Game Of Love ~ Maneet SS ~Epilogue @ 71 ~ 2 januray ~ - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

Abba is it the same story as in RAGA

yes 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! wonderfully written! Love hw Geet changed everything! She played it well! Ranaji n his ranimaa at her house! Mohinder has written off the debt! Maan stunned! Geet smirks! FB well incorporated! Maan goes n talks 2 her! She says she has won! Maan kisses her! she is angry! She says its her husband's right! he says she belongs 2 him! he talks abt love! she is confused! Does he love her?? update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update so geet told a lie to her dad that maan was worried for the debt he owed and was gonna ask help form english so geets dad decided to let go of the debt maan was disappointed she played well he went to meet her wanted to talk to her he was disappointed tgh he taunted her but he will not let her go easily kissing her he made sure to tell tha both will lose and love will win confusing her even more
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update..⭐️Geet ne toh band baja di Raja Maan k plan ki..😛he also thought what happened?she choose not to be the queen of Maan..but he went to her room and kissed her too..😳and said only love will win..waiting for next update.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

updating coz u 2 r waiting 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
thank u so much .. i got awesome readers .. awesome reviews too 😉
Edited by abba12 - 9 years ago
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Part : 05


Maan rocked his chair to and fro , he was in his dimly lit royal room , an image of event few months back flashed ...

Along the side of the lake , there laid an unconscious girl , with crowd around .. he came for a purpose there but seemed like it wasn't to fulfill today .. coz the place wasn't serene ..It had coldness and was hollow even with crowd ..

People recognized their king and cleared the way for him ... Then his eyes caught the glimpse of wet but known figure , a Britisher lady was giving her CPR , who too stopped seeing him ... don't know what got into his mind that he instantly bent on his knees to check if she was fine or not ?

" king !! she slipped and fell into lake " the lady declared ... a frown appeared on his broad forehead , and a tinge of something deep he felt but didn't understand , yet somewhere he knew this feeling ...

, " hukum agar in ka sans band ho gya ha ... " a villager spoke .

" Ab kya karna ho ga ??"

" have to give her CPR " .. the britisher spoke

" Then do it fast .. ' ... he shouted , amusing everyone with his behavior ..no one understood why is he being so concerned .. lady once again bent to give her CPR ...

But what ?? though she was the lady still he didn't like someone so close to what it was his ... and he left the place leaving everyone confused ...

Flashback ends

I cleared that dirt from ur lips today and marked them mine ... he touched his lips , smiled remembering the desperate kiss he shared with her .. and went off to sleep , planning for a good day tomorrow ...

...

" budhaa !! is umer main hum se shaadi karay ga ?? bau g bhi na ..humaari baat hi nahi maantay .. ' she was cribbing , sitting in front of mirror , getting ready for her sagai(engagement ) and cursing her to be husband ...

" Buddha !! koi apne pati ko aisay bulata ha kya ?? sahi bola tha raja maan g ne , hum apne pati ko shaadi k baad Buddha bulain gay ??"

" raja maan ?? ye kahan se aa gay beech main ?? kal unhon ne, yahann ..." she pointed at her lips , putting darker lipstick on the mark he left on her lips , but didn't call name feeling embarrassed or she was shying internally ..

"un k khel main hum ne unhain hi hara diya .. boht acha laga aik raja se jeet kar "

" wese kis pyaar ki baat kar rhay the wo ??"

" Rani geet , aap tyaar hain ??"... her father called her teasingly and made her snap out of her thoughts ..

" g bau g ... par suniye "

" ji kahiye .."

" wo buddhe se sagai karni zaruri ha ?? seedha shaadi kar dain , hum roz us k liye tyaar nahi ho saktay " ... geet said being so uninterested in everything ...

But a father's heart felt the pain in her sentence .. she didnt object when they agreed for this alliance .. coz she didn't want them to be sad .. but he knew she is not at all happy with this ... but what can he do if he cant hunt a better groom for his daughter ...

" bitiya mujhe maaf kar do .." he bent down..

" bau g !! hum jaantay hain , agar hmaari shaadi nahi hui to sab log mere sath sath aap k naam per bhi keechad uchalain gay .. logon ki ulti seedhi baton se bachnay k liye ye shaadi zaruri ha "

" main chahta tha tere liye aik raja dhund laon .. par main nahi kar paaya "

" raja ???" ... her eyes widened in shock , what if she didn't play along ?? she would have got married to a maan and was bound into a loveless marriage ..

" nahi .. raja ki zarurat nahi ha bau g ! .. aap ne jo kiya wo meri bhalai k liye kiya .. hum jaantay hain wo humain khush rakhay ga " .. she looked hopefully at her own image in mirror .. hoping against hope that the oldie might keep her happy ..

" agar baap beti ki batain khatam ho gayi hon to sagai ka waqt ho chukka ha .. geet ko le aayen ..'' rano said ,

" maa !! bas abhi aayi "

Geet put on her ghungat and left for unwanted sagai ..

... ... ...

" few more minutes rani geet ... just few minutes ... wait and watch who wins " .. he muttered painting the beautiful eyes , making another portrait .. " I just love to paint ur beautiful eyes ... ur big brown eyes are so calm and deep ..

Even when u don't say anything , ur eyes speak volumes .. each time I met u , I fell in love with ur beautiful features ..

Flashback ..

He went for horse ride today that too at evening .. riding to the unknown destination he made his horse run faster and faster ...

On the cliff top , near lake he saw a figure , and as he neared , he knew who can be there at this time .. watching sun set .. he seem to be knowing her timings now .. while she was unaware of being watched ..

He kept watching her while she at sun set ... and when it was turning dark , she ran down as usual ..

" kisi din yeh nadi main gir jaen gi .. itna tez bhagti hain " .. he muttered , unknown of the fact that his words will be written with dark ink and she will fall in lake few days later itself ..

maan chuckled at his own thought ...

When she reached down ... maan covered his face with veil , so that she don't recognize him ... It was not that he feared but still he had an image of a king to maintain ..

She narrowed her at the stranger on horse ... he noticed her actions .. then her eyes widened ... and he seemed to love those dilated pupils more ...

" khubsurat aankhain .." .. he whispered ..

" agar ye hmaara peecha kar rha ho to ??" she thought and ran off as fast as she could .she didnt recognize who was he ... he followed keeping distance till she took a narrow route and went out of sight ...

Flashback ends ...

" aap hum se hi dar kar bhag gayi thi us din , hum wo dar bhi khatam kar dain gay , bas kuch der aur " ... he put the last stroke of brush on big portrait... wore his royal suit and went off ...


PRECAP : " handa g !! singhania ki sawari yahaan aatay hue aik khaai main gir gayi .. "

Everyone was shocked listening to that ..

" wo log bach to gay magar buri tarah zakhmi hain , aur unhain lagta ha k yeh geet ki buri parchaai ki wajah se hua "


whats do u think gonna happen next 😛 ??? i dont have any bank ..so u gotto wait for the update ..but surely not oo much ..u know na 😆😉

Edited by abba12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 5
awesome update...
so he knew or saw geet 1st time months back during horse ride...hehehehe geet thought what if he follows n ran lol...love at 1st sight kya!!!
lo maan ki baat sach ho gayi she fell in river ...is maan's important work was watching geet!!!
they met again that too when she was unconscious ...
ohhoo possessive maanji so through that kiss he was trying to erase that CPR kiss that too given by a lady 🤣
geet n her jaap about her would be budhha pati 😆
but it was sad that for society she has to marry a budda but hearing her blabbering it like this is funny...
love the father daughter bond...is so beautiful...
is maan again planning his new "khel" 😆😉
precap!!! kahi maan ka koi plan to nahi??oh no again all are blaming geet

Edited by CrazyEyes - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
yes ..updated 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice ud
maan fall fr her wen he saw her
geet buddha fall in ghai

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