Game Of Love ~ Maneet SS ~Epilogue @ 71 ~ 2 januray ~ - Page 42

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Posted: 9 years ago
ok hum chappals abhi k liye nehi phenk rahen hai...epilogue k intezaar karenge...

atlast geet maan ki ho hi gayi...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
SUPERB
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VERY EMOTIONAL
LOVELY UPDATE
WAITING FOR NEXT

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Posted: 9 years ago


Happy new year guys ..Enjoy and stay blessed


EPILOGUE


Rani Geet sat on her bed with great difficulty .. Few seconds before when she opened her eyes n found herself in Maan's room , not his actually theirs room ..she easily guessed , what must have happened .. It didn't take too long for her to remember that she competed and expected that she had won the competition as she wasn't sure about her victory .. Analysing for few minutes ..she tried to sit , as no one was there in room to help her .. All thanks to maan and his possessiveness that he didn't want others to stay in room when his rani was asleep ..he himself would take care ..

Raj mata was back to palace and was waiting for Geet to open her eyes so that Maan would be at ease .. At least he will eat and sleep . he didn't sleep for two days from when Rani was brought to palace in her unconscious state .. He didn't leave her side for a minute too ..

Rani geet in her room wondered , where r all ? And how long it took her to come back to her conscious ..She was thirsty and needed water to ease her dry throat .. Her whole body was paining badly.. She took the bottle from side table, with her arm paining .. . ..

"Rani geet .. Ye kya pe rahi hain aap ?? " ..maan said in a loud voice.. Geet who didn't expect the sudden voice n left the bottle in mid.. Which was on floor now , n liquor was flowing out of it .. Geet looked at him with accusing expressions ..

As soon as he stepped out of restroom , he got happy to see her sitting .. She was finally in her senses ..., after winning that too for him not for herself .. But when she took the bottle in hands he cursed himself for not removing it before and not placing water .. That was wine she was gonna consume and doctors prescribed not to drink as she was weak and would fall unconscious for long time ...

"Ab hum pani bhi nahi pi saktay ?? " .. She asked in a sarcastic tone , as she brought him out of his thoughts , he was happy to listen her after two days .

"Hum aap se baat kar rhay hain raja maan , hmain paani peena ha " ..geet said in a loud tone , though it was difficult for her with dry throat . ..

Uff !! He so missed this Geet in these two days .. The one who orders him like he is not king but her personal helper .. He grinned ear to ear seeing her speaking to him in a typical tone ..

Geet was angry now .. She is dying to have water and he is grinning at her as if she is a joker. .

"Maaannn " .. She shouted ..

Hearing that he marched towards bed .. First time she called his name , without " raja " title .. And he loved it ..

"Phir se kahiye ??" ..

" paani " ..

" nahi hmara naam kahiye " ..

She was confused what happened now ..

" raja maan "

" nahi khali maan "

" khali maan "

" ufff Geeettt "

" ufff Maaannn paaniii " ..

He smiled as she called once again.. Without realizing ..

He called sevak .. But it was raj mata who came to room with food and water.

"Rani Geet " .. She was happy seeing her sitting and maan too looked relieved .. But he was not so happy seeing raj mata ..

Geet tried to stand up and greet her..

" uthiye mat " .. Maan held her back sternly ..

"Maan theek keh rhay hain rani geet .. Uthiye mat .. "

" Aap ko theek dekh kar acha laga hmain ... Jo aap ne kiya .. " ..before she could complete maan cut her

" Rani ko pani peena ha " ..

Raj Mata gave her water but instead of taking it , maan asked servant to bring another glass ..

Geet was confused , why was he so indifferent with his mother ..while raj mata looked sad ..

" maan hum pani le kar aay hain " .

Instead of replying he took water from servant and made Geet drink .. And drank remaining himself .. He too was thirsty ..

"Kya baat ha raja maan ??.. Aap raj mata se baat kun nahi kar rhay ??" Geet finally asked ..

" in se kahiye k hum in se baat nahin karna chahtay " ..

Raj mata felt humiliated .. But she knew why was maan angry .. She was the reason for which Geet put her life in stake and he almost lost her .. She left the room without saying anything ..

" aap aisay kese kar saktay hain ??"

" aap ziada baat mat ki jiye "

" hum ne pucha kya baat ha ??" ap apni maa se aisay baat kun kar rhay the ?? "

" hum ne kaha na baat mat kijiye "

" aur hum ne aap se kuch pucha .. Aap ne un k chehray par udasi nahi dekhi ??"

" aap ko kya lagta ha haan ?? .. Hmain apni maa ka khayal nahi ?? Par wo hmari khushian nahi chahti "

" aisa nahi ho sakta.. Aap aisa kaisay soch saktay hain ??"

" un ki wajah se hum ne ap ko kho diya tha rani Geet .. agar aap ko kuch ho jata to ?? " .. .. He confessed in a sad tone .. The fear of loosing her was the worst pain he felt in his life , as if someone snatched his senses .. Seeing her unconscious in a pool of blood he felt insecure .. He couldn't protect her and he held raj mata responsible for that ..

" par hum abhi b zinda hain "

" haan !! Kun k aap ne lotne ka wada kiya tha .. Us raat ap ne kaha tha k aap laut kar aayen gi " .. He took her in his embrace .. He felt like doing so ..

That mention of that night brought so many memories in Geet's mind ..

She was suddenly silent and was turning red ..

Maan realized what he said .. He just mentioned "That night "

" aap ko nahi lagta k aap ne galat kiya ??"

" hum ne kya kia ??"

" hamra haq cheena ha ap ne "

"Haan ???"

" aap aisay sharma rahi hain .. Aur humain Kuch yaad b nai "

" hum ne aap se kaha tha peene k liye ?? .. Ab ap ko kuch yaad nahi to hum kya karain ??

" aap kuch mat karain hum khud kar lain gay ... bus aap theek ho jaiye ".. he smiled cheekily . she shied , he was so happy , his Rani was talking to him , in a nice and sweet tone .. he didn't want anything else

...

A month later ..

Rani Geet was sitting in front of dressing table , getting ready .. she wore her bangles and smiled .. Everything was just too perfect and royal .. she fell for maan way before but it deepened with time .. never in whole month he showed any carelessness towards her .. from her diet to medicines , and from her morning walk to her night reading .. he took care of everything ..

In all , she finally made him agree that Raj mata was not at fault leaving palace , she don't want him sad ... and she wasn't responsible for her condition ... though it was tough task but he couldn't deny her too .. Raj mata was now happy having his son and DIL together and they complement each other well

She loved this man to the core , and today he asked something from her which she couldn't deny .. he wanted to relive those moments which he lost while he was drunk ... he wanted to cherish her again and for that , he asked her permission ... he would never try to do anything without her consent ..

He gifted her a beautiful gown and jewellery ..And now she was getting ready for him ..she remembered , how unhappy she was getting ready as his bride but today everything was changed , and she never expected it .. thinking what would happen next ..she smiled and blushed

" To hmari rani akele hi muskura rahi hain , hmain bhi btaiye .. kya baat ha ???" .. maan said , when he entered the room and saw her smiling , all dressed up ..she looked gorgeous , and he kind of guessed what she must be thinking ..

" haan btaiye ?" .. he asked nearing and locking her between him and dressing ..

" wo hum soch rhay the k aap kya karne walay hain aur ..." she just put her hand covering her mouth .. " dhath !! kya bolne wali thi " ... she chided herself mentally ..Maan smiled

" To aap ye soch soch kar muskura rahi hain , k hum aaj raat kya karne walay hain ?."

She just looked down , without answering .. he made her look at him

" koi hum se bhi ziada is raat ka intezar kar rha ha ??"

" nai hum to bas , wo haan !! aap jaiye hmain abhi tyaar hona ha "

" aap aisay hi boht khubsurat lag rahi hain rani Geet !Ab hum aap ko sath le kar hi jaen gay ...

" par abhi to hum ..."

" aur kuch nahi .. aap ne jo pehna utna kafi hai .. "

Saying so he lifted her up and took her to the backyard ..towards his painting room... which was not painting room anymore , though it had all the pic he painted but it was now decorated for them like a bride ..

He entered the room and made her stand on her feet .. she looked around , amused with the decoration , and blushed with the gaze , her husband had on her ..

"aap ko kaisa laga ?"

" Ye sab , aap ne kiya ?"

" haan .. khud apne hathon se kiya .. hum se galti hui thi us din rani Geet ... hum pehli baar ko hi aisay khas bnana chahtay the , par us raat hum ne itni sharab pe li thi k hmain kuch samajh hi nahi aaya "

"shh !! .. aisa kuch nahi ha ... agar us raat aap ne pi na hoti to shayad aaj hum yahan , itne kareeb nahi hotay " ..

Maan hugged her ,feeling contented ..she just lifts his mood with words ..

He directed her towards bed and started removing his jewellery , before he untie the hook Geet stopped him

" wo ... wo hum aap se kuch kehna chahtay hain "

" aap nahi chahti k hum agay badhain ??"... he was about to go as he thought she still don't want to move on ..

" nahi ..aisa nahi hai .. " ..she stopped him from going ..

" wo .. hum kehna chahtay hain k .."

" boliye ..?"

" Hum bhi aap se pyaar karnay lagay hain Raja Maan , us raat k baad hum aap se kabhi nafrat kar hi nahi paay .. aap ka pyaar shayad hum se boht gehra ha .. hum ne aap ko boht dard diya ha , par aap se kabhi humain takleef nahi di .. itna sab honay k baad bhi aap ne hum se pyaar kiya ... hum aap k pyaar ka maan kartay hain .. aur ye rishta nibhanay ki puri koshish karain gay " ..

By the time she completed ,maan just stared her surprised .. he couldn't believe he really heard those words from her , he waited since he first saw her ... he fantasized hearing those words from her and when she was confessing he couldn't just believe he was dreaming or it was reality ..

" Aap ne jo kaha wo sach ha Rani Geet ??"... he caressed her face , anticipating her to repeat ..

" hum sach main aap se pyaar karnay lagay hain Maan " .. she shyly said his name ..

" Geet " ... he just couldn't stop kissing her cheeks , eyes and then lastly he claimed her lips into a deep ,passionate kiss .. as their tongues danced , their body reacted in a different tone .. Geet felt the rush of harmones in her body as he caressed her body over the cloth .. he was drunk that day , but today he isn't , and it was far more pleasing then before ..

He groaned heavily , when she parted to breath , as he didn't want her to break their kiss and before she catch her lost breath he again kissed her ...

All the events from him seeing her till now flashed infront of his eyes .. he thought he lost her that day in competition ..but she came back and now "He Would Never Let Her Go "

All that , what started with the game turned into a beautiful journey of two souls who loved each other like no tomorrow ..

" Pyaar k khel main , agar jeet,ta ha to sirf pyaar ..baki sab ki haar hoti ha "

... THE END ..

thanks everyone for reading and commenting .. will miss u all , catch u in new story ( LONGINGS) thread soon .. hopefully u all will join in to read .. Byee

Edited by abba12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Happy new year to you and everyone..stay blessed.🥳
Awesome epilouge dear Amna..⭐️b'fully written..👏enjoyed reading it and the whole story..😳aww loved Raja Maan and Rani Geet moments..❤️ ❤️ waiting for your next story..keep writing.👍🏼
Edited by RM14 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely epi..
waiting for your next story..


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Posted: 9 years ago
so different story
and lovely too


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Posted: 9 years ago
hi Happy New year! Thanks 4 an amazing SS! wonderfully written! Fab epilogue! superbly written! lovely end! Geet awaknes! Maan was taking care of her! Rajamata worried n brings water! Maan ignores his mom! Geet speaks 2 Maan abt this! Geet confesses! Maaneet relive that night! looking 4ward 2 ur new story! do pm for!
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome epilogue...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Happy new year.. Lovely epi finally happy ending..
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Posted: 9 years ago
tum humesha bool kyun jaathi ho..
mujei..grrr

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