PYAAR KA NAZRAANA Epilogue 2,3 Pg. 40 - Page 6

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awesome dear congratulations for your new ff I'm sure this will be a ff not short ss...
maan loves a girl and from 6 years he is searching her...
geet leaves in manali and maan with dadima and yash landed their...
aur to aur dadima to landed in geet's cottage only... dadima to kitni fast nikli she already liked geet for maan and also asked yash's opinion on this...
maan is buying geet's company only nice...
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CHAPTER 3



ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, architectural terms,IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!


"Maan, calm down! Let me find out about Geet's marital and family status before you start wooing her!"

Geet came to Mr. Chopra's cabin and requested Maan and Adi to follow. Geet was going to make Maan & Adi sit in one car, and Geet & Pari in another car, when Maan said, "Ms. Singh, let Adi come with your secretary as I want to discuss some lay outs with you!"

Geet was hesitating when Pari insisted, "Geet Ma'am, I agree with Mr. Khurana. You have complete knowledge of plan layout as you have designed it!"

Geet finally sat in the car. Being close to each other were reviving their latent desires. The desire that both had buried in their hearts and both felt had died in span of 6yrs.! Maan using his extreme will power started talking about project layouts. His all questions were answered intelligently and professionally by Geet! Maan was impressed with Geet as an architect and a prospective boss! He was proud of Geet as his love was so good in her work! Only thing he could not understand that why such a bright and efficient architect was working in a hill-station earning only thousand of rupees where Geet could earn lacs in big cities i.e. Delhi, Mumbai etc. Maan, Adi, Geet and Pari surveyed all sites and met all the workers. As the four were far from main town, Geet suggested a "dhaba" for lunch. Adi and Pari were fine. Geet suddenly remembered that Maan was not comfortable eating roadside spicy and oily food! Geet forwarded a bag to Maan. "What is this, Ms. Singh?"

"Mr. Khurana, I think you are not comfortable having roadside dhaba's spicy and oily food! This is tomato-cheese sandwich and black coffee. "

"But why are you giving me someone's lunch? What will they eat?"

"You please don't feel guilty. It was my lunch as I was going for site visits and wasn't sure what time will I be able to have lunch. I had carried a snack. I know it will not completely satisfy your hunger but it can help till we reach the city! But now I'm having hot dhaba food which is my favourite!"

"Your husband is sure a lucky man! "

"Husband?" Then said in undertone, "I can never get married!"

"Here comes food!"Adi interrupted loudly, before the conversation goes in a wrong direction!

Everyone had lunch and left for Chopra Construction. On reaching Chopra Construction, Maan said, "Mr. Chopra, please ask all your staff i.e. Architects, Project Managers, Secretaries as well as workers i.e. labourers, masons, crane movers etc. to come at 10:00a.m. in the Main Hall tomorrow!"
Then Maan left with Adi from Chopra Construction.

Geet returned home exhausted physically and emotionally! When Gauri asked about dinner, she refused saying she had a heavy lunch and locked herself in her "secret room". The room where no one was allowed except Geet. She cleaned the room herself and didn't let Bhola, Gauri and even Sameera enter it!
"Gauri, aaj naa toh 25th Disambar hai aur naa 11 Agst hai. Aaj Didiji iss kamre mein kahe gayeen?" (Gauri, why has Ma'am gone in this room? Its neither 25th December nor 11th August today!)
"Tu kahe apna bhoosa bhara dimaak chalaa raha hai. Roti kha ke sowat hain!" (Why are you using your hay filled brain. Eat your dinner and sleep!)
Inside the room, all the four walls had Maan's photographs in all poses and attires. It started with Maan's photograph in Final Year of M. Arch till now. There were photographs of him recieving "Topper of his batch!"award, "Best Student of the Year!" Award, "Business Man of the Year Awards!" And many more i.e. Maan laughing with friends on a joke, Maan hitting a sixer, Maan imitating a teacher etc. Placed in centre of the room on a pedestal was Baby's Blue sweater, cap and booties. In one corner was a small bed for a single person to sleep! Geet sat on the bed with baby booties in her hand kissed them saying "DHRUV" and cried her heart out. When she fell asleep she doesn't remember. She woke up early morning, curled up in a foetal position on the bed. Geet came out of the room, took bath and had breakfast. Her eyes were still red despite of outlining with kohl !

It was 8am., in the morning. It felt like a hurricane hit the Hotel suite.
"Kya hua Maan beta? Aap dhund kya rahe hain?"(What happened Maan? What are you finding?)

"Dadimaa, ek toh pata nahi mai der mei kaise utta aur dusara mujhe Chopra Construction ki takeover file nahi mil rahi!" (I don't know how I woke up so late! On top of it I can't find Chopra Construction takeover file !)

"Aap ki shaadi ho jaaye toh abb bahu hi yeh sab sambhalegi! Hum aap ka yeh gussa aur "hardh-bardhi, iss umar mei hum aur nahi sambhaal sakte!"(Once you get married, your wife will handle your anger and this reslessness. I cannot handle your moods at this age!)

Geet reached two hours before the stated time. She got the Conference Room opened.



Asked Pari to put copies of all projects done by Chopra Construction in terms of architecture, budget, human resources etc. to be put in places of Head of respective Departments! Soon Mr. Chopra and the HOD's arrived. Mr. Chopra spoke to all HODs and gave them confidence of job security. At 09:45am, Maan walked in with Yash and Adi. He was introduced to all HOD's.
At sharp 10am, Maan spoke, "Namaste! Aap sab jaante hain ki kuch hafton baad Chopra Constructions, Khurana Construction mei badal jaayega. Magar iss badalaav se aap logon ki rozgaari par asar nahi hoga. Asar sirf unn workers par hoga jo aalasi (lazy) aurkaamchor(work-shirker) hain. Haan re-structuring zarur hoga, jiss se kuch log Manali se Delhi transfer honge aur kuch log Delhi se Manali transfer honge! Agar aap logon ka transfer nahi ho sakta kissi neeji kaaran se toh jald se jald bataa dijiyega! Main asha karta hoon ki hum sab ek parivaar ki tehara kaam karenge! Dhaniyavaad!"
(Good morning! You all know that after few weeks, Chopra Constructions will get converted to Khurana Constructions. But this change will not bring any loss of jobs! However, it will effect the workers who are lazy and work-shirkers! Yes due to re-structuring, few people will be transferred from Manali to Delhi; and few people will be transferred from Delhi to Manali! If you have any personal problem in moving out of Manali please let us know as soon as possible! I hope that we will work as a family! Thank you!")
There was a thunderous applause from staff as well as workers as Maan promised them that their jobs were secure if they were hard-working!

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CHAPTER 4

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS(if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, architectural terms,IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

After Maan's speech, few workers were waiting to meet Maan regards the transfer issue. Maan asked Adi and Yash to scan all the applicants on individual basis! In the line of workers waiting was Geet as well. Maan wasn't happy seeing Geet surrounded by males! He asked Mr. Chopra to call her to his room. When Geet came in Mr. Chopra's room, Maan asked, "Ms. Singh why are you waiting in the worker's line?"

"Sir, you had announced if anyone has problem in going out of Manali for work?"

"Yes?"

"I do have problem working outside Manali! I cannot work in Delhi. It is a Private and Personal reason!"

"Can I ask the reason? Is it only working in Delhi or any part of the World?"

"Sir I cannot work outside Manali! I'm owner of GK Apple Orchards and was only working in Chopra Constructions, so that my education is not wasted. By God's Grace, I'm financially comfortable. I'm willing to resign if you would like to post here someone more qualified and who doesn't have travelling issues !"

"Thank you for informing me Ms. Singh! I'll keep it in mind!"

Once all the workers were dealt with. Maan called Adi and said, "Adi, get hold our most trusted and reliable Private Investigators (PI). I want to know everything about Geet by tonight!"

"Maan, aren't you being implusive!"

"No I'm not there has been something major happened in these six years. Please yaar!"

"Maan calm down. I'll at once call PI."

When Maan returned to Hotel Suite, Dadimaa excitedly showed Maan Geet's photo on her mobile. Maan was taken aback for a minute. "Chaudavi ka Chaand hai na! Aankhe chaundhiya gayi na? Kitni sundar hai!" (Your eyes are startled by her beauty! Isn't she gorgeous?)

"Dadimaa, aap..."

"Yeh ladki humne aap ke liye chunni hai. Iska naam Geetika Singh hai!" (I have selected this girl for you. Her name is Geetika Singh!)

"Magar..."

"Agar-magar kuch nahi, iss Thursday, hum iss ke ghar aap ke saath jaayenge!" (NO ifs & buts! You are coming with me to her home after this Thursday!)

"Yeh aap ko kahaan mili?" (Where did you find her?)

"Mandir mei! Issi ne toh hummei sachet(conscious) kiya tha apne ghar le jaa kar! Yeh GK Apple Orchards mei rehti hai! "(In the temple! She was the one who brought me back to consciousness. She lives in GK Apple Orchards!)"Geetika se hi toh aap ka phone par jhagda hua tha!" (It was Geetika who fought with you on phone!)

"Maan bhai, Nanimaa ki dhamakiyon se matt darreye. Agar aap ko pasand ho tabhi haan kahiyega! Nanimaa toh Geetikaji se humari shaadi karne ko bhi tyaar hain! Kyunki Nanimaa ko Geetikaji bahut pasand hain" (Maan bhai, please think carefully! Don't get scared of Nanimaa's threatening. She is ready to get me also married to Geetika if you don't agree! As Nanimaa likes Geetika a lot!)

"Hum Thursday ko Ms. Geetika Singh se milane jaayenge!" (We will go on Thursday to meet Ms. Geetika Singh.)

After talking to Maan in front of Mr. Chopra, Geet was getting negative vibes and decided to resign before Chopra Constructions become Khurana Constructions! She decided to work late in evenings before takeover is completed, and finish all pending reports! She was so busy in working that didn't see the time till a husky female voice spoke,"Raat ke dus baaj rahe hain, aur tumhe ghar nahin jaana?"(Its 10pm. don't you want to go home?)

"Bhabhi!" Geet went and hugged Sameera tightly.

"Geet yeh kya ho raha hai?" (Geet what is this happening?)

"Kya bhabhi?" (What bhabhi?)

Maan had forgotten Chopra's budget file of all projects and had come to take it when he saw a bright light in one of the rooms. He went near and overheard Geet and Sameera's converastion.

"Kal tum phir apne secret room mei soyi theen. Haan ki Naa?" (Yesterday you had slept in your secret room. Yes or No?)

"Haan!" (Yes!)

"Kyun?"(Why?)

"Bhabhi, mujhe der ho rahi hai. Chaliye ghar chalte hain, baaki kaam kal subah jaldi aake kar loongi!" (Bhabhi we are getting late! Lets go home! Rest of the work I'll come tomorrow early morning and complete!)

"Maan yahaan kaise hai?" (How is Maan here?)

"Maan Sir ne Chopra Sir ki company kharidi hai!" (Maan Sir has bought Chopra Sir's company.)

"Maan ne tumhe pehchana nahi?" (Maan didn't recognise you?)

"Mujhe nahin maloom!" (I don't know!)

"Maloom nahi ya batanaa nahi chahti?"(You don't know or don't want to tell?) Geet kept quite. "Geet, che saal ho gaye hain Maan se sach chupate. Tumhe nahi lagta ki usse sach bataa dena chahiye!" (It has been six years since you have hidden truth from Maan. Don't you think it is high time, you tell him the truth?)

"Main nahi chahti ki unki shaadi-shuda zindagi iss sach ke kaaran barbaad ho jaaye!" (I don't want his happily married life to be ruined by my truth!)

"Tumhe kaise maloom ki Maan ki shaadi ho gayi hai?"(How do you know that he is married?)

"Mujhe Sasha Ma'am ne bataaya hai!" (Sasha told me!)

"Tum uss jhooti aur dhokebaaz ladki ki baat maanti ho! Agar tum na hoti toh Maan aur Khurana Khandaan ki uss ladki ne toh apne boy-friend, Rahul ke saath dhajiyaan uraad deti!" (You believed that liar and fraud girl. If it was not for you Maan and Khurana family's reputation would be in tatters due to Sasha & her boy-friend,Rahul !)"Agar Maan ki shaadi hui hoti toh Arjun mujhe zarur bataate!"(If Maan was married, Arjun would have told me!)

"Arjun Veerji bahut saalon se Maan Sir se mile bhi nahi!" (Arjun Veerji has not met Maan Sir for long, how will he know?)

"Tumne aur Arjun ne toh Maan ko yeh bhi nahi bataaya ki tum dono bhai-bahen ho! Geet, Maan ko haq hai tumhare bacche ke baare mei jaan ne ka!" (Arjun and you have also not told Maan that you are brother & sister. Geet, Maan has a right to know about your child!)

"Bhabhi kaunsa baccha? Kaisa baccha? Mera Dhruv toh chalaa gaya! Mujhe akeli chodke!" Geet said breaking down in uncontrollable hysterical tears! (Bhabhi which child? Whose child? My Dhruv left me and went, leaving me all alone!)

Sameera cursed herself for reviving Geet's old wounds! "Bas Geet! Bas Geet! (Sameera was rubbing her back) Mujhe maaf kar de. Maine anjaane mei tere purane zakhm khured diye!" (Stop Geet! Please stop! I'm sorry for reviving your old wounds! Forgive me!)

"Bhabhi apko Arjun Veerji ki kasam aap Maan Sir ko sach nahi bataayengi!" (Sameera promise me, you will not tell truth to Maan Sir!)

"Theek hai! Mai vada karti hoon!"(I promise!)
Maan was frozen hearing the conversation. What truth was Sameera talking about? Where is Geet's child? How is Maan related to the child? Who is Dhruv? Why didn't Arjun introduce Geet as his sister? How will he find these answers?

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Edited by LM1991 - 8 years ago
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awesome superb updates

dhruv must be maans and geet's baby and now he is no more
what's the reason behind all this past
waiting eagerly
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