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mariam.ahmed197

@mariam.ahmed197

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Posted: 9 years ago

#601

Very painful update hai feel very bad for Maan
Me sad 😔

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sonia

@rss45160

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#602

Its painful and enoufh for the story as we have understood everthing
I dont think we need more on the past
Now the story should move

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#603

too painful

maan has faced worse in jail

he stopped seeing dadi too

even his bro bcoz he was not presentable

the bully in jail has changed him so much

if not his mom has come in dreams he would have ended his life too

only nakuls statement made him get out of jail

but the tender maan has lost in him

superb

well written

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#604

nice but painful update
maan has bear so much pain
he even lost the will power to live
but can't die coz of his baby brother and dadi .
his innocence is compltly lost ...all he can feel is anger ...uncontrollable anger.
take care of ur health dear

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#605

wow lovely heart winching update..te way my maan ki life in djj which made him to destroy te innocence in him and made into beast omg,te way he went thru so much was lovely heart winching..he try to end his life but his mom's words stopped him and made him to fight was lovely.opps atlast god himself felt sad to see my maan and end all his misery..i love te update yar

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#606

part 20 - very painful stay maan had in djj. liked the way he got his strength from her parents. glad that nakul gave his statement in favour of maan before dying. maan was guilty for killing nakul by mistake.

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#607

that was really a heart wrenching part...

Maan was tortured like anything in DJJ...he lost his innocence there...and if he is a devil today it's coz of whatever happened in his past and DJJ...Before dying Nakul gave a statement that he was innocent which helped him to come out of that hell,,,,,,

moi a very sensitive soul...can't really go through one more painful part as it would make me depressed to the core...

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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#608

I am ...but it's becoming very long and I am still not done... So you decide do you want to wait for me to finish it or just post half of it...

Teaser:

"Will he not be normal like me and you" Maan questioned.

"Of course he will be, but still there will be a little bit of differences between him and us" Savetri Devi said as she looked at Dev who was playing by himself lying on the bed.

"What are you trying to say Hun, just because of one incident you will not give admission to my Maan" Daadi hissed at him angrily and then added "Mind it Mr. Rao the judge and all the proves to have proved my Maan innocent, so I suggest you that let Maan study in this school or else it won't be good for you or for this school of yours"

Was she wrong in threatening him? Even if she was, she doesn't care anymore. She has had enough of everyone playing with her and her child's life. And now it was time that she takes the ball in her hand and show everyone who the Khurana's are.

He once again suppressed his own feeling and emotions deep down within him and this time to never let it out ever again and he became immune of anything related to feelings, emotions, pains, agony.

"Yes Daadi, everything all right...and from now on I will make sure everything goes according to me." Maan said the last part to himself as the water fell from his head down, while his eyes were red that were spitting only fire and said "From now on I will make sure that this world bows down before me, the Maan Singh Khurana..."