awesome update.

geet came for interview in Khurana's company..

she needed for her family but maan appointed her on her merit ...

Sasha made some story and told maan some rubbish about geet.

and that made him angry..he blasted on geet for no reason..

poor geet...

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

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Congrats for new story Jasmine, 😊

Will unres soon

Take care.

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#94

nice update...
maan appointed geet as p.a. ...but shasa she filled maan's ear ...how can she say something like that about anyone ? n if what she is saying is truth thn also she does not have any right to judege geet or anyone ..!!!
maan behvd with geet very rudely ...later he consl geet but did not apologize ...
want to know about geet's past...
thnx for the pm dear

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paru

@enthusiastic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

AWESOME UPDATE YAAR
THANKS FOR THE PM DEAR

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ammu5

@ammu5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Good start. ...sasha n hr useless tricks

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DreamyMadhu

@Dreamy30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Nice update... Waiting 4 d nxt prt.

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K.AJAY MANIKANTA

@ajay227

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Good start...But felt too rushing in terms of story telling...Umdirectly attacked to the point of attraction b/w leads with out any back up(I felt so)...May be d dragging effect of Indian TV!!!!I thought u will start up with intro of Geet and her family and like wise Mann...May be Geet's back ground will be revealed later!!!!But why did Sasha complained abt Geet's character in such a nasty way!!!!I mean nonody would be soo mean to point out someone as characterless unless there are glaring reasons!!!!Sasha's step is confusing for me!!!Good that Geet has a supporter in Adi...Mann getting attracted and later balsting Geet for minute reason, or due to his doubt in typical of a Angry young man we see in Indian love stories...So all in all, I am a bit confused with FF start up but eventually, I know u wil create d magic...May be some more depth to characters is needed, And I hope u will build up in d next parts...Thanks for d PM!!!!

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Actually you are right.The story is rushed.I had given the reason in my note which was above the update.This is a FS.Means it has only 5 parts.That's why the story is moving fast.So like my other stories there is no time to show the characters and their families in detail.😛

Originally posted by: ajay227
Good start...But felt too rushing in terms of story telling...Umdirectly attacked to the point of attraction b/w leads with out any back up(I felt so)...May be d dragging effect of Indian TV!!!!I thought u will start up with intro of Geet and her family and like wise Mann...May be Geet's back ground will be revealed later!!!!But why did Sasha complained abt Geet's character in such a nasty way!!!!I mean nonody would be soo mean to point out someone as characterless unless there are glaring reasons!!!!Sasha's step is confusing for me!!!Good that Geet has a supporter in Adi...Mann getting attracted and later balsting Geet for minute reason, or due to his doubt in typical of a Angry young man we see in Indian love stories...So all in all, I am a bit confused with FF start up but eventually, I know u wil create d magic...May be some more depth to characters is needed, And I hope u will build up in d next parts...Thanks for d PM!!!!

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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

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Posted: 9 years ago

#100

awesome os...⭐️⭐️⭐️...Maan gets attracted to Geet at first sight and after seeing her talents appointed her as his pa...😉...Geet was happy and came to join the next day...😎...seeing Maan with Geet, Sasha gets jealous and plays a ridiculous game by telling Maan that Geet is a wh**e...😲😡...Maan gets angry and scolds Geet for no reason...😒...Adi tells Maan the truth which made him guilty and he stopped Geet from leaving...👍🏼...but still Maan didn't apologize and instead made up an excuse...🤔...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...