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Angeline124

@Angeline124

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Nice story concept

Just loved it

What happen in past? And whose kids these both are?

Whay Geet left Maan?

What happen to Sameera?

Continue soon and pm me if u can

I wanna read it

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Wow supwrb start yaar.. Beautiful that maaneet and sam had a beautiful friendship.. But yeh sam toh kebab meon haddi nikli.. Wait so aahana and aahan r maaneets kids? Ufff sooo much suspense.. Cont soon hun.. Naughty kids.. Lol

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: mayurmaaneet
Wow supwrb start yaar.. Beautiful that maaneet and sam had a beautiful friendship.. But yeh sam toh kebab meon haddi nikli.. Wait so aahana and aahan r maaneets kids? Ufff sooo much suspense.. Cont soon hun.. Naughty kids.. Lol

thnks yaa... well its suspense so cant answer your question thanks for the comment 😳

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Angeline124
Nice story concept
Just loved it
What happen in past? And whose kids these both are?
Whay Geet left Maan?
What happen to Sameera?
Continue soon and pm me if u can
I wanna read it

thnks for the comment... all your questions will be answered as the story progress... might happen u will have more questions 😆

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priyasree

@priyasree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Thanks for the PM dear

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

awesome start to os so geet left him for his better life but maan adamant to get his geet back to him as she belongs to him only

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

lovely update so maan loves geet she left him and now he wants her back he found out she has twins working double shift maan i pain thinking why she has to do somuch he is in her thoughts how he once insulted her orange juice drinking habit seems he and sameera were a couple maan finally reached where her 2 cuties opened the door one wasnt letting enter but the other did maan was amused he was waiting fior geet to come he was introduced to the devils whom he kept busy by his i pad geet came she calls her kids fireworks but was surprised as they didnt come to the door maan hold her and she screamed he is finally here for her

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

awesom update

and dont mention the end in end of update

mujhe laga ye story yaha kaise khatam ho skati hai

😲

😉

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: priya_21
awesom update
and dont mention the end in end of update

mujhe laga ye story yaha kaise khatam ho skati hai

😲

😉

😆😆 well... now i will put double end 😆😆 thnks fr d comment

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Mindblowinggg start...
loved it...
finally he found her...
She has twins...
Curious to know about their past...
Twins r cute...
loved it...
lookinggg forward 4 next part...

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