Beauty and a Dusht Danav (4) MG, Ch 22, pg 127, new thread link pg 1

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sweta

@LovelyDiva

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Posted: 9 years ago

#951

Nice update maaneet became one geet loved maan possessiveness geet also has a desire

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anum fahim

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Posted: 9 years ago

#952

Awesome update... They found a hut to stay and geet was sneezing as they reach their.. Maan odered her to change while geet was shocked but maan give her a bed sheet to cover and promised he wouldn't look she goes behind the shade to change while maan light the fire.. When she comes out maan cant keep his hand away from her and tell her to not punish him like that ever again.. While geet accepted that it was hard for her to resist him.. Maan wants to make love to her, but seeing geet hesitation he tries to back away but geet holds him and give her consent and they lost themselves in eachother... Waiting for next.. Update soon.. Thanks for pm... :)

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#953

It was hot... Hot... I liked the way u have written it... their passion was at peak... Both cant resist themselves from each other... They become one right?? I gt little confuse at this...

I'm happy that they both are now together... Hope they will always be together in all circumstances... Naive geet and possessive maan.. Loving this combo.. Update soon.. Waiting

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#954

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC
Late comment kia tha 2,3 din se mood theek nhi tha.. cozn ki death hogai.. young age me.. was depressed..🥺

so sad

may God rest her soul in peace

🤗

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nish285

@nish285

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Posted: 9 years ago

#955

Seems like avviii... u hd a wonderful vacation...probably in very good mood ...may be dat s y u gave such an """ooohhh lllaaa laaas "". Update...:P:P...
...oh my goodnesss...i am still not able to believe it...i had nt expected dat u had planned it dis early for maaneet in d story... .
But dat does nt mean i am complaining...:-D:P...after all d update was sssooo...:P...and seems like d challenge got the better of geet...;-)...
For maan...the guy has so much longing for geet...wat do i say ...may be it is his loneliness for such a long time dat...he has so much desperateness to be close to geet...
Needless to say..it was a very steamy hot update...wwwaaaiiitttiiinnnggg for next update...

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nish285

@nish285

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Posted: 9 years ago

#956

Aur abhi tak teaser nahi diyaaa...??:-\

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aeries10

@aeries10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#957

Hot update...
Maan and geet stuck in traffic due to heavy downpour...took shelter in a hut ...Both are wet due to rain...Both are attracted towards each other...They express their desire for each other and become one ...
hey you are awesome writer...plz add few not joke momemts along with romance

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Deepa

@spvd

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#958

Part 20

Awesome...

So lovely...

Geet finally confessed her feelings to Maan...

So Brij is playing with Daman...

Oh ho Taiji has come to know about Geet staying in Delhi with Maan being related...

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Deepa

@spvd

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#959

Part 21
Lovely...
Geet is so happy and back to her self...
Maan is so amused...

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leena63

@leena63

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#960

Very very hot update
romance flow in your writing
how innocent geet here blundered she couldn't resist him so she gave him challenge
maan broke his promise to this innocent,hot & sexy geet
geet wanted to steel this awesome moments from destiny & they became geet ka maan & maan ki geet

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