My Quick Stories -NEW OS 4- Karate Love-Pg 32 (23/11) - Page 28

Originally posted by: _CrazyFlames_

Awesome shot Lakshu di...

beautifully written...

totally enjoyed it...

and the edits are just wow... 😊

Originally posted by: dreamy

awesome story

Originally posted by: sophiexx

Originally posted by: sophiexx

and now to the story

I liked this one, a light hearted comedy with a twist. For me teacher falling for his student is completely NO-NO, also i thinks its illegal (under 16) here and so it should be but Maan's a karate master so technically not a teacher. Cramped buses, boy is that painful but thankfully theres not rouges trying to feel you, poor Geet, but way to go, she should have worn heels and completely frozen his toes 😡 to death.

and Maan to the rescue or atleast his hands 😆😆😆 rings ke saath, now its impossible to imagine Maan's hand without rings, isnt it? 😉 his advice is correct, a girl should be armed thats why i have a buzzer on me like always ever since my friend got mugged 😭 point is make him/her deaf and alert the passerby's 😉

lazy geet, whats new uff but i like her enthusiasm more for maan then his lessons 😆😆😆 Pinky poor girl, half 6 is early for excercise however for a bloody train its late 😡 sorry thats my problem 😉

finally maan realised Geet 🥳 and i thought the guy would just do his lessons without seeing teh beauty, thank gosh she came early, see coming early for classes has its plus points 😆😆😆 i shouls also go early, kya pata i might find maan practicing tooo 😆

poor geet, will he stop teasing and get to the point but i like it 😉 geet to the rescue aha 👍🏼 i like it, but her being the victim 👎🏼 shoot she should have thought this through but never mind maan is there always, our karate machine 😉

alls well that ends well, those freaks deserved the punches and kicks from Maan and maan and geet are gifted with each other,

amazing and unique story, i loved eh tom and jerry pics youve used. A complete package, amazing stuff Laxmi

thank you

Originally posted by: sophiexx

amazing stuff Laxmi

Originally posted by: BloodDiamond

Loved it super duper Karate love storyMaan influenced Geet to take self defense classes 👏

Geet took Pinky who got really tired after doing some😆

Geet and Maan got attracted to each other

Maan teased Geet about her drooling on him😆😳

Finally as those goons attacked Geet Maan saved her and came to know she is the same girl whom he saved earlier

Originally posted by: Desigirls12

Chori chori

Wow lovely omg hilarious superb os yar..te way khuranas and handas were friends from generation and want to became relation by tieing my maaneet which they decide wen geet born but worried thinking abt my maaneet who cant even stand each other for a sec too..te way they fight was football match for te families..te way dadi planning to make them one so locked them in one room without knowing abt my devil maaneet who romancing chupke chupke..te way my maan hugging his geet who cribbing to him wow pleasant surprise..te way my man proposed his geet in his possessiveness and te way love bloom was lovely..omg te way my maaneet ki chupke chupke romance hiding from their family was lovely cute..te way whole family shocked to see my maaneet one he he , me laughing like anything,than god famiiy came to know so soon or my maaneet could have romanced and got a baby chupke chupke he he..te way my maaneet feeling sad seeing they whole and then shocked to know wat they planned was lovely cute..i love te os so much dear

Originally posted by: Desigirls12

Humsafar

Wow lovely superb beautiful poetric update yar..te way my maaneet married life and they day started with them and end with them was lovely..opps my maaneet ki unconditional love for each other and they increasing passion was lovely..te way geet ki craziness for gurti and making my maan fume hearing mera guru,he he possessiveness sk was lovey cute..te way geet imagining herself with maan with gurti was lovely cute..opps my maan too planned a surprise for her to fulfill her craziness for gurti and kurban hua song wow superb amazing yar...I love tis os so much yar

Originally posted by: Desigirls12

Karate

Wow lovely superb disyum fireful os yar..te way geet ki first day col and she rushing to , but faced te usual problems wat every girls face during bus travelling but my maan her saviour came to protect her and she saw his rings, me too love his long long fingers naughty desigirl..te way geet decide to join karate as per her mystery man but bechari dragging pinky too was lovely cute and her eyes widen open seeing her mystery man taking classes and joined without thinking once was lovely..te way geet drooling my maan and his karate style me laks do u know where my maan taking classes me too want join and fall on my maan he he,how dreamy..te way geet drooling my maan chupke chupke and my maan got her red handed and both fall for each other was lovely..opps my naughty devil singh khurana in action to tease his geet making her red red..te way my maan ki teasing gaze percing his geet soul was lovely..opps sherni in action but my maan came to protect her opps his anger omg if possible he will burn tat goons..te way my maan confess his love to his geet in filmy way wow superb fantastic..karate really kicked my heart so much..i love te os so so much yar

Originally posted by: Desigirls12

wow fantastic editing which give soul to each scene yar