MY INNOCENT SURRENDER 2 #4 Updated Last Part on Pg 38 / 4-12-2015 - Page 26

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Maan is recovered from his injury
Feet Maan ko chodh kar chali gayi hai wo Dr aasthana we geet ke baare mai puchta hai but Dr kehte hai ki unhe nahi maaloom balki uske karan unki beti unhe bhi chodh kar chali gayi hai
Dev and meera ko baby girl hui hai Maan Dev ke paas London jaata hai jaha WO apne kiye sins ko lekar guilty feel kar raha hai
Dev ko bhi maalum nahi ki geet kaha hai
Beautifully written
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow nice update maan is searching geet because she left him he came to London to meet dev baby and also comes to know about dadis death know he realize his mistakes what he done in his big ego nice continue soon waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome part
meera gave birth to a girl & maan came their to meet them
geet was missing
achha kiya geet ne
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update, hope geet is fine
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
geet leave every body even dr. asthana
maan is searching her madly but fail totally
he wants to ask sorry

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Geet missing
maan searching her
Dev and meera having baby
Dev massage maan he becomes uncle
Maan come to London
Maan come to know dadi no more
Maan asked dev y r geet
Dev say he don't know
waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
[SIZE=6]LAST PART[/SIZE]

[B][COLOR=RED]NOTE:-[/COLOR][COLOR=BROWN]This is the last update of this fiction. Now ab jisko Comment or Like karna hai kare nahi karna hai mat kare. Now it doesn't matter to me. I just wanted to complete my fic rather than closing it in between.

PS: NO EPILOGUE[/COLOR][/B]


"If it was my dream,then i wish no one awake me ever. Ummm,i am sure i was dreaming only or else its not possible,a man whom i love to hate most,now owing my breaths", She tossed smiling to other side and her drosy eyes got the glimpse of him calmed face,appearing gradually through the beams of rising Sun,peeping from the window behind..


Yes he was sleeping calmly since his surrender came back to his world. She raised carefully towards him and kissed on his forehead and eyes. Her fingers caressing his hairs,slid down towards his face and gently rubbed his lips. She flushed on her own desperation,but cant help it. These days her cravings increasing only with each moment. She leaned and kissed him. He grinned wide without opening his eyes. Her feel is enough for him. He snaked his arm around her but not pulled her,just tenderly hold her. Maan tugged the dense curtain of her hairs behind,allowing his eyes to gaze his innocent surrender. Maan raised himself and peck on her lips. "Good morning." he wish her and she to replied sweetly.

"Good mrng. Now c'mon get up or noon ho jayegi or aap yahi pade rahoge." She puhed him to get up quickly but Maan not leaving her.

"to apko koi problem hai Mrs. Khurana?" he asked while playing with her hairs coming again and again on her face and curtain her.


"na.. But what about office work?" She raised her brows.


"Dev hai na. He will handle." Maan sat and support Geet in his arms.


"to aap usko London se isiliye laye ho,so u get time to become lazy?"


"na... I brought him so i get time to play with my cuty pie." Maan answering in a same way Geet teasing him. Maan brought Dev and Meera on the same day he visit London to see the baby Sia. Though it wasn't easy as Dev was angry but brother inside him accept his defeat and he mend seeing Maan suffering. Maan apolozise to him and pleads to come back to KM. Dev hesitant a lot but later on he melt down and ready to came back with him. Since that day he was living with his wife and Angel in KM.


"then get up fast coz she is already awake." Geet alerts him about Sia's timings. These days she turned very naughty. She is now six month old and try to crawl,inspite of being impossible coz she hardly able to sit at her own. But the moment she saw Maan around she put efforts to reach him and when it not done she screamed louder to grab his attention. The moment she got sucess she clap and showing her little teeth on her victory.


Maan fresh n up and went to hall. He was busy on some call and didnt notice Sia,so she herself trying and pushing herself. Geet saw her and eyes widened becoz she might fall and hurt herself. Geet praying and walking towards her coz she wont able to run in this condition. She take a pace step but struck in mid whe she saw Maan grabbed her. She released a relief breath but now she know what scene she going to view.


Maan first finish his talk with client and now Geet stoo up and waiting for the daily routine to repeat. Meera came with her milk bottle and same moment Maan shoot. "Where the hell are you? How careless are you Meera?" Maan's shooting at her and Geet lipsing his dialogues from upstairs.

"bhai wo main..." Meera to get habitual so she to wait for his lecture to be done.


"wo main kya? You are busy? Then where the hell is Dev? Tum do milke ek bachha nahi sambhal sakte?" Maan glared her and Meera as usual said sorry to him,while Sia enjoying the view.


"Maan lecture ho gaya to bfast kar lo." Geet said and Maan squirmed. She came down slowly slowly. "kitni ajeeb baat hai na,jo shararat karta hai usko pyar milta hai bakio ko daant." Geet mocked and both women laugh while he staring both angrily.


"Sia come sweetheart. Apke bade papa ka morning exercise ho gaya." Geet teased and she laughed.

Meera took Sia from Maan. "Geet dont carry weight,you know your 8th month is running." Meera cautioned her and left them alone.


Dev was waiting for them in room. "kya hua?" he asked to tease his wife even after knowing every thing.

"your daughter again get scolded me from bhai." She pout and Dev kissed on her lips quickly.

"dont tempt me." he put all blame on her and she just stood astonished.


"Dev,not before her atleast. Sharam karo." She turned Sia's face.


"Sia ko b to company chhaiye na. So i was thinking..." Dev leanaed to kissed her again but she shove him away.


"koi zarurat nahi hai. Sia ko company dene k liye Geet la rahi hai baby." She nudged his abdomen.


Dev hug her from backside,resting his chin on her shoulder.
"you know what,i am so happy Geet came back to bro or else we loose him." He share his fears which still haunted him sometimes.


Meera caresses his cheek. "you still afraid na?" she asked.


"Ha,coz Geet ko aane me thodi der ho jati ya wo aati hi nahi to?",his voice turn heavy,thinking about the consequences.


Flashback:-


Even after 6 months when he failed to found her Maan,assumed that she would not forgive him and took a decision. He get himself arrested and accept his all sins. He also accept that he killed his own wife. The accident took place on that day, was not because of landslide. He killed her. It was a planned murder. Judge asked if he want to defend himself but instead of that he demand death penality for him. Dev and Meera was helpless. Maan not ready to listen to them. He wants to punish himself only. Coz of Media Geet got about this case and before Judge pass his judgement she appeared before court and save Maan.


"are you mad? What you are trying to prove?" Geet scolds him but he only smiling seeing her alright before him. "stop smiling and answer me." she fists his collar as she was hell angry on his act.

"you forgive me?" he asked instead of replying.

"ye mere swal ka jwab nahi hai." She said angrily.

Maan bow down on his knees before her,facing her bump. He got that their last encounter results and now growing in her womb. "baby pls ask your mom to forgive me. I am bad and dont deserve your mom but baby papa aise hi hai. Papa only learn to hold and snatch,which is wrong and for that i am really feeling guilty but i cant live without your mom. Pls tell her to forgive me." he sheds tears and pleading for forgiveness.


Geet to lower down to face him and wiped off his tears. Maan hold her hand. "Geet forgive me pls. I know my way to get you is wrong but my love for you is not fake. First time ever i feel for anyone and to strongly that's why i cross my all limits. In fear of loosing you i commit sin one after another. You are my insanity Geet and i will die..." Geet palmed his mouth,stopped him saying further.

"kab ka maaf kar chuki hu. Agar nahi kiya hota to ise is duniya me kabhi lane ka nahi sochti." Geet placed his hand on her womb. "it is our love symbol,not the result of your madness." She hug him and sooth the pain and guilt,he was burning in from past 6 months. Geet understood one thing that his love for her had no bounderies. Ofcourse his ways were wrong and insane but that was also for her only. He is obsessed for her and she cant changed the fact. For her it was more important that he realized his mistakes which he already did and his all actions was proof of that. The time period Geet spend with him during his treatment,was changed her view also. She learnt many thing about this mad Maan who is crazy but for those who reached to his heart which he oftenly not showed. His ways are wrong but not his love which is genuion for her.

Flashback ends...

"these days i only think about you. Very curious to know whether you are a boy or a girl. Meera chachi wants baby boy. She said Sia needs brother. Dev chachu always confused. Mumma want healthy baby and Papa? He never said anything. He only said..." Geet caressing her bump and talking with her baby,when Maan enter in and hug her from behind.

"i want you only." Maan said and kiss on her neck. Geet swirled in his arms.

"Maan you dont want baby?" Geet asked cutely making baby face coz every time Geet asked what he want baby oy or baby girl?,he gave same ans that he want her only. So this time she asked her doubt.

Maan cupped her face and place a tender kiss on her forehead. "Geet tum ho to sab hai. Or baby boy ho ya girl kya farak parta hai,tum himmat kiye jao puri cricket team khadi kar lenge." He said in a husky tone and made her jaw dropped.

"what 11 bachhe? Firr aise karna aap hi paida karna." she was shocked hearing his views and made a grumpy face. Maan kissed on both fluffed cheek one by one and filled her in his embrace...


Gradually time passed and finally the wait overs. Their baby safely arrives to the world to add more happiness.

[IMG]https://diaramkiran.files.wordpress.com/2012/03/baby1.jpg[/IMG]


Geet holds the pure soul in her hands and gazing the baby. She couldn't able to took her eyes off. Maan arrived to see their baby boy.

[IMG]https://diaramkiran.files.wordpress.com/2012/03/baby2.jpg[/IMG]


[IMG]https://diaramkiran.files.wordpress.com/2012/03/baby3.jpg[/IMG]

He sat near her and hold their treasure. Both share the silent moment of this happiness.

"kya naam socha hai apne humare baby ka?" Geet asked resting her head on his shoulder.


Maan adoring his baby. "Meet... Maan or Geet ka Meet. He brought us together so this name is perfect for him."


"Meet... Kafi unique or lovely name hai." geet approved.


Maan engulfed her. "Geet you are indeed an innocent surrender of mine. Who not only forgive me but accept whole heartily. Thank you so much. Always love me,because without you i will..." Geet shut him with a small peck.


"i love you and never leave you." Geet confesses her love and assured him.


Both got their solace with each other. The journey starts from rage and madness reached to road of love where all bad memories left them but after teaching a lifetime lesson.


[B]THE END

THANKS TO ALL WHO SUPPORT ME FROM START TO END... THANK YOU GUYS AND LOVE YOU...[/B]
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago


hi richa
love the update
one more came to end ..
maan was not able to find geet so he choose a different way to get her ..he got himself arrested ..geet reached there to save him ..finally he confess..geet was pregnant ..maan taking ample care of her ..they r now a happy family ..

thanks for awesome update ...

Edited by tabby999 - 9 years ago
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