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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Uma I'm Eagerly Waiting For An Update Pretty Please

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Khushibloom

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Interesting concept ,loved it . Nice prologue,cs and part 1. Read all of them in one go . Really a nice start eagerly waiting to read more

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Taahir

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Uma I'm Stalking Your Threads😆😆😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: taahir004
Uma I'm Stalking Your Threads😆😆😆

😆😆 keep stalking tahir but uma is missing from cyber world 😕

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Sundari

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Posted: 9 years ago

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last time i talked to her she was in her relative's place or something!

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Dona

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Posted: 9 years ago

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yeah pooja nani k ghar gayi thi around new year but that for 2-3 days kaha tha ab to 12th ho gaya hope all is fine over there...

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Sundari

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Donnaa
yeah pooja nani k ghar gayi thi around new year but that for 2-3 days kaha tha ab to 12th ho gaya hope all is fine over there...

hmm i too dnt know baat nhi ho paayi hai,

i wil msg her today

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Dona

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Originally posted by: Sundari.

hmm i too dnt know baat nhi ho paayi hai,
i wil msg her today

where will you msg her pooja??fb pe to har roz kar rahi hu...mobile?

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IlaTanwar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#239

Hii

I am dhruvika i came across ur this ff through fb group

I like the prologue and character sketch...

Part 1

Starting was amzing Geet was dancing and won the hearts of judges and competition Meera and Pinky are so cute... Geet donated her money and she is grounded thoroughly liked her thoughts... she is really a strong willed... totally liked them...

Maan is rudely and you introduced him quite well... His grandfather died and left a will and he has to fulfill the condition of the will...

Mr Achari a criminal lawyer... i think he is an asset to Maan's and never ditch in future.. as the Face you choose also plays a negative character but... watching and reading i don't think he is also a negative or a grey shade... but he can do anything for Maan i guess...

By the does Maan's Grand Father had met geet and he chooses her for his grand son...

Eagerly waiting for the next update plzz pm if you like to...

With Regards

dhruvika