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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 10. EPILOGUE

(Same as the epilogue of Kya Pyar Karoge)

Maan sighed as he came out of his thoughts. Ah! Those days! Those plans! Maan smiled and shook his head. He was so calculative, dealing with emotions as if it was some kind of game. Ah well! Who cares! All is well that ends well! Isn't that what people always say? Whatever I did, at the end of the day Geet became mine and that's what matters! He smiled and walked away to his room. As he entered his room, he walked towards his cupboard to retrieve his clothes for the night. Once done with that, he headed towards his bathroom to change when his eyes fell on a framed photo of Geet on the coffee table in the room. He smiled softly as he picked it up. In the picture Geet was pouting while looking at him innocently. He chuckled at her expression. Her expression in the picture always delighted him because it reminded him of the time when she was pregnant with Mannat. As the pregnancy moved towards 5th Semester, Geet had started to get moody. The picture was the result of one of such moody moments. He had whipped out his mobile phone during one such moment and had taken the picture and from that time it remained a part of his coffee table.

There were many pictures of Geet, some solo and some with him, scattered around the room, hanging on the walls but this one was Maan's favorite as while in rest of the photos Geet was posing for the picture this was the only picture where she was not posing and her expression was natural. Maan sighed as he sat on the bed taking the photo with him. He placed his clothes nearby and looked at Geet's picture intensely.

"Tum kyon mooh phula rahi ho?", Maan asked the Geet in the picture as he stared at her pouting face. "Dekho! Aagaya na main! Tumse baat karne ke liye!", Maan spoke. This was something he did regularly. Since the time Geet had been parceled off to her hometown just on the day their marriage was fixed, he missed her and picked up the habit of talking to her picture. Years passed and while the frequency lessened the habit had yet to go.

Maan sighed as he spoke up, "Aaj tumhein baat karte suna toh puraani yaadein taaza hogayi. Humaari first meet aur humaare crashes!", Here Maan laughed out loud as he remembered their fights. Then he shook his head, "Sachchi Geet! I still cannot believe my plans came out so beautifully. Bahut mehnat kiya hai maine tumhein apni wife banaane ke liye! Uff! Pata hai maine kya kya kiya tumhein apne pyaar mein giraane ke liye! I did everything I can just to make you fall in love with me! Pehle din hi, when you joined the job, tumhein das baar upar bulaaya!", here Maan chuckled, "Poor you! Phir uss lift ko kharaab karwaaya just so that I could spend some alone time with you!", Maan smiled dreamily as he remembered their hug. He looked down at the photo and smirked, "You know mujhe kabhi yeh nahi laga ki tum mere baahon mein aajaaogi! Uff! Pata hota toh kuch der aur uss lift ko band rakhta!" He winked at her photo while grinning.

"Phir aaya godh mein uthaane waala plan!", Maan announced, "I was so annoyed at you Geet! Maine kitni koshish ki tumhein giraane ki, lekin tum ho ki girti hi nahi! Gotiyaan daale taaki tum uspe phisalke giro! Lekin tum ho ki giri hi nahi! Phir lamp ko use kiya toh mere hero banne ke bajaaye tum hero ban gayi! Not fair Geet! So not fair!" Maan huffed and then shrugged, "But end mein tum giri aur maine tumhein godh mein uthaaya! Toh main itna naaraaz bhi nahi hoon tumse, but poora din tum nahi giri, yeh baat mujhe achchi nahi lagi! Phir aaya woh fake birthday waala plan! I swear Geet, that was the worst plan out of all my plans! Ek toh month galat nikla aur uske baad tumhein rula bhi diya. I was a fool Geet! I was a fool!"

Maan shook his head at how the next few days were spent, "Kitni baar maafi maanga tha maine! Par tum ho ki maafi deti hi nahi! Agar tumhaare asli birthday pe maine drunk hone ka naatak nahi kiya hota na, toh shaayad main do aur saal tumhaare peeche peeche ghoomta maafi maangte hue! Yes Geet! Woh sab naatak tha! Main drunk nahi tha! Just acting you know! But what else was I supposed to do? Waise tumne pehle mujhe kyun nahi maaf kiya? Kitne saare ideas lagaaye the maine! Kya kya paapad nahi bele! Lekin tum thi ki apna ghussa chodti hi nahi! Uff!" He huffed in annoyance and looked away.

"Phir aayi Pari!", Maan smirked, "You were so jealous of her Geet! So jealous! I don't think I enjoyed flirting so much with someone as I did that day with her! Tumhein jalaane mein jo mazaa aaya na Geet, Haaye!" He looked back at her photo and grinned, "Yes my dear! You got it right! Woh bhi mera ek plan tha! Pari realised that I loved you and decided to help me out by making you jealous! Aur tum jo jali, uff Geet, you made me so happy! Itna khush kabhi nahi hua tha, jitna us din hua! And then came the day where we hugged in rain! I swear Geet, agar mujhe pata hota that you realised your love that night I would have kissed you in the rain! But I was not sure! Aur Maan Singh Khurana kabhi inkaar nahi seh sakta! I did not want to leave you any chance of rejecting me so I continued with my plan to make you fall for me!"

"And then the day came when I realised that you loved me, the day after the hug in the rain! Tum gaane gaa rahi thi aur main sun raha tha! Uss din mujhe ehsaas hua that you loved me! But before I could plan my confession, Daadima ne shaadi waali googly phenk di! And rest as they say is history! But I have to say Geet, bhale hi jaise main chaahta tha waise mere plans work nahi kiye, lekin itne toh work kiye that I was able to make you fall in love with me! I did it Geet! I made you mine! I did it Geet!"

With a smirk on his face, Maan walked off to take bath, not knowing that Geet had been right outside the bedroom listening to his whole confession and right now she sat on the floor with tears in her eyes and horror on her face. Planned! Everything was planned! He played me! He treated our relationship like some chess game and played his moves! Yeh aapne kya kiya Maan? Kya kiya? Aur kyun? Then she frowned. Aur agar aapne mujhse pyaar kiya tha toh phir mujhe bataaya kyun nahi? Kyun mujhe iss galatfaimi mein rakha ki aapka yeh arranged marriage hai aur aap isse khush nahi? Kyun? Kyun aapne shaadi se pehle hi nahi shaadi ke baad bhi mere saath khel khele? Kyun tab sach nahi bataaya? That is when something Maan had said few minutes ago echoed through her head, "Aur Maan Singh Khurana kabhi inkaar nahi seh sakta! I did not want to leave you any chance of rejecting me so I continued with my plan to make you fall for me!"

Geet stood up in shock. Bas! Ek yahi reason tha Maan ka! Unhein inkaar sunna nahi aata isliye yeh sab khel khela! How dare you! How dare you Maan Singh Khurana! Tears welled up in her eyes again as she remembered how tortured she felt in the first few days of her marriage, how troubled she was when she was so close to Maan but unable to touch him like a wife could, how much in pain she was when she felt she was just his wife but not the love of his life! Maan! You caused me so much pain! And why? Just because you were scared of my rejection! Your ego was so big that it could not handle a simple rejection! So you played games with me! Why? WHY?

Geet wiped her face. Enough is enough! She had to do something! You created plans to make me fall for you right? Now I will create plans! And my plans will have nothing to do with love. Oh no! It will have everything to do with revenge! Ab bajegi, Band Baaja And Maan! Geet stomped off to her kid's room to plan her next step.

What say folks? Want to know how Geet takes her revenge? Well, you will have to wait till April to know more! Till then you can do me a favour! Send in your responses as to what kind of punishment should Geet inflict on Maan! Yes, people! I want to know what you expect from the last part of this series! So send in your responses in this thread before April begins!

Thank you, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 7. HAAN SEEKHA MAINE JEENE MERE HUMDUM!

AKA

THE DANCE WAALA PLAN!

Few days had passed since Maan returned. After the hug, everything went awkward for the duo. Geet fumbled and babbled whenever face to face with Maan. And as for Maan, he looked anywhere but at Geet when face to face with her due to one simple reason; whenever he saw her, all he wanted was to take her into his arms and to never let her go. The hug had left him wanting more and he had to clench his hand and physically restrain himself from grabbing his wife and hugging the life out of her. Because he knew, if he did that then he will scare her again. So both awkwardly shuffled in front of each other before avoiding each other's eyes and walking away.

Maan was not happy with the situation. He missed the sweet moments between them. He missed flirting with her. And Maan was annoyed to realise that he even missed their fights. This situation was way too weird for his tastes and he wanted things to go back to normal before he got back to his plans. Of course, his definition of normal and our definition are quite different. He just wanted to get back to his plans of wooing Geet without the fear of Geet panicking. And of course, this time he will slow down the speed of his plans. No need to scare his wife away again.

Geet sighed as she sat in her room folding her clothes. Maan will back home soon she thought absentmindedly as she hummed in sync with some song playing on her stereo. As she folded her clothes she wished things between her and Maan was back to normal. She missed seeing his smile. She missed his sweet looks. And most importantly she missed his flirting too. Us din bade kiss karne ki baat kar rahe the! Aaj kal toh paas bhi nahi aate! Jab main divorce chaahti thi toh yeh kiss maangte hue chipke chale aate the! Aur aaj jab main iss rishte ko jaise hai waise hi accept kar rahi hun toh yeh toh uss kamre mein bhi nahi aate jahaan main rehti hun! Uff! Babaji! Yeh bilkul theek nahi hai!

Geet pouted as she continued to fold clothes. Just then another song started to play and she smiled. It was a romantic song and Geet could not resist from swaying to it.

Hmmm...Hmmm...

Dehleez Pe Mere Dil Ki

Jo Rakhe Hain Tu Ne Kadam

Tere Naam Pe Meri Zindagi

Likh Di Mere Humdum

Geet left the clothes on the bed and stepped in the middle of the room, her eyes closed and her body swaying to the soft song.

Haan Seekha Maine Jeena Jeena Kaise Jeena

Haan Seekha Maine Jeena Mere Humdum

Na Seekha Kabhi Jeena Jeena Kaise Jeena

Na Seekha Jeena Tere Bina Humdum

Suddenly, an idea came to her head and she giggled. She raised her hands and positioned them as if someone was standing in front of her and she was placing one hand on the person's shoulder and other hand holding the person's hand. Of course, Geet imagined Maan in front of her. She started to dance with her imaginary Maan.

Dehleez Pe Mere Dil Ki

Jo Rakhe Hain Tu Ne Kadam

She imagined that he would look at her with that intense look of his that she loved. Her eyes would drown into his and her heart would start beating fast. And maybe; maybe Maan's eyes would reflect the love she felt for him.

Tere Naam Pe Meri Zindagi

Likh Di Mere Humdum

Geet smiled and wondered when she will get the chance to dance with Maan in reality. Now that she had accepted to be with Maan whether he loved her or not, Geet was overcome by the urge to be in his arms and spend time with him.

Haan Seekha Maine Jeena Jeena Kaise Jeena

Haan Seekha Maine Jeena Mere Humdum

Na Seekha Kabhi Jeena Jeena Kaise Jeena

Na Seekha Jeena Tere Bina Humdum

Maan reached his room and blinked in surprise. His wife was dancing with an imaginary character. Maan's eyes widened as he remembered the last time he saw her doing it. It was the day he came to know she loved him. And it was also the day Daadima had sprung up the marriage proposal on them. Maan banished the bad memories with a shake of his head and focused on the good ones; like the memory of Geet talking about their imaginary first kiss. Maan smiled as he looked up. And then he frowned. Why was his wife dancing with imaginary fellow when her husband was around?

Hmmm...Hmmm...

Sachchi Si Hain Yeh Taareefein

Dil Se Jo Maine Kari Hain

Geet was lost in her imaginary dance with Maan when someone tapped her from behind. She turned around and her eyes widened as the real Maan stood in front of her with his hand extended towards her. Maan waited with bated breath for Geet to take his hand. He hoped his plan to dance with her worked and the dance removed the awkwardness between them.

Sachchi Si Hain Yeh Taareefein

Dil Se Jo Maine Kari Hain

Geet looked at Maan with wonder and placed her hand in his in a daze. He pulled her closer and they started to sway in the place, her eyes locked into his. Geet felt her breath taken away by the intensity of his look and felt everything was alright in her world.

Jo Tu Mila Toh Saji Hai

Duniya Meri Humdum

O Aasmaan Mila Zameen Ko Meri

Aadhe Aadhe Poore Hain Hum

Tere Naam Pe Meri Zindagi

Likh Di Mere Humdum

Geet slowly leaned forward and placed her head on Maan's chest. Maan was delighted by her action. They were getting closer. Soon, she would be back in love with him. With a smile on his face, Maan let his arms encircle her and they continued to sway.

Haan Seekha Maine Jeena Jeena Kaise Jeena

Haan Seekha Maine Jeena Mere Humdum

Na Seekha Kabhi Jeena Jeena Kaise Jeena

Na Seekha Jeena Tere Bina Humdum

Hmmm...Hmmm...

Hello people,

Hope you liked this update!

The song is from Badlapur (2015) and sung by Atif Aslam!

Next up, three song sequences!

What?

Oh my! Next update is gonna be fun!

BTW, if you think the update is small, that is deliberate. I had to cut it here! Because next part is one big scene with three song sequences! Can't break that part!

Thank you, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
That was just Fantastic
I liked Maan's plan reliving the past memories but this time doing it a little better enjoying his moments with his wife while she is confused at his behavior and at first she thinks that he is mocking her but later she realizes Maan wanted to kiss her again

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new sequel..
I an a fan of ur writings and Love this series
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats on the next series part! beautiful banner! terrific prologue! Geet asks 4 a divorce n explains! Maan is stunned! his fear came true! Maaneet's inner thoughts well portrayed! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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the first few minutes I was happy reading maan proposed geet n geet accepted too BT alas! it was a dream n it got all shattered when geet demanded divorce. both are in pain BT not trying to understand each other n share their feelings due to fear of rejection.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Maan decides to seduce his wife nd make her fall in love again.
He comes out of bathroom in wet form.
Geet openly drools on him.
Maaneet was about to kiss each other nd phone rang nd disturb their moment.
Geet is shocked nd says sorry to him.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 updating! spectacular update! superbly written. Maan puts his plan in motion! he knows Geet drools on him! Maan happy seeing Geet staring at him! Maaneet abt 2 kiss bt interrupted! Geet apologizes n leaves! Maan shocked! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a funny update do maan was racking his brain thinking of ways he can make geet fall for him he thought of plans he made before and came on s one when geet was oogling over his body he decided and went to his room waiting for his widy she came and got lost in him geet was staring at him without a blink not moving an inch when maan came near her cagin her in his arms they were abt to kiss when phone failed his plan geet thought she was forcing herself left crying maan was angry at the disturbance and blasted the caller whi was Sasha poor her
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was Simply Fantastic

Maan wanting Geet again to fall in love with him so thinks of a plan as his seduction plan failed I thought this time he did come up with perfect plans as reliving their first clashes on each other had made Geet think to those times but now his words held affection
Maan dropping Geet off making sure that all drivers and Dev was not available same like he did in past that was awesome again the prank he played on Geet today bringing laughter seemed to have filled both with happiness

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