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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update . geet toh puri noutanki hai ...bechara maan :p
Ekbar khana khane ke baad geet bilkull chup ho gyi ...mtlb jb bhook lgti hai madam tamasha karne lgti hai :p hehehe...but I like this geet ...full on life ...!!!
Lgta hai bhagvan ko bhi yea manjur hai ki yea dono kbhi juda na ho issliye toh phirse mile ek hi hotel mei ;) waiting for next...
Thnx for the pm dear :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 3

Maan- ahh!!!! i'm not romeo, my name is Maan , call me that only!

Geet- maan.. nice name by the way i'm geet

She forwarded her hand.. nice to meet u maan..

Maan- i wish i could say the same!

Geet- haww..so rude!

Maan ignored her and start walking from there.. seeing him going geet again went behind him..

Seeing her again Maan turned to her

Maan- see girl.. but geet cut him in between

Geet- geet.. my name is geet, call me that only , this time geet mimicked maan

Maan closed his eyes in helplessness

Maan- okay see geet ...basically we don't each other , u needed help i helped u..right! so now its over! Now u go on ur way and let me go on my way.. don't behave like insane person ...

Geet heard him in full concentration while looking at him..maan waited for her reply but seeing her lost he waved his hand in front of her..

Maan(while waving his hand in front of her face)- geet..geet??

Geet(innocently)- did anyone tell u that u look so cute while talking this sweetly..

Maan- not again.. in helplessness maan closed his eyes..

Looking at him geet chuckled a bit.. but as soon as he opened his eyes she quickly changed her expression to that same innocence..

Maan- what i do with u??

Geet- nothing.. by the way u didn't tell me that u too are staying in this hotel...

Maan- it was not important..

Geet-do u find me interesting?? Curiously geet asked..

Maan- rather than interesting i found u annoying..

Geet- hmm i can understand i have troubled u a lot haina??

Maan(sarcastically)- finally u realised it!

Geet- so r u alone here??

Maan was getting confused to hear her questions..

Maan- who are u?? R u some detective or u had some hidden motive behind troubling me??

Geet rolled her eyes on his assumptions..

Geet- and why u think so??

Maan- because suddenly u have transformed from a annoying girl to an interrogating girl!

Geet- interrogating girl, seriously??

Maan- yes..

Geet(teasingly)- oh so ur missing that annoying geet, i can become that too if u want!(she winked at him)

Maan shook his head on her gestures- u r...

Geet- what ...u didn't complete..

Maan- actually i ..i don't have words to describe u..

Geet moved extremely closed to him, brought her hand close to his face , she caressed his face from side from his forehead to his cheek..

Maan was stunned to see her behaviour..

Geet(seductively)- u find me this interesting that u r speechless.

Maan(bit scared)- wha...at.. r.. but he was again left speechless when suddenly geet started laughing like a lunatic!

Geet- OMG.. ha haahha.. did u looked at ur face ..it .. was worth watching..hahaha.. as if u have seen some ghost...hahaha..

Maan was fully frustrated with her

Maan- u r ahh!!!, and he moved from there furiously..

Geet ran behind him , she was still in her laughing mode..

Geet- arre maan wait..i was just kidding .. , she ran behind him and held his hand to stop him.. maan was so furious that he was going to shout on her but as he turn , all his anger flew away when he saw her cute face , she was holding her both ears with full of sorry expressions on her face..

Geet- so..rr..yy..

Maan- why don't u leave me and enjoy ur time alone..

Geet- how can anyone enjoy alone??

Maan- i can..

Geet- i'm talking about normal people not a person like u who always prefers to be alone!

Maan- accha who said i like to alone always..

Geet- first say u have forgiven me my hands and ears are paying now..

Maan- oh like this u ask sorry..

Geet- i haven't done any crime just made fun of my friend.. and haven't u heard that dialogue friendship mei no sorry and no thank u.. but still i said sorry.. geet sounded like she did something big..

Maan- friend and friendship now from where these two came from??

Geet- it has been almost 12 hours since we met.. we argued so many times till now.. this happens between two true friends only..

Maan(sarcastically)- wow what an assumption!

Geet- give ur sarcastic comments later first say u forgive me..people are giving me looks as if i'm some joker..

Maan- that u r!

Geet- maan...pleadingly she said..

Maan- okay i forgive u ..

Geet (while putting her hands down)- finally.. uff..

Maan chuckled a bit seeing her expressions but geet noticed this and smiled a bit..

Geet- did u smiled??

Getting caught maan immediately tried to change his expression..

Geet- u surely were smiling..haina?? now don't act in front of me.. chalo issi note pe we confirm our friendship, she bring her hand in front of him..

Maan- what if i deny ur friendship??

Geet- u r surely missing that annoying geet desperately! Geet warned him that if he deny her friendship then she will again turn into that geet which annoys him..

Maan-u r not less now also..anyways ..its better to accept ur friendship rather than getting frustrated with u and with that he too brought forward his hand , both shook hands and confirmed their friendship!

Geet smiled big - good ! chalo lets have a walk..

Maan(st)- she is a masterpiece , looks like here too i will not be at peace , at home its my dad who doesn't allow me to be at peace and here i'm stuck with her now.. why god why always me! , he looked at geet who was busy in blabbering something as usual but he didn't paid attention to that as he assumed her talks are usually nonsense .. he was here to be alone from all the tensions of life he was tired of making everyone understand his dreams his desires nobody understood him.. at a point he was tired of fighting with others , his father wanted him to join their business he don't want to do that but he can't do against his father's wish after all he is his father , he is the reason for his existence how can he make his father sad who from his childhood till now did everything from him, he can't make him upset..no never..if it takes to kill his heart's desire and make his father happy then he will do that also ..after one week his life will change fully as he will join his father's company but before that he wanted to relax himself and for that he was here all alone but looks like god doesn't want him to be in peace that's why he send this masterpiece to him...he can't even tell her to leave or she will again start her nautanki so its better to go with flow she will herself leave him and go when she will get bore..but seriously she is one of her kind. Maan shook his head while thinking about her..

While walking, geet was till blabbering non stop suddenly she noticed his unusual silence , it is not that he too speaks like her but at least he reply her with his hmm..hmm but now that hmm is also missing.. while walking she held his hand and jerked it..

Maan came out of his trance..

Maan- huh...

Geet- kya hua?? U look lost??

Maan- mm..nothing..

Geet- u must be wondering na what kind of girl i am..u talked so rudely with me but still i didn't left u??

Maan- wow! Suddenly u r talking something sensible.. maan taunted her..

Geet rolled her eyes on him but continued- actually .. i am extrovert person i can't stay alone for long time i need someone always with me..

Maan- seriously ?? and u came here all alone??

Geet- na the truth is i emotionally blackmailed my parents to allow me to come here with my friend..

Maan- don't tell me ur friend left u??

Geet- u r a very bad listener puri baat toh sunna.. cribbed geet..

Maan- hai bolo..

Geet- my friend didn't left me i left her..

Maan- and why so??

Geet- she was staying with her aunt and u know na with elders u can't do everything..

Maan- what adventurous thing u wanted to do that ur friend's aunt would not allow u to do??

Geet- nothing as such but still i wanted to do something on my own.. alone..a..i don't know what but i needed some change some thrill in life that's why i left her place and by chance met u.. u know u have something unusual in u that pulls me towards u something..

Maan- geet stop ! u r sounding too melodramatic right now!

Geet- nahi sacchi there is something in u which pulls me towards u something.. geet was not getting any exact word to describe her feeling..

Maaan- leave it .. i was right u r a master piece..

Geet- ahh..i wish i could make u understand but i like to annoy u , it gives me unusual pleasure u know! Cheerfully geet said

Maan- i knew it!

Geet- anyways leave all that , did u notice something common here at this place??

Maan- till know i am noticing only u aur kuch notice karne ka time hi nahi mila..

Geet- aww..so sweet ..are u trying to flirt with me !

Maan- nothing my mistake .. tell me what's so common here???

Geet- just look all around urself ..maan followed her and looked all around himself.. what do u see??

Maan- people!

Geet-arre nahi..observe more carefully!

Maan- geet! U have already eaten up my brain now don't puzzle me with ur stupid questions!

Geet- accha thik hai ! did u see all people here are in pairs??

Maan- matlab??

Geet- matlab just look around urself most of the persons here are couples..

Maan- so??

Geet- so..nothing i just noticed so told u..but suddenly a thought strike her..

Maan- oh..

Geet- maan do u have a girlfriend??

Maan- why are u so involved in personal life??

Geet- ahh..can't u answer me in a simple yes or no??

Maan- we r friends but we are not that close to share my personal information!

Geet- kitna bhao khate ho yaar.. anyways u know i have a childhood fantasy to have a boyfriend! Excitedly geet said..

Maan- so??

Geet- but my bad luck i didn't find anyone ...

Maan- hai toh.. disinterestedly he said..

Geet- u know whenever i see girls talking to their boyfriends for hours i always wonder what exactly they talk and that too everyday.. i don't even talk to pari this much!

Maan-pari??

Geet- arre my friend! So u tell me what ur girlfriend talk to u??

Maan(irritatedly look at her)- i don't want to discuss my personal life with u!

Geet(teasingly)- oh ho naughty naughty talks..

Maan just shook his head on her nonsense talks.. but next second he was literally shocked , geet went on her knees and said..

Geet- will u be my boyfriend??

They have become the center of attraction for the whole crowd present there, few girls present there even cheered geet for her courage , now all were waiting for maan's answer..

Maan(slowly)- geet what the hell are u doing, come'on get up.. ye tamasha band karo abhi!

Geet(slowly)- maan now don't spoil the moment say yes..people are waiting for ur reply only...

Maan(loudly)- yes!

The whole place echoed with huge round of aplause for maaneet.. geet happily got up and hugged him!

Geet(whispered in his ears)- thank u!

Few people congratulated them , poor maan with forceful smile acknowledged them.. after that people again got busy in themselves.. and maan got the chance to lash his anger out!

Maan- geet why the hell u did that!

Geet- it was my another fantasy to propose a boy rather than him proposing me!

Maan- i'm not ur fantasy fulfilling machine that u r fulfilling all ur fantasies with me!

Geet(st)- again the sadu avatar!

Geet- why u take everything seriously ..learn to enjoy life and trust me doing all this stupid things will last with u forever as awesome memories and whenever u remember all this u will have a big smile on ur face!

Maan- really ur one screw is loose..

Geet-whatever! By the way i have a deal for u!

Maan- deal??

Geet-let's be bf-gf for this trip!i want to experience how does it feel to have a bf..

Maan- what if i say i already have a gf..

Geet- then..have an affair with me..geet winked at him..u too will get a new experience ..come'on now say yes ! neither i know u personally nor u so in future we will not have any problem with our real bf/gf!

Maan- tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta! I am wondering why god made us meet!

Geet- may be god have his own reasons! Please say yes ,its just a matter of seven days then i will say taattaa byebye to u ..please fulfill my this wish! With her puppy face she tried to convince him..

Maan- okay..



Precap- those 7days!😲😳😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
maan is stuck with geet
waiting for 7 days of gf-bf
Edited by heemasomani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome part...geet is fabulous just love her waiting to see the coming 7 days of them being boyfriend and girlfriend...so update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update.. poor maan really struck with a masterpiece..waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update finally the intro done but geet was being herself annoying maan to limits he was getting highly irritated with her he was very sad how he does everything to win his dad but he is always disappointed now he was killing his desires to fulfill his dads he wanted to be alone but geet the masterpiece wasnt leaving him alone so funny geet proposed maan to be her bf role reversal hogaya hai geet loves to irritate maan not vis a verse but her cute expression made him smile they made a deal to be gf bf for a week lets see what happens
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Posted: 9 years ago
geet proposed maan to became her bf maan unwantedly accepted it. nice part continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Maaneet became girlfriend boyfriend nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
waiting for next update

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