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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 46

this update made me compare Maan Sh and Dia for their thoughts and opinions about Geet..
Maan Sh is a better person than Dia, his intention was to hurt Geet by doing engagement with Dia..but he has never thought something that will put down Geet..he always opposes Dia whenever she does it..Dia will always make him realize what he has lost...hope in the end he will help Geet as a friend and they will retain their friendship..
so the party begins..Dia as usual in show off mode..now wanting to impress MSK...but MSK's has not paid any heed to her...all his attention is on Geet..and he was left spell bound seeing Geet...waiting for Kurbaan Hua.


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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
Ughh... i just hate this dia 😡 .
She is so selfish n arrogant..
Wow..msk send car for his angel 😉
Aur y maan sh aajkl bohot interest lene lga h geet me ..huh.. 😡
Waiting for maaneet sizzling dance...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 47

Every person see geet, some thought what a beauty, some thought she don't have dressing sense.
Maan sh (st); geet white sari mein kitni achhi lag rahi hai,pure beauty,meine isse jitni baar dekha hai, har baar pahli baar se jyada sunder lagti hai . stunning. Dil hi nahi kar raha ki iss se nazre hatayu.
Dia (st); ohh god bua aa gayi,iss party mein sabse alag hi lag rahi hai.sab soch rahe honge ki inhe dressing sense hi nahi hai.tabhi dia maan sh ko dekhti hai.ye maan bua ko aise kyu dekh rahe hai, ohhh samajh aaya ye bhi yahi soch rahe hoge ki bua kitni ajeeb lag rahi hai.
Dia; maan bua kitni ajeeb lag rahi hai na.sab dekho kaise unhe dekh rahe hai.
Maan sh come out from his stare.
Maan sh; geet bahot achhi lag rahi hai.she is looking fabulous.
Ye sunte hi dia ke hosh udd jate hai, she feel jealous.
Dia; maan ye aap kya kah rahe ho.
Maan sh; bilkul thik kah raha hu.mein geet ke pass ja raha hu, usko ajeeb lag raha hoga iss party mein.



Armaan (st); biilkul pari hai.maan ke liye aisi hi ladki honi chahiye, beautiful & innocent.
Msk; angelic beauty.
Jab maan angelic beauty bolta hai Armaan maan ko dekhta hai,
Msk; so beautiful, he just see her only.his stare is so intense, that geet feel concious.
Armaan (st); meine aaj tak maan ko kisi ladki ko aise dekhte huye nahi dekha, ye to aise dekh raha hai jaise iss ladki ke alawa duniya mein kuch dekhne ko hai hi nahi.maanna padega iss ladki ko, jisne maan singh khurana ko apni taraf dekhne pe majboor kar diya, ab to iss ladki ke baare mein jaan na padega kon hai ye.chal maan beta tujhe bhi tease karne ke din aa gaye. Abhi tak tu meri halat par bahot hasta tha.
Armaan; mr maan singh khurana hum bhi yahi khade hai jara hum par bhi nazre karam kar lo.
Armaan ki baat sunkar maan khurana ka staring session tut jata hai.
Msk; kya kaha tumne.
Armaan;are mein to ye kah raha hu usse hume bhi milwa de.
Msk;kisse .
Armaan; jisse tu ghur ghur ke dekh raha tha.
Msk; 😳
Tujhe bhi milwayunga pahle mein to mil lu.

msk waha se geet ke pass jata hai.

Geet ridzy ke pass jaane hi wali hoti hai tabhi msk aa jata hai.
Msk;hello geet.
Geet;hello.
Msk; you r looking awesome.
Geet feel shy; thanks, aap bhi achhe lag rahe ho.

Msk; chalo mein tumeh apne friend se milwata hu.

Geet or msk armaan ke pass chale jate hai.

Maan sh geet ki taraf aa hi raha tha tabhi msk geet ke pass pahuch jata hai.or geet ko apne sath armaan ke pass le jata hai.maan sh ye dekhkar jealous feel karta hai.pahli baar usse jealousy hoti hai.usse bilkul achha nahi lagta. Maan sh dia ke pass wapis aa jata hai.

Dia; maan aapne dekha bua ke aate hi ,msk kaise bua ke pass gaya or apne sath le gaya.kuch nahi bahot kuch hai jo hume pata hona chahiye.
Maan sh; hai to jarur kuch par kya hai, ye hume nahi pata.par mujhe geet ka msk ke sath baat karna bilkul pasand nahi hai.

Dia; maan chalo bua ke pass chalte hai.
Dia or maan sh geet ke pass jate hai.


Armaan; hello beautiful. I m armaan malik, maan ka friend.
Geet; hello.
Maan; she is geet.
Armaan; you r looking beautiful.
Geet; thanks.
Tabhi waha ridzy aati hai.
Ridzy; hi geet.
Geet; hi, ridzy tum bahot achhi lag rahi ho.
Ridzy; tum bhi bahot pyari lag rahi ho.
Armaan; tum dono ekdusre ko janti ho.
Geet; ha.

Dia; bua aap aa gayi.
Geet; ha.
Armaan ; bua?
Geet; she is my niece.
Armaan; ohh
Tabhi dj announcement karta hai.
Dj; hello everyone plz come to the dance floor.


Maan sh or dia dance ke liye jate hai , armaan, ridzy ke sath jata hai. Geet or msk wahi khade rahte hai.

Sabhi dance mein enjoy karte hai.maan sh ki nazar geet or msk pe hi hoti hai.

Geet; ab to aap batao kya solution hai school ka.
Msk; agar abhi na batau to.
Geet; thik hai aap mat batayiye mein ja rahi hu.phir mera yaha rukne ka kya fayda.
Tabhi dance khatam ho jata hai.armaan, maan sh or dia, geet or msk ke pass aa rahe the.

Smiling Msk said ; tum gusse mein aur bhi khubsurat lagti ho.

Dia,maan sh or armaan ye baat sun lete hai. They are shocked. Dia & maan sh are full jealous, dia becz msk is flirting with geet not dia,armaan bcz his friend msk is flirting with someone.


Geet; maan aap iss tarah ki baate mujhse mat kijiye.

Maan sh geet ke baat sunkar achha lagta hai.

Msk; chalo pahle dance karte hai.
Tabhi dia unke pass aakar kahti hai,
Dia; mr khurana bua ko dance nahi aata.
Msk said in satiric tone ; really, but jaha tak mujhe yaad hai, tumahri engegement mein geet ne bahot achha dance kiya tha.

Geet ki taarif sunkar dia ko or bhi jealousy hoti hai.

Dia ; ha aata hai, par iss type ka dance nahi, bua ko classical type dance aata hai, haina bua.
Geet; ha , mujhe aisa dance nahi aata.
Dia; aap kahe to mein chalu aapke sath dance karne.

Msk; no miss dia, dance to mein sirf geet ke sath hi karunga.kisi or ke sath dance karne mein mujhe koi interest nahi.chahe usse aaye ya nahi.

msk; chale geet.
geet ko itne logo ke bich bahas karna achha nahi lagta, par wo dance bhi nahi karna chahti.
Geet; sorry maan,mujhe der ho rahi hai,mein ab ghar ja rahi hu.

Jaise hi geet thodi dur hi pahuchti hai, tabhi uspe spotlight aati hai.wo dekhti hai,charo taraf darkness or uss par spotlight.
Tabhi music start hota hai, & then maan hold her hand. Geet maan ki taraf dekhti hai, dono ek dusre ki aankho mein dekhte hai, maan's eyes capture her attention, wo waha se chahkar bhi nahi ja pati hai.

They move slowly on music.

Kurbaan hua
Teri tishnagi mein yun
Kurbaan hua
Teri aashiqui mein yun


Bekhudi mein bekali mein
Bekasi mein hua
Tujhko har duaa di, aur dagaa bhi
Aur fanaa hua

Kurbaan huaaa...
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa..
Ada pe...wafa pe...jafa pe
Kurbaan huaaa
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa..



,MSK was showering all his passion on Geet.both dance with the flow of the song with MSK leading her and Geet following him ..both completley engrossed in each other ...Both were dancing as if there is no stopping and no rules & regulations.

Ru-ba-ru hai tu magar
Tanha hai yeh jahaan
Jal uthe meri kufr se
Saanson ka yeh samaan
Ooo...
Kya hua
Pal mein jaane kho gaya kyon
Tu mila aur judaa imaan hua yun

Bekhudi mein bekali mein
Bekasi mein hua
Tujhko har duaa di, aur dagaa bhi
Aur fanaa hua

Kurbaan huaaa...
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa..
Ada pe...wafa pe...jafa pe
Kurbaan huaaa
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa...



Maan rises up with his knees stretched completely and Geet kneels down bending her back.

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Marne ka sabab
Maangta raha dar-ba-dar
Mitne ko toh dil
Pal mein raazi hua
Poori hui har aarzoo
Har daastaan meri
Ke tum shuru hue jahan
Main khatam hua

Kurbaan huaaa...
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa..
Ada pe...wafa pe...jafa pe
Kurbaan huaaa
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa...


MSK puts her down but still holding onto her waist but Geet so delicately pushes his hand back when finally both comes to their senses and realises that they r still in a party.geet party se bahar chali jati hai.or maan bhi uske piche jata hai.


Everyone saw their dance with open mouth.
Maan sh; he can't see anymore both of them.he is so jealous. (St); maan singh khurana geet ke sath aise kaise dance kar raha tha. How dare he,jab geet ne mana kar diya tha.or wo geet ke itne close dance kar raha tha.mujhe pahle geet se baat karni padegi
Phir mein msk se baat karunga.

Dia(st); bua msk ke sath iss tarah dance kaise kar sakti hai. Ye dance or msk ka bua ke sath behave ko dekhkar to lagta hai ki msk bua ko pasand karta hai.par bua mein aisa kya hai jo msk unke piche deewana ho gaya.or bua ke mann mein kya hai msk ke liye. ab to mein jaankar hi rahungi


Maan shekhawat dekhta hai geet party se bahar chali gayi , wo bhi uske piche jata hai.


Geet garden mein aa jati hai,
Geet ( st); meine aise kaise maan ke sath dance kiya, maana wo mera hath pakad ke le gaye the, par mein mana to kar sakti thi, hum kitne close dance kar rahe the,kya ho gaya tha mujhe, sab kya soch rahe hoge humare baare mein, mein ab maan se dur rahungi, aaj ke baad mein unse kabhi nahi milungi.rahi baat school ki mein principal mam se kah dungi , ki mam hume school ke liye kuch or sochna hoga, par school ke liye mein kisi ko apne sath kuch bhi nahi karne dungi.

Msk geet ke pass aata hai.
Msk; geet.
Geet said in anger; dur rahiye mujhse...

No precap


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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
dia n maan sh are jealous seeing msk n geet with different reason

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Posted: 9 years ago
Vibrant Update
Everyone's eyes were on Geet as some saw her as a beauty while others felt
she didn't have any dressing sense
Maan Shekwat was one of the admirers while Dia felt she looks strange
its so clear Dia been engaged and the niece of Geet still she is filled with jealousy
she tells her fianc that Geet looks odd while he says she looks gorgeous making
Dia burn in jealousy
MSK was mesmerized by Geet and he ask her to dance while Dia says she can instead dance with him as Geet only do classical dances but MSK makes it clear he will only dance with Geet
and no one else making Dia again to burn in jealousy
MSK and Geet dance making Maan Shekwat jealous and Dia
Dia already took Maan Shekwat off Geet now does she also want MSK
Geet on the other hand is angry with MSK and tells him to stay away from her
waiting now to see what actually happens between Geet and MSK
I'm glad that both Maan Shekwat and Dia saw just how Maan treats Geet like someone
special and I'm really happy that both were burning in jealousy
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved update
precap nahi diya
i m sad
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
wow maaneet danced
maan sh. N dia jealous seeing it but for diff reasons...
Geet angry on msk
hows msk gonna manaofy his angel
cant w8..update a little earlier pwease..
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice part

dia ko aur jealous feel karvao
I hate both maan sh & dia they r so mean engaged hone ke baad bhi maan aur geet ke piche pde hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
brilliant ud
loved to see maan sh and dia burning
but now geet feeling guilty fr dancing so close
with maan
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Posted: 9 years ago
kitna ghatiya hai yeh dia aur maan sh...inn donoko sabak sikhana bahut zaroori hain...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Edited by love2_soma - 9 years ago

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