ERRONEOUSLY SEDUCED #10 Updated EPILOGUE on Pg 148 / 19-11-2015 - Page 70

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Posted: 9 years ago
PART - 52



PARTH was over excited. Meera really craved to saw the spark in his eyes again which was missing from past 10 days. Though he is only a small kid but sensed the tension around very well.

"Mumma ready?" He asked again and again.


"Coming son coming." She said while uaving a quick glance at the small bag she got ready to take hospital along with her. Dadima and Dev arrived so now she is getting ready to go there.


Dev kissed on her forehead. "So you taking him also?" He asked with a smile. Smile which they all forgot but again their corners curved.


"Uska right b to hai. I never saw him doing praying for anyone before. Past few days jitna hum pareshan hue hai utna ya shyad usse b zada Parth hua hai. Now its his right he can meet his brother and chachi." Her voice is so content while talking about Geet and baby.


Parth got restless and came there to call his mother. Dev caressed his head. "Ready champ?" He asked.


"Main to kab se hu. But mumma taking lot of time." He cribbed cutely to his father.


"Ok baby I am sorry. Mumma is ready. Dev go and fresh n up first. Your and dadima's breakfast is ready." She kissed him ane hold Parth's hand while moving outside.


Both reached to Geet's room. Parth quickly entered inside and glance all around. Geet was find and conscious. Baby was laying in cradle. Parth glance both and got confused to whom he go first.


Geet who was sitting with support of Maan got his gestures. She smile and signals him. Parth grinned and moved towards cradle to see his little brother who shifted last night to this ward. Parth glance and his eyes gleamed. He bow down on him and stroke his tiny cheek. "Awww baby is sleeping. Neenni aai." He was talking to him in a chimming voice but not awakening him.


Meera moved to Geet and sat next to her. "How are you feeling now?" She asked and Maan leave her side. He walked towards Parth and baby.


"Abhi theek hu. Ye aa gaya hai na." Geet's eyes welled up while talking about her baby. That day when Maan brought his baby forcibly, Geet opened her eyes on the same night and showed the sign of improvement.


She hold Maan's hand and showed her presence. He called the docs and their hope increased. Next whole day she was under observations. Because she lost her consciousness soon again and again. But gradually her health stabilize and that moment was most tough for Maan. First thing she asked for is her baby who was still in incubator. It took lot of time to made her believe that baby is fine. Geet's eyes shed tears again. As she craved for long to hold her baby but she can't as her body is flimsy and stitches not healed yet. Doc cautioned her not to carry baby in her arms. So whenever he crying, Maan support her body and help her in holding the baby.


Meera felt her pain and kissed on her forehead. "Don't worry its just a few days separation. You know these khurana babies are like this only expect my Parth. Even I was not allowed to hold Alya for some days coz of same problem." Meera tried yo cheer her up and both smiled weakly. Both slanted their neck to see what 3 boys doing.

Maan was engrossed in telling Parth about baby. He was over protective also. Making sure Parth enjoyed without hurting baby. "Chachu he is also very small like Alya." He shared his feelings.


"Ha because he is only of ten days. But you don't worry. Soon he grow up like you then you would able to play with him and Alya." Maan was busy and Parth to told him about Alya's habbits and asked is the coming one to act like her ot not.


Geet enjoying his cute queries and adore how much he was concerned for his siblings. Parth start observing him carefully and start comparing his gestures with Alya.


"Parth you forgot me." Geet called him and he swirled in a second. He nodded no and rushed towards her. Carefully he came on bed and kissed on her cheek one by one. Geet to kiss him. Both shared a very sweet bond which was beyond words to explain.


"Chachi apko abhi pain hai? But not to worry I pray to God. Firr aap zaldi se theek ho jaoge." Parth's innocent words swelled her heart with happiness, which she can't able to hold. She was overjoyed.


Geet caressed his head. "I know my Parth baby's prayers answered by God that's why me and baby are fine now.


"Chachi now don't cry okay?" Parth raised his tiny hand and wiped off her tears. Geet hold his hand and kissed it. "Mumma when we take chachi and baby home?" He address his mother and asked something which was a reality check for all.



Till now they don't able to think about this. Geet was thrown out from Maan's house. No one even bother to think about what she want now.


All glance at each other. "Very soon baby. Right now doc want to take care of your chachi and baby. So when he feels both are fit to go back home we take them. Okay." Meera tackle him and he shook his head. "Geet you take rest I will be back soon. Bhai aap b breakfast kar lo." She stood up made her laid properly. "Let's go Parth now chachi need rest."


Parth left with his mother and Maan joins her again. He leaned over her and put aside her hairs. Geet's eyes carrying questions and he know that. "What are you thinking?" He asked while roaming his fingers in her hairs.


Geet was silent. Till now they wouldn't able to talk about themselves as baby's health gripped her mind badly that she couldn't able to think about any thing else. Seeing her silent Maan hold her limp hand and kissed on her forehead. She clenched her eyes and tears escaped from them. Now Geet knows that Maan was only teaching Sam a lesson but their point of view still a wall between them. Her doubts need to be settled. What would his decision now? She was not sure about that.


"Aap ab baby ko apne sath le jaoge?" Geet whimper finally. Fear of loosing her only treasure coming out in form of salty warm water drops.


He allowed his finger tips to caresses her dull face. "Yes baby will go with me." Maan paused and she broke down badly. Maan wipes her fresh tears. "Main baby or uski mumma dono ko unke ghar leke jaunga. Khurana mansion. Where our baby get love and care from elders and company of his cousins. Where his mumma get a family she had been craved for." Maan's word not only amused her but fill life into her flimsy form. "But uske liye ek kaam zaruri hai." Maan glance straight in to her eyes. Both were talking silently staring each other. Her heart beats rosed suddenly. His caressing breath and intense gaze hold her firmly. She losts in him when he hold her like this.


"Kya?" She wasn't in a state of mind to ask more than this.


"I want my baby's mumma permission. Will she ready to accept me in her life. Is she willing to rest every moment of her life with me. Will you marry me?" Maan's voice trembling. He to had a doubt not on her insane love but on his sins. Maan kissed on her knuckles and tears float out of his eyes. Before Geet replied to his proposal he added more. "I know I had never said but why don't you understand geet? You know me more then me then why don't you understand that I can't live without you. Every time every second I need you before my eyes. Even you forced me to do such things what I never ever imagined. I broke my all rules one after another for whom? It's you Geet, still you need to know whether I love you or not? Its okay if you want to listen from me then yes I love you. I love you like any thing. You are the only best thing happened to me. And I want to hold you forever." Maan confessed his love for her which made both shed their tears. Geet raised her hand to pull him near. Maan leaned over her and both kissed hard till her weak body responded. He got his lost treasure. Now words are not necessary between them because her gesture told every thing.


"Apne itni si baat bolne me kitna time lagaya. I thought aap kabhi bologe hi nahi or main aise hi chali jaungi tarste hue is du..." He quickly blocked her mouth with his before she completed those words which he don't want to think about even in his nightmare.


Maan left her mouth gradually. "I am sorry Geet for every torture you bear but I promise I will prove myself as a good father and a husband you can trust on. I only want you." Maan's voice and eyes reflecting his inner pain which he was hiding behind his stern face. But Geet knows he was scared.


"Aap darr gaye the na?" She asked palming his stubbled cheek.


Maan rested his head on hers softly. "I was dying. Please don't punish me like this. If by mistake I hurt you then do any thing but never ever think of leaving me. Jee nahi paunga." Geet praying deep inside that if it is her dream then it never get over. Maan was not of those who open their heart easily. But she got a chance to listen him. How easily he was accepting his feelings and need for her. Just like a small kid who was like open book. Today her mystery man poured his heart and without any hesitation. Fear and proud both gripped her together. Fear of lossing this because till date she only loose relations at every step that's why her heart craving for a family. Proud, because she able to see her love's this side. A lover side.


Geet raised her face and kissed him again. "Maan hum sach me b se dadima, Meera, Dev sir, Parth or Alya k sath KM me rahenge? Humare baby ko b family milegi na, jo mujhe kabhi nahi mili." She asked to ressure her happiness and he nodds yes to her.


"Yes now we all are staying together and you both get every thing you deserves." His reassurance brought a huge grinn on her face.


"Thank you. Thank you so much." Rejoiced heart of her weaken her to express her self. Lacking of words only allow her to speak thanks to him. Maan kissed her and she hold his nape pushing him to her.




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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update. Finally geet and baby are safe. Maan also confess his love and will take geet and baby to khurana mansion.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update.
I loved geet.
Happy that both geet and baby r fine.
Parth is very excited to meet his geet chachi and little brother.
Loved parth scene with baby.
Finally maan confessed his love geet.
Also ready to marry geet and stay with all at KM.
Thanks for update
Edited by SONU_29 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
brilliant...first of all am so happy geet is ok; second parth and his happiness how much that little fellow prayed for his chachi and brother baby; and lastly maan confessing his feelings for geet and she realizing how much this crazy person / lover is for her; how he cannot breathe without her; his fear when she was out; she is ok because of his craziness in bringing the baby that day...so glad he agreed to stay with everyone in KM...wow ...dadi will be very thrilled and so will everyone else...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh great! Finally maan confessed his feeling and both are happy. Parth was so cute and innocent. When he gave entry all other character totally lost. Maan wants to give everything for geet and his little one. Geet understood that he acted like thing to teach sam a lesson but she wants to hear those words from maan's mouth. She felt happy as man of few words opened his heart and expressed his feeling.
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Posted: 9 years ago
atlast maan is back as a lover ...happy fr geet...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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get well soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update ..geet and baby both are fine.. parth was very much happy to see his chachi and brother..maan finally confessed his love and cleared her doubts..
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Posted: 9 years ago
GET WELL SOON! Even with a fever u manage to write so well :) The confessions are so overwhelming emotionally! The transformation of maan the faith in love has bought them together! All the Khurana babies are gonna drive the mansion insane lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesme update
geet n baby r fine & everything is fine between maaneet too..maan finally confessed his love ..oh i cant wait 4 lovly dovly moments..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabb update
Nyyc
Lovedd it

Finally confession
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