FF: Ek Vivah Aisa Bhi - Thread 11 : note on page 145 : 8 may 2020

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#871

Can I say poor Maan

Choosing one side nope ..not easy for Maan

Although I want him on Geet side because I want pooja with Vicky

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sriif

@sriif

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Posted: 6 years ago

#872

Awesome update ...everything has got twisted and how the hell love birds get bonded in this twist ...i'm just loving ranbir possessiveness towards annie... so cute ...

thanks for the update and come back ...

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deepa111

@deepa111

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+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#873

It's a total dhamakedar update 😆😆...

Oh god!!! I can't stop smiling throughout the update...

Priya kya km thi ki dadi ne apni sweet bahu geet ke lady gundi avtaar ko jaga dia🤣..

Bhagwan jane ab kya hoga...

Bt seriously I was loving dadi n geet aka lady gundi face off...

It's so pleasant to my eyes😆😆..

Well,not only that priya aur ranbir to phle se gusse se lal ho rkhe h aur dadi ne geet ke rodra avatar ko jagakr aag me ghee dal dia..

Bechare maan ki shamat aa gyi...

Bechara k lie to kya kre kya na kre ye kasi mushkil gayee... Wali situation ho gye..😭

Ek taraf dadi to dusri uski lady gundi..

Poor guy,he don't even enjoy his honeymoon fully nd they got stuck in this mess up situation..

For now, I hope that vicky instead of enjoying this drama n fight dadi n geet confront manager n tell him about his love for priya...

Otherwise khin aur kuch sypaa na ho jaye ...

Aur agr priya ne hi haa kr di by chance to ye vicky ki sari hasi rone me badal jayegi..

So boy,,buck up...Aur lg jao bhabhi k sath apni shadi ki p planning me...

And for ranbir, dude jealous hone se kuch nhi hoga ..If u r even one percent sure of ur feelings then just go for it..

Khin aisa na ho shravan k sath geet tumhara patta bhi kaat de..

Phr haath malte rh jaoge..

Aur Annie ko koi aur hi le jayega..

I m eagerly waiting for nxt part...

As I know,u surely twist the story so dramatically that it will b awesome..

So di, update soon...😛

Edited by Mishtimia111 - 6 years ago

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#874

Awesome hilarious update dadi want sharavan and Pooja married but geet is against it she doesn't want her sister to come in pagal khurana home loved how geet answer back to dadi it was hilarious to see how geet shut the Hitler up poor maan stuck between dadi and geet even shravan is shocked to see geet avtar maaneet making shravan more scared as Pooja is more dangerous than geet Raj and Annie good friends but Annie is so innocent she doesn't see Raj loves her Ranbir is jealous to see Raj holding and now in possessive mode

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Sneha

@neasya

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#875

Awesome update dear loved it...

Geet and dadima's banter was too good...

Will be waiting for the next part dear please update soon and thank you for the pm...

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ritika malikk

@Yudkbhislove

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Posted: 6 years ago

#876

hey i have just found ur ff and i remember reading it some 2 3 years back.... toh will need a refresher before i get all caught up ..si i will leave a comment after that a long good one as i do remember enjoying this story very much .... toh am looking forward to reading this after my exams ...

also i kinda have a suggestion .. when u write dialogues... like in this u wrote like i like toofan kya hai ... , toh, just write who is saying them so that it is a bit clearer not that i did not enjoy reading the nok jhok between daadi and geet but still ...

it is just however a suggestion it is totally up to you to follow ??