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Posted: 9 years ago
So painful update!!Maan did big mistake now he is trying to rectify his mistakes but its too late...I think Nishi is the one who behind all this...Loved it so much...waiting for the next...Thanks for the PM dear...
Edited by jayshu17 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
very sad update. geet is again broken because of maans ruthless words... its better for geet to forget maan and leave her life. who has sent the paper to maan, is it nishi. why she is behind geets life. dadima told the truth to maan and he went to yash house to talk to geet. she is down with fever.
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Posted: 9 years ago
thank you all for the likes and comments, they motivate me a lot😊

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Edited by ..Maroon.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 41

Next morning

The sun rays disturbed geet's sleep..indicating her to get up and start a new day with a new thoughts...the memories of the previous day were still fresh in he mind..torturing her, telling her how wrong she was..she wanted to cry her heart out but then her inner self questions her u want to cry but for what??will ur crying will solve everything..no right??
With a new determination she got up and started her day...
Meera was in kitchen getting ready to prepare the breakfast that's when she saw geet who was coming towards her..
Geet- good morning meera..causally she wished her..
Meera- good morning..
Geet- u go and get ready for office i will prepare breakfast today..
Meera- geet u should rest..
Geet- meera u know i have learnt cooking..
Meera- yes i know yash told me..and he also praised u ..
Geet- would u like to taste my hand made food???
Meera- yes..but not today u had fever last night and i don't want u to stress urself..
Geet- now i'm perfectly fine meera..
Meera- but..
Geet- don't argue or we all will get late for office..
Meera- we all?? u r not joining office today!
Geet- mam if u have forgotten then let me remind u , u granted me a week off and it got over yesterday so technically my holidays are over and i will join from today only!
Meera- then i'm ordering u to have one more day off..
Geet- meera please let me join..i will get bored here ..geet requested
Meera- accha thik hai..
Geet(gave a small smile to her)- thank u..
Geet started with her cooking whereas meera observed her..geet saw her still standing there
Geet- anything wrong..meera just shook her head in no..then go and get ready , with that she pushed away meera from the kitchen..

Meera was moving towards her room lostin her own thoughts when she collided with yash...she was going to fall but yash saved her..
Yash- be careful..from when u started falling?? , yash teased her still holding her in his arms..
Meera- don't tease me..i was thinking something..
Yash brought her more close to him- thinking what??
Meera- yash! i'm not in a mood to romance now..baad me..leave me!
Yash(st)-kabhi mood hota bhi hai tumhara..half hardheartedly he left her..
Yash- sunno ..i think geet is still sleeping go and wake her up..
Meera- nahi..she is already up and ready and now preparing breakfast for us..
Yash- and u allowed??
Meera- i tried to stop but she wants to ..so what can i do..
Yash- how she is behaving??
Meera- normally like she behaves ..i didn't find any change expect she is more vocal now!
Yash- if geet is normal then why bhai came here yesterday??
Meera has already told yash everything about maan's visit last night..
Meera- i too was wondering the same...i thought to ask geet but then seeing her normal i dropped the idea of asking..
Yash- good u didn't asked its between them ..let them handle it..
Meera- hmm u right...
With that both left to do their respective works..

Geet had prepared the breakfast, she was ready for office too, meera and yash too were ready, they all moved to dinning table to have breakfast after that they will leave for office..all the bowls and plates were already arranged on table..they settled and started having their breakfast , meera praised geet and later they again started to have their breakfast with little chit chat..but their sweet time got disturbed when door bell rang..
Yash- who can be here at this time???
Geet- i will see..
Yash- nahi geet u seat..i will see.., he got up to and left..
Meera has a little clue who can be here at this time but waited to confirm her guess..few seconds later she got her confirmation when she saw maan coming towards them while yash was following him...meera looked at geet to see her reaction but geet was busy in concentrating on her plate..while maan's focus was on geet only ..with each step he was taking towards her he was expecting her to lift her eyes and look at him..but she didn't...later he himself has to call her..geet...
that voice again..her hands stilled in the mid way for a second she became stiff..is she dreaming , she thought but another call from him forced her to lift her eyes and look at him..there he stood.., for a brief second both looked at each other but then geet diverted her eyes and broke the eye lock, maan has already accepted but he was sure after knowing his decision she will be happy!
Maan- geet..
Geet- hai maan..
Maan was surprised to hear that she answered him instead of ignoring him which she usually do..
Maan-aa..i ..need to talk... but geet cut him in between..
Geet- maan welcome u r here for the first na..
Maan- hai..lekin geet tum...but she didn't let him complete his sentence..
Geet- maan did u had ur breakfast??
Maan- no.. but..
Geet-oh..i'm sorry i didn't even asked ..please join us..we all are having breakfast only..
Maan- geet why don't u listen to me first...
Geet- maan u seat i will bring ur plate..
Maan-geet.. but she didn't stop and left inside to bring a plate for him..
Meera and Yash were silent spectator of the whole scene and were getting confused with maaneet's behavior..
Yash- bhai..please join us...
Maan doesn't want to create any scene in front of them its between him and geet and he wanted to silently sort it out with geet..but here she is behaving as if nothing wrong has happened..without any option he sat and waited for her..
she came one by one she started keeping the food in his plate..maan again tried to speak but she again cut him in between with her causal talks..
Maan had enough now from the time he had arrived here he is facing this only..
he has accepted geet to ignore him which she usually do ...but the geet he is facing today is so different , she is not that old geet now..she has become so..so cold..why??if she is angry on him she should shout on him, she should stop talking to him but..here she is behaving as if nothing wrong has happen.. getting up from his chair , he grabbed her hand
Geet- maan???
Maan- enough geet..we need to talk!
with that maan dragged geet with himself ...
Yash and meera were also present there, meera wanted to stop maan but then yash stopped her and said not to interfere..
Maan dragged geet towards her room , once inside the room he closed the door and pulled her towards him..
Maan- geet what's the problem??
Maan's hold on geet was not that tight that's why geet easily separated herself from him and tried to moved out of the room..
Geet- there is no problem maan.. coldly she replied and was going to open the door but it was not so easy to escape from him...maan closed the half opened door again and pinned her between the door and himself..
Maan- now tell me why are behaving like this geet...i know u r angry on me and u have right to show it too..but ur this behavior is confusing me..i'm ready to accept ur anger because i deserve that but not this coldness ..
he was too close to her..and his words were affecting geet but now she is tired of all this..she is tired to facing this again and again..
Geet- maan u r too close please take a step back.. or else later u will blame me for this closeness and tell me to stay away from u!
Maan- no i will not ..
Geet-it is suffocating maan..
Maan- u love me geet..my closeness will never suffocate u i know u r saying because u r angry on me... .. geet i have hurted u many times.. by rejecting ur love but now i have understood my feelings geet..what i feel for u now is more than attraction..that's why i want to give a chance to our relation..
Geet- chance?? why u want to give a chance to give to a girl who is not worth of u..who is useless in ur eyes..who play dirty tricks to get ur love .. there was no emotion on her face while saying this, maan tried to read her but she was blank, the eyes which always reflected her emotions today are completely blank...maan grip on her loosened hearing her, he thought after hearing him she will happily accept him and give him a chance but not even in his nightmare he has expected geet to say this..
Maan- geet..i ..that all was in anger geet...i regret my words..i'm sorry..
Geet-it was in anger but it was the bitter truth of my life maan.. u know knowingly or unknowingly u always make me face the bitter reality of my life...that time u were not wrong maan..i was useless..always dependent on others..but then i tried to make myself independent..i won't say i have achieved something big in life but yes i thought i have achieved something ...i started my new life thinking..yes i was not worth of u...i will never get ur love..but again u entered in my life for seeking my help for dadima...i knew if i agreed to help then i have to face u everyday but for dadima i agreed thinking i will ignore u as much as possible..but see i'm such a weak person that i can't even stay loyal to my own words seeing u in pain , knowing that u do feel something for me i was not able to stop myself..putting everything aside i agreed for making u jealous ...but ultimately what i get maan...a rejected love once again..
Maan- dadima have already told everything to me geet..i know u r innocent u never planned all that..i'm really sorry for accusing u ..at that moment i was so blinded by anger that blurted out stupid things to u...i'm really sorry geet...just give our relation a chance geet..if not for me..for urself for ur love..please..
Geet- my love...i'm tired maan i wanted to stay positive but now after getting rejected again n again i have lost that hope of getting back my love..i'm happy with my rejected love maan..don't show me that hope again..i fear this hope now...what if again the circumstances or ur anger force u to reject my love maan..i won't be able to handle that rejection ..please spare me now!
Geet stated her pov to him.. she said it without any emotion as if now all this doesn't really effect her..today maan witness a new geet..who give her opinion straight forwardly without any emotion, he wanted to argue but in front of her coldness he was feeling strange to open his heart but still he tried
Maan- but geet just...But she cut his sentence in between
Geet- i'm getting late for my office..if ur discussion is over can i please leave??
Maan didn't know how to answer this geet back..he just look at her , taking his silence as yes , geet left..leaving behind a clueless maan who had no idea how to proceed further..
but in all this he forget to realize that this emotionless geet has emerge out only because of his continuous rejection!

KC

Adi- vicky what is this..i told u and nishi clearly to finish this file by today ..then why it is incomplete till now..
Vicky- i know sir..i was going to complete it but then nishi said she will do it by herself so i left it on her..
Adi- that doesn't matter vicky..u both were responsible for completing this file ! by god grace maan sir is not present in office today or else till now he would have fired me...now go and complete this file ..i want it complete today only!
Vicky- yes sir...
after scolding vicky , adi left from there
Vicky(st)- ahh..this nishi..if she doesn't want to complete this file then why she asked me ..waise toh bada aapne aapko perfectionist and punctual kehti hai..huh...because of her i had to hear all this..i will not leave her today!Vicky reached to nishi cubicle to give his piece of mind to her but he stood rooted at his spot when he saw her state..
Vicky- what's wrong with her..
She was leaning on her table , he head was bowed down ,her face was covered with her hands, he called her to make sure she is okay or not..
Vicky- nishi??
Hearing him she immediately got up and looked at him...her face was bit swollen up so as her eyes with redness..
Vicky- anything wrong??
Nishi- n..no!
Vicky- nishi if there is any problem u can share with me..
Nishi- i said na there is no problem and u won't understand my situation too! rudely she replied and left from there...



i just hope this part was not that bad... i tried to portray geet's thinking and i hope it came out nicely...eagerly waiting for all ur reviews and about nishi have patience guys..
Note- my college has started from today so i won't be that regular and fast with my updates now..but will try my level best to give 2-3 updates in a week at least...
thank you for reading..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update dear
finally geet tld hw she feels 2 maan which made maan realise 2 wt extent he hv made damage
wts wrong wit nishi y she is behvng so strange
waitng 4 d nxt part update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
strong, powerful updatew
loved geet
maan need this reality check
what wrong with nishi?
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved update
strong geet
maan should understand his fault
whats wrong with nishi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update, geet has rejected to give a chance for her love, it is good that she did it. Now maan will try his best to sort their issues and hopeful he will realise his feelings towards geet is love not attraction
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Posted: 9 years ago
Geet is correct from her pov. All his rejection made her thoughts negative. She really cant bear another rejection. Now Maan shld do things like Geet did initially to talk to him. Still confused with Nishi character. Will wait for your updates.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update.i feel geet is right from her perspective.maan deserves this

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