Beauty and a Dusht Danav (4) MG, Ch 22, pg 127, new thread link pg 1

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miss_mystery

@miss_mystery

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Posted: 9 years ago

#721

Of-course we missed you so much Avi
Loved the update so much
That Daman...I Hate him but I know Maan knows how to tackle him
Maaneet...What to say about them
Loved the lovely moment
Waiting for more surely
Take Care

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bina_a

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Posted: 9 years ago

#722

wow... Maan and Geet on a quick tour and geet challenging maan 😆.

So geet is soon gonna meet her past is it!! Ab kya hoga. Will wait eagerly for the next chapter. You have a great holiday Avi :)

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maansi25

@maansi25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#723

Lovely update
The most fantastic way to say
" I LOVE YOU"
Geet taking all the time.

Here
The day in the mountains
That too
With
The challenge of
" No touching, no kissing no hugging "
And we are sure
Our Hero will win.

In the temple with the blessings of
Sada Suhagan raho
The day is made

But on the way
Chakka jam
And wet night alone
Imagineering
Hoping all will be well
Waiting

Edited by maansi25 - 9 years ago

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jasika

@jasika08

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+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#724

Lovely update😊

Waiting for next update

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mitani

@mitani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#725

Nice update. Like most the nok jhok. Satan of geet also e joying.

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Deepa

@spvd

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#726

Part 19

Excellent...

Wow what a change in Maan...

Geet is happy..

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Rosmitha

@Rosmitha

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#727

superb update...
loved maaneet scene...
i like the way u write the story...
amazing dear...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#728

hi thanks 4 da pm n magnificent update! superbly written! Hate this Daman! he nw know where Geet is! 😡 he is nt gng 2 spare her! Bt Maan will b there! Geet's inner thoughts well portrayed! Maan is taking her out! Geet is so happy! these moments with Maan r beautiful! she recalls her confession n wt happened after that! splendid moments! Geet looks gorgeous n Maan is mesmerised! she drools over him n he teases her! so she challegens him nt to touch her! Maan shocked! bt was she wrong to challenge him! Maan's intense passionate looks r enough! bt she touches him! the priest blesses them! they have to stop cos of the weather! Hmmm of cos RTM! 😃 update soon