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Posted: 8 years ago
Add me to the queue as well
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Posted: 8 years ago
fabulous update. "The khaini had won him great friends.." I always love the way you include these simple yet meaningful observations into the story..

Dev was not reminiscing the old memories with Tara, meaning one of my guesses went wrong, koi baat nahi the other one has come true..and guess wrong hone mein bhi ek alag hi maza hai..the fun and excitement of reading the new turns, twists and possibilities into the story.

but the reason behind the guess was the belief that Dev loves Tara immensely..the way he had asked - am I not enough for you and was saddened to see her sad..
but I will hold my comment about this new development related to Nandini.

I just went back to read the previous chapter again..he felt like a stirred effect in his heart after seeing Nandini..which could mean anything for now..so will hold for the comment on it till the next chapters.

and then the call by Maan to Dev...
only one sentence and finally we got his reaction to her decision, though he did not show any of it to Geet, but it did affect him..he called Dev, who has been his emotional support from the childhood..
Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
After reading the update, I don't mind one bit that it was Ayush who saved Geet, and not Maan. Got a little more insight into the kind of relationship they must have shared, although I am sure there is more to it.

Waise, Ayush ko kyun bachane ki practice karni chahiye? Where is that hoity-toity Khurana?

Now that you have given us a glimpse of their past, I want to know more. I want to know about Ayush's solo performances, the history behind Billa and Weasley too.

Glad Geet did not pretend otherwise and spoke to him.

Nakul Chacha seemed to be an endearing character.

I love how you pay attention to the smallest of details while writing. It is so real that I can totally relate to the characters and I can visualize all that I am reading.

Nandini Tailors -- Is the owner the same girl who was knocked down by Dev's bike earlier in the morning?

So, finally Maan calls Dev to tell him about Geet. Hope Dev is able to knock some sense, albeit subtly.

Too much is happening, can't wait to read more. Continue soon, please. 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
rendezvous with the past which Geet was avoiding and so was Ayush..
I remember the awkward silence between them when Ayush had come to receive them driving them back their home..

but this time the awkwardness, the avoidance was left way behind..it was like Ayush meeting an old friend after a long time, reminiscing old memories and the college friendship days.
may be seeing her walking alone lost in her thoughts, least cared about herself while crossing the street had got him back to his friend Geet..
they seem to share a good friendship..may be something more.

Billa. Is it for the black panther, Bhageera in Mogli..and Weasly comes from Harry Potter..what do they mean it together..



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Posted: 8 years ago
Happy New Year!
Thank you for acknowledgement. Titration was easy as you said... Bid good bye to chemistry last year as i chose physics for my masters... Glad you liked it.

Nakul chacha ji and khainni for me it was like all characters of story coated with problems, desires, dreams like chuna and Almighty pressing them, rubbing them, mixing them, dusting them, blending them according to their Karmas... Beautifully written 👏

Dev ki dukkan k samaksha Nandni..* kahi ye wahi sabji mandi wali behenji to nahi*

Bang on!! While reading this chapter had this thought ki this could be Ayush (thou wanted Maan) aur mera *shaq* sahi nikla. How awkward it would have been for Geet (my thought)? Chalo atleast she could be herself infront of him...

Khotta Maan... I thought he was mature enough to sort out his own problems par nahi " Jo bhaiya bolenge, Me to wohi karunga..." In the movie YJHD there is a voice over *satyanaash* I herd exacyly that one while reading that phone convo line.

Dhasu chapter with solid foundations... Waiting for more

Thank you.




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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update
nakul and dev conversation is superb
dev recive the call some one
who want go ?is geet ?
what is between arush and geet

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello Ji...
kahan hain aap?
update milne ki aas lagaye hum kabse aapka intezaar kar rahe hain...
zara idhar bhi darshan dein
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Posted: 8 years ago
Waiting for the update dear!!?
Where r u dear !!?
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Posted: 8 years ago
what a beautifully written story...read all th parts together...funny interesting romantic...y i was thinking geet actually told the real story of maan married to her in their reception...really he didnt recognize her...whats the problem between geet n ayush...hope that dev will remains taras forever...y pinky was so judgemental n i was thinking she would become a gd friend of geet ..i was feeling so sad when geet was crying in the kitchen...maan never tried to know whats geets background...what she wants in her life...he has his own dream...he is educated modern then y he is nt thinking of geets education...so many dreams of everyone in this story n everything looks so real in life...maans dituation in office just like mine...broken dreams of geet to become a doctor just like me...geet doesnt know how to cook just like me...trying for a baby of tara n dev n their situation just like a situation of my collegue cum friend tarannum...th relation between adi n his FIL just like my father n my hubby...uff so much similarities...waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago

Teaser

"Did you go to Aanganwadi school or something like that?"

She felt angry tears fill her eyes.

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"I have got your ticket."

"Thank you."

"Wednesday, 6 pm." He informed further.

Oh, I got it! You want me gone, you hairy legged monster, now leave me alone will you!?

"I made sure it was a window seat."

"That's very thoughtful of you.

How convenient it would have been if it were onions that she was chopping! What had she read? What was the component in onion that reduced one to tears?

Perhaps I'll not go to Hoshiyarpur, she thought. I'll get down at some unknown station and collide with a handsome stranger who'll be kind. Wait, Scratch that. Isn't that discrimination, Geet? Why only handsome? Ugly people can also be kind.

"I'm nothing if not thoughtful."

She ignored his lie.

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"Hoshiyarpur? Now where is that supposed to be? Rampur suna hai, Kanpur suna hai par ye Hoshiyaar logon wala pur nahi suna kabhi!"

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"I don't know. You can only force someone to marry against their will. Rishta nibhane ke liye you cannot force anyone. Shaadi jabardasti karwayi jaa sakti. Par mohabbat uska kya?"

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Updating soon

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Edited by Commelina - 8 years ago

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