My Quick Stories -NEW OS 4- Karate Love-Pg 32 (23/11) - Page 30

Originally posted by: -indu-

Aagayi main... Apna comment leke😉

I Liked this sooo much... na loved it soo much...

Pata hai sabse highlight kya hai... meri jerry ki tasveer...😳😆... kitni cute hain... kaha se aate hain tumhe aise ideas... aur woh Tom and jerry ka Gif bhi... so apt for the story...

pehle hi din dono ki energy poori ki poori kahtam hogayi...but I liked the determination they had to continue the clasees.. warna kaun jaata hain... woh alag baat hai ki yaha Maan is Master... shayad Main bhi jaati agar Master Maan hai toh😉😆

and the teasing parts... mujhe hamesha ek doubt aata hain... yeh ladke bina bole.. I mean confess kiye kaise ladki ko ched sakte hain ( read haath laga sakte hain )... Geet ne tabhi toh usse push kiya... koi agar bina relationship ke haath lagaye to do thappad bhi maarni chahiye... geet ne woh miss kardiya...😆... pata hai nMaan uska master hai... but yeh koi reason nahi hui na...😛

So maan ko thoda jhatka laga.. tab ussi dimag ki batti jali... finally confession hogaya...

All is well that ends well

and this is for you👏

aur yeh story ke liye ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Jerry ki edit bhi achi aayi.. Peeping Maan and cute jerrry❤️

Congrats for yet another OS..

OS 4 - Nice os. You are good at making others laugh. Loved the comic touch to it. Maan once saved her in crowded bus and she decides to learn karate a self defense. Eventually they fell in love. Maan saves hre again when some goons were harassing other girl whom geet gone to save. Maan confessed his love for her and geet was very happy. He reminds the same words said by him when geet was saying them to the girl. Maan did knew that geet was the same girl who he saved in the bus. 👏

Forgot to ask, pinky ne class chhod hi diya kya...? Baad me vo ayyi hi nahi...ya phir kabab me haddi nahi banana chahati thi...😆

Amazing Update Lakshmi

Loved it

Really wanna read lovely os more

And specially I Love Geet...She is so sweet

Brilliant

Superb os now im confused so many awesome stories

hi lakshmi

third is is really sweet one ..