KHUMAARI2-The Nocturnal Beast(MG)#4, pt23/pg3...27nov

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Alpha01

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Thanks for updating.

Maan is so desolate that he cannot save Geet and is blaming himself for her situation. Geet runs on his insistence but comes back after remembering his sweet confession of love and the relationship between werewolve where if one dies the mate dies too. She can't allow that too happen and if it's going to happen then they'll die together.

It was a very painful and emotional part as they both accept their fate.

Geet has finally consented to their mating. I wonder what the outcome will be - will she become a werewolf?

Waiting for the next part.

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Manisha Govindraj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

dats a amazing update ...
geet ws amazing here...
n dey bcame one...
hope so det vl nt die...
continue soon
n thnx 4 the updates

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Craziest_MG

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

the truth comes out

but she couldnt leave him
she came back

i'm sure Maan will find a way to save both of them

thanks for updating

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Update!!!! :D

When u give any update it feels like a celebration time :v

Miss u a lot :(

I know u r verrryyy busy :(

But miss u a loadsss :'(

The update!!!

Geets outburst knowing the truth about herself!!

Well im doubting its her mother whos a werewolf :/

U didnt mentioned her ever :/

Ah geet came back :) to maan :D

Knowing she'll die still came to maan :)

Both knows their destruction still remaining together :D

I really loved the cnvo of maaneet when geet returned to maan ... That was intense ,,

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jasika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Congrats for new thread

Amazing update

Waiting for next update

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Uruja123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

omgzZz finally. .. thnx a lot. ..
was dying to read dis...
n its worth it. ..
just luved d update...
how geet realise n return to maan ...
just in luv wid d update...
now eagerly waiting for next. ..
continue sooOn. ..!!!!!!!

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babygurl10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Speechless! So releaved that Geet came back to Maan. They are meant to be. I loved the line something like I'd rather live a short life with you than live long life without you. Can't wait for the next update.

Ps: waiting for an update for your other FF. Please don't let Maan die😭

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kaminilover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Emotional in the start...teasing in between...and hottt in the end...but u stopped at peak turn... Plzz continue soon and give us update...what will be the result of their matting...waiting..:)

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Beautiful updt dolly :* Loved da whole part wen she ran away n den she got back
i wished to write so much darling, but it feels i hve lost connection to this story so i cudnt njoy much as i used to earlier. :(

but ur words, i will say again, u really hve.a way with dem. Bravo!! Waiting fr next :D