The Vengeance Lover thread 4.....Note @page 138.....29th Aug 2017 - Page 52

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Posted: 9 years ago
very nice teaser
waiting for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome... interesting...
Thanks for update..

Continue soon...

Maaneet facing a big emotional turmoil...

Both want to protect each other from Sam n ruin her evil plans...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Read the update after long waiting, geet is in confrontation with her own mind and body, she was not getting peace in her heart and went to same park where she first time kiss maan, and too her surprise maan was also there, he tried to remind her their first encounter but she denied till last she left him, he confessed his love but she didnt turn back and went away, sameera is determined to find out who was behind maan's bail? Is she will be successful?
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Posted: 9 years ago
interesting teaser, geet is remembering her past when she meet with accident so she thinks maan is innocent he tried many time to tell her something but every time one or other reasons he remain unable to tell her the truth ,she thinks there might be he had some connection with sameera and wanted to narrate her the truth.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heyyy vandy just came through ur story and read it whole in one go..
I really enjoyed reading it..
Sam is a real witch..
First she betrayed maan and now she planned to separate Maaneet..she planned geet's accident too..
Geet is faking her amnesia..
Maan was very happy after getting geet in his life but this happiness was short lived as fate played its game n he left all alone again..
Please buddy add me in ur pm list ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice part...

Maan has met Geet n confessed his love also.. wow..

N Geet is not in a position to respond him.. just because of that Sam...


Hope they tackle everything.. together ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice teaser, waiting for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 36

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Edited by vandy28 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

.Part 37

.FAITH makes all things possible
.LOVE makes all things easy
.HOPE makes all things work

Maan POV

I stood still at my place after the kiss shared between me n geet just few minutes ago whereas geet left without reacting to it. But what happened just now between me n geet gave a new hope to me... a hope to get my geet back...a hope to get her love back...

This hope is not because geet responded to my kiss but it is other way around...the way she restricted herself...not to respond me... gave me hope. How much I know about geet is enough to predict that if someone try to get close to her without her will...she will kill him or herself without a second thought. But when i kissed her without her consent, she didn't pushed me...she didn't slap me...n nor her face show some guilt or anger...it was just blank. Now m sure, she is hiding something...does she remember me...or our kiss.

Now I found new zeal in myself...to find out what's going on with geet...what she is hiding...is she getting flashblack of her lost memory...??

I m sure geet wont share anything with me directly now...but i will do everything to make her remember ...our love...that's my promise to myself. I will get my geet back.


Geet POV

I walked fast towards my car parked in parking area. After sitting in driving seat...I took long breath to calm myself...
I moved my hand towards my lips...i can still feel his lips on mine...undercurrent can b feel through my body still. But more than kiss, his confession is replaying in my mind...he confessed his love for me...he loves me...my love is reciprocated with his love...

I m so damn happy but one part of my heart is broken too. I m not able confess my love to him...can't tell him that I love him too...but instead I need to restrict myself ... Not to respond him... so that my truth didn't come out. Time is not right to reveal my plan to him yet.


Flashback...


I was getting ready for the date with maan where I decided to confess my love to him. I was feeling so happy yet bit of nervous because I m not sure what maan feel for me. Will my love be reciprocated ...

I moved downstairs to leave when I saw karan sitted in the living room. I was not in mood to listen his talk against maan again so i decided to leave the mansion by ignoring his presence. But my luck was not good that day. Karan noticed me n called for me.


Geet...where u r going...m waiting for u from last half an hour.....karan said

I have to meet someone...m getting late now ...will talk tomorrow in office....n I started moving towards gate...

Karan run behind me n than moved forward to stop me. I felt anger within me n I shouted at karan...

What the hell is ur problem karan...I told u ...I have to meet someone...its urgent ...will talk tomorrow

I know geet where u r going...n whom u going to meet...u going to meet maan nah...n it's about maan only...u don't know about him ...he is cheating u....

Bass......I shouted at him...not a single word against maan...I know about my maan more than u...I trust him...n above all...its my life...I will do wat I want to...n will trust whom I want u....

How can u trust him over me geetu...u know me from childhood... V are best friends...

How can I trust maan over u...let me think...isn't it easy to understand ...y.....I moved near to him to look in his eyes n said......

ohk let me say clearly to u...same way u trusted ur so-called gf over me...ur best friend... But atleast m not trusting maan over my best friend...because u r not my best friend...not even friend... Our friendship died when u didnt trust me...so now if u can excuse me.....

I moved towards outside without giving a second glance to him...I know my words hurted him...but I can't help it...all this negativity n rudeness is within me...n he is responsible for it too.

I started my car n switch on stero to divert my mind ...n song playing on FM bring an instant smile on my lips...this song expresses my feeling so beautifully...

Hum dil de chuke sanam
Tere ho gaye hain hum, teree kasam
Oh ho ho hum dil de chuke sanam
Tere ho gaye hain hum, teree kasam

Yeh duneeya kare sitam tujhpe mitnege hum, teree kasam

Oh hum dil de chuke sanam, tere ho gaye hain hum
Teree kasam - (2)

Umide tumhee se hain mere sanam
Thama hai tumhara hee yeh daman
Ho bhulenge kabhee naa abb tumhe hum - (2)
Oh hum dil de chuke sanam
Tere ho gaye hain hum, teree kasam, teree kasam

Today it seems everyone is against my meeting with maan. Firstly karan n now this traffic...m hating this. I stopped at signal when my phone ringed and it bring smile again on my face. It's maan call...

Prevs update...part 32...u guys can skip it.

Geet was waiting at red signal...when she got a call from maan ..

Hello maan ......geet said receiving his call...

Geet , r u coming ??... he asked as he wasn't sure if she would come or not ...after what happen in afternoon...but he cant lose this chance to tell his past...as it look lot of effort to made her agree to listen to him and today he wont let this chance slip away...

Yes Maan .. I am at red signal near restaurant ..will be there in 5min

Ok Geet, I reached there...and m waiting for u outside only

No maan, u just go inside... I will spot u

No geet...i m waiting for u outside only...as this will allow me to see u coming for me...today when u left me in cabin...i felt empty...I felt u going away from me...I so wanted to hold u n stop u from going...but now when u coming to me...I want to hold this moment in my memory...i know I m being silly saying all this...but I just want to replace afternoon memory with beautiful memory of u coming towards me...waise bhi I wait outside it will give me few more minutues to be with u...n I don't want to loose any single second which I can spend with u......

Geet was overwhelmed listening maan...but call get cut suddenly and she was about to call him back when she received a video message ...while cancling the message noticiation...she clicked on it and video start playing...

Tumne yeh kyu kiya sameera...maan said

Sirf tumhare liye maan...tumhe yakeen dilwane ke liye ki mera pyar sacha h...aj b mein tumse pyar karti hoon...sirf tumhara sath chahti hoon...

Hm...toh tum sabko kuch chod ke mere sath jaane ke liye tayar ho...

Haan maan...jahan tum chaho...sameera smiled at him

Thik h sameera...hum dono sab kuch chod ke bahut dur chale jaynge...sab kuch peeche chod ke...humara naam... Pehchaan...daulat...sab...aur naye naam... nayi jagah par apni nayi zindgi shuru karenge...maan said...

My phone beeped informing an incoming mesg. When mesg get opened by mistake, earth beneath me disappear...its video of maan hugging Sam that too in Paris...n later more pics of Sam n maan are there...I was in shock...my tears started coming out of eyes on their own...my state was broken by continuous horn from behind me...I looked forward to see light which is green already. I started my car n moving forward towards restaurant...with time my speed was increasing remembering all pics n their hug...

Infront I see maan standing on the road ...waiting for me as he said on phone...but my temper get best out out of me ...I accelerated car for higher speed and its moving towards maan...I hate him...he cheated me...he with Sam planning against me...m going to end it...m gonna punish him...he will never ever play with anyone else feeling.
My car was just few metres away from him when suddenly I remember... Maan was trying to tell me from long time...from starting to our park meet to our paris trip...was it about sameera...does sameera has past connection with him...I need to trust him...my love can't b so weak that any mesg or some pics can break it...but when i realise what sin me about to commit, I tried to apply break but it was not working...n i lost control over the speed of the car n it was just about to hit maan.

I need to do something...I have to save maan...I can't live if anything happens to him...I just turn my wheel to opposite direction...n my car hit big tree and my head hitted wheel n few glass pieces entered my head n eyes...I m loosing my conscious but still my eyes were searching for maan ...Its getting difficult for me to open my eye for more time...just one voice coming from within me...maan please come soon...

When I saw maan rushing towards me, I can see his face ...his worry for me...his pain of loosing me. I felt content in that moment that i trusted him over my fears n over others...his feeling for me is real...n I can die with this truth. I was moving my hand to touch his face but I lost my conscious.

When I get my conscious back, I listened someone talking about accident. When I concentrate I can make out inspector is talking to doctor ...n asking when I will get conscious so that they can get my statement...n I was trying to open my eyes but I got listening to next line of inspector...he told doctor that car's break was not failed n they are doubting for rash driving car but what making them puzzle was missing phone n purse from the site...

How can break is not failed when police investigated...someone from their department is involved for sure...I can't trust them. It's than I decided I need to find out truth myself...who is behind those mesg n pics...who is behind my accident. N In that instant i decided not to trust anyone because I know who ever is behind this ...planning big...n can do anything to separate me n maan or hurt us...I know this accident was not because of my over speeding but because of break failure...this time their planned failed but next time they can b successful...or they can harm maan as they are against us being together...so I have to act that I lost my memory n don't remember maan...

Flashback end...


P.s. this part was diffivult for me to write as wrote after long break n secondly connecting past n present...i hope i did justice...if not please ignore😆😆😆 n all mistakes too...

P.s.s. i accepted all buddy frnd reqst n didn't check whether u commented or not...but yup just as reminder i keep filtering my buddy list whenever i get tym...😉😉
Edited by vandy28 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great one .. Connecting past and present is one difficult task .it came out well ..
I wonder where has phone and purse gone :-O .. And breaks weren't failed ?? How come ?? 😕
Waiting to read more

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