ERRONEOUSLY SEDUCED # 9 Updated NOTE on P 94: 105 / 2-10-2015 - Page 48

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Posted: 9 years ago
Common sweetheart ab itni baat to main teri maan hi sakti hu na 😈

Originally posted by: brandgurti




oye sentyyy hoke masooommm log hazaro baate bol jaate h eska ye matalb nai tu sun ye wish Hindi ko vish ( poison) bante der na laageyge ... tu toh try bhi na kariyo mere wish puri karne k baby !!! wase baddi saint bann rahe h acche pyaari poori na ki jaate tere se 😡 but buri wish jhaat se sun le ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Sad update...
Maan lost geet and his baby because of his ego...
Parth brings smile on everyone face even in this situation...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome dear...
sorry 4 commenting late...
again becoz of his ego maan lose geet...but geet still tells baby to not get angry on maan...parth cheers geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
Likes to complete ho gaye ..
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PART - 47



Two days passed in aloofness. Geet was caged in her own pain. It becomes an integral part of her life. Since he came in her life she only have one companion and that is never ending pain and sufferings. Her eyes not ready to dry for a moment. Is her mistake of loving him was so big that she was awarded with pain and humiliation only. She was asking from her self but her heart denied to answer her queries because even after facing so much happening she couldn't stop loving him. His absence is killing her and gradually she stepping towards depression.



All are worried for her. Dadima don't want to force her but she can't leave her alone in this vulnerable condition. This time she needed some one to take full care of her.


Geet was starting wall, sitting alone in her room. Except a hope of baby every thing was died in her. If baby is not nourishing inside her then she lost her life the moment he threw her out. Parth came from school and saw her gloomed. He quickly moved and came back with Alya. He made her sit near Geet. She didn't even realize their presence till Alya made sounds and pulling her scarff in her mouth. Geet came back to her senses and weak smile came on her pale face.


"Alya babu see Geet chachi. Say chachi." Parth taught his sister that Geet is her chachi. Alya was staring her like she was trying to recognize her.




Seeing her mute and silence Geet caressed her cheek tenderly and opened her arms to invite her but Alya not so much friendly with her so she glued with bed and not ready to move. When Geet called her she stare Parth in confusion.


Parth kissed her and pushed her towards Geet. "Alu she is chachi. Say chachi." He again feed the word to her learning mind. Parth repeats again and again till she called her.


Alya strain herself as Parth constantly pushing her to speak. "Chiii", after putting so much efforts she only able to say chii and Parth burst in laugh.


Parth's giggle filled the room with life and seeing him laughing Alya to giggled and clapped. She felt pride of doing some thing spl. She grinned showing her two teeths.


Meera was came to see her and found her composed in the company of her children. She to join them. Alya glance at her mother and crawled to her. "Mumma Chiii..." she pointed towards Geet and told her mother that she is Chiii. Parth laughed more louder.


"Buddhu chii nahi chachi." He corrects her. Alya get confused as according to her she pronounced right.


"Parth..don't call her buddhu." Geet caution him for mocking Alya. "She is very intelligent. Hai na Alya?" Geet tried to intract with her.


Alya gave a strain look to Parth exact like Maan. "Okay I won't. Alu sorry..." Parth apologized to Alya and kissed on her head. Alya turns happy and clapped again.


Geet noticed her antics. "Meera ye to bilkul..."


"Bhai ki tarah faces banati hai. I told you na Dadima always noticed her and told us." Meera complete her unsaid words.


Meera left Geet with her kids. She knew now they will handle her. Geet play with both and Parth showed them monkey dance. He always do to entertain Alya and today he had two spectators. Soon Alya become friend with her chii. All three enjoying and absorb Geet's stress.


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Sameera visits Maan's office to show him her shopping for their marriage but he don't show any interest at all.


"Don't you like it Maan?" She asked to involved him.


"Sameera I am busy. Buy what ever you want and please don't come in office time." He directly told her to leave.



Sameera burned with anger but she only gave him a her a very special fake smile. She left and reached to her mansion. She threw all the things in anger. Her father came and asked the reason.


"Sameera thinks once again. He is not reliable plus he already called off the engagement for such a mere girl." Mr. Khanna caution her after hearing her.


"Dad he slapped me for that bitch. Same time I decided to teach both for insulting me. Maan love her but his ego not allow him to accept the fact or ab main ye hone b nahi dungi. He broke her and I will brake him gradually. Maan meri jidd hai dad and I do anything to get him." She clears her intentions and not ready to listen to her father even.


In evening Maan sat on dinner table and get angry on all. He threw his plate and scold all. "Sir it's not our fault. Geet mam would take care of your every small need." Vinny's head is lower but his tone is hard like a slap. He wants to show him how much she was doing for him.



Maan's fists clenched hard and nostrils fluffed in anger. He glared him. "Don't tell me that you all are good for nothing. If not able to do any work then leave the job. I will hire better employees then you. Geet k aane se pehle bhi kaam ho raha tha or aage bhi hoga. You get that." Maan snarled and left the table without eating.




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Posted: 9 years ago
I'm first I'm first... Ooo yeaaHhh... Ooo yeah ... 😆 read it one go... Please someone slap maan Singh khurana... And brain wash him so that we can teach him new things... That Sam is a bitch and geet is the one whom he love love... Urrg.. Hate sameera... Oo... Baby was cute.. Chii... Haye... I wanna cuddle her.. She is a cutie pie...
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Here is the update dear

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Posted: 9 years ago
Yeh maan bi na apni ego Mein sab Gaya raha hai hope time par ushe hosh as jaye

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