Maaneet ss : My Shona ~~Epilogue2 pg-126 on 14th March - Page 53

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing updates dear, loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
maan abb toh samajh ja k princess aur shona ek hi hai...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey every one thanks for your comments and liking the story😃 Hope you will like this part as well😊 'The Proposal'😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 22.

Next day morning in office geet speaking on phone

Other side of phone(OP):"Sorry geetu,I couldn't come for pooja yesterday I was not in the town.I've reached now and first thing I did is to call you"

Geet"Koi baat nahi hota hai hota hai...waise when are you going to talk to your parents?"

OP:"kahan talking he didn't even proposed yet"

geet:"kya abhi tak propose nahi kiya? these guys na sabhi ek jaise hi hote hai"

OP:"kyu what happened to your story shadi kab hai?"

geet:"kahan yahan to abhi confession bhi nahi hua" she said sadly then added"acha I'll call you back I need to rush bye" geet gets herself involved deeply in her work.

during break, Arjun enters geet's cabin as she called him"toh Shona kya hua? why did you call me?did maan say some thing to you?"

Geet:"Not him it's about you. why you did not propose her yet?"

Arjun:"Wo..wo.."he was stuttering

Geet asks holding his hand" aapko dar lag raha hai?" to which he simply nodded.geet very sweetly says"I don't care I want you to propose her tday itself".Arjun recognised the threat in her sweet voice and said"Then I need to do a lot of preparations" geet happily hugged him and arjun left smiling out of her cabin.

After coming out of KC arjun gat a call from maan"Hello! I was about to call you only I need your help can we meet it's really important"

Maan:" even I wanted to talk to you then will meet"

arjun"O.K half n hour in axz cafe"and cut the call.

After half n hour in axz cafe, maan sat opposite to arjun both were tryint to speak to each other but were hesitating and both were nervous one was looking at other while other was loking some where else this was going on fr compete 15 minutes.then both at once looked at each other and gave a nervous laugh.Both together after a little peptalk with themselve taking a deep breath said in unision.

Both together"I'm going to propose"then both looked at each other and laughed loudly.

Arjun:"finally you got brains to propose Shona"

Maan:"what about you, after dating her for years you are proposing her now I'm better than you I'm directly proposing your sister".

Arjun:"Ya ya after loving her like since childhood you are proposing her now!".Maan was stunned and felt caught.

Maan:"leave all that tell me where and how are you proposing her?"

Arjun:"I don't know man I'm not like you who is planning all these since the age of 16, that's why I need your help".Maan was embaressed and both started planing for arjun's date.

Later in evening Geet gets a call "Hello"

Other person(op):"Geetu he called me for a date, he better propose me today else Im going to land up in his house to talk with elders in my home all are waiting for my only signal."

Geet:" I hope so too all the best".

As soon as geet kept her phone she got a parcel with anote attached to it stating

wear this and geet ready we have to leave to the party soon,

p.s my cabin door is open you can use washroom there,rest accessories are in the cabin, peon will open it for you I've said him to. Your's Maan.

Geet shyed seeing the sign as Your's maan ,opened the parcel there was off-white saree with red border, it also has all matching accessories.She quickly took it to the washroom and got ready (remember Ram went out of station).It was any way office hours to were finished until geet came out being ready the whole office was deserted except the peon.

When she came out peon asked"Geet ji aap bhot sunder lag rahi hain" Geet shyly smiled, then she said him to lock the door.When she climbed down a car was waiting for her to escort to the venue.

She from her car window saw that it entered Khurana Farmhouse, She got down then the driver left her on her own, she was a bit scared to stand alone with no one around but lights were on.She saw a path of rose petals leading somewhere.She saw a note with a rose which says'To Shona My Mishty'.

She followed the path for every few steps she saw a gift for her(remember his wardrobe is stacked with his mishty's gifts😉).The path led to the backyard where a beautiful white canopy was decorated with red flowers a combination of red and white beside the water fountain was looking etheral.

There was Maan in his black tuxedo looking hot and handsome as ever.He was arranging the whole of this,to make his first date with his mishty to be special.He selected her saree on his own and was waiting anxiously to see her in it, and oh my what an unfair image his mind gave him for the beauty standing in front of him.

He was so lost in looking at her that he didn't realise that she is standing in front of him lowering her eyes in shyness, her voice broke his trance.Geet was doumbfonded looking at the effort he had put to make this day so special for her.She was feeling very shy that he is staring at her unbashedly, so she inorder to start a conversation said " Koi party nahi hai? aap ne ye sab mere liye kiya hai?"she said blushing.

Maan without waiting a second bent on his knees catching her hand said"Mishty, I know I'm not good with words, but, I want to say you that I've completely and irrevocably fallen in love with you,I had feelings for you since childhood,which I know Arjun might have said you" they both chuckled at this statement."I didn't recognise my feeling for you at early but I always saw my future with you.When I saw you first, sleeping in dad's cabin my heart felt like you are my mishty My Dreamgirl". Her eyes widened heraring about it."You know How I wanted to talk to you to know you but you were busy all the time.you even spoke to dad but avoided me na?" she lowered her eyes at this. "Let's not go there so, Ms.Geet Handa, Shona My Mishty will you make me lucky enough to live the dream I've weaven with you for my entire live with you by my side?Will you marry me Mishty?"

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Edited by neasya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
most beautiful update
yipeee maan proposed his mishty in very romantic way
just fell in love with this
arjun n maan part is quite funny
waiting for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow super cute episode loved it tq for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...finally maan proposed her 😳
Cant wait for geet cinsent n their first date 😉
Bt who is arjun gf ...
Reveal it soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update both maan and arjun decided to propose
omg omg omg finally maan proposed waiting for geet reply
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful Update

Both Maan and Arjun have to propose their ladies
and Maan made everything so beautiful and he immediately ask Geet will she marry him

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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update. Maan finally proposed to his mishty😃

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