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Posted: 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

This OS has only 3 parts. If you like I'll post the other two parts.

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

hi congrats on the new OS! Thanks 4 da pm! superb emotional update! well written! Feeling 4 Geet! she is insulted n taunted cos of her short leg! her sister is getting married! Geet refuses 2 go b4 the bridegroom's family as she fears tht they will break off the wedding! Pari n Geet share a wonderful bond! Maan Khurana is the wedding planner! he collides into Geet! he is mesmerised n affected! he hears her voice n is drawn to her! his friend teases him n offer 2 help him! Maan refuses! Geet stands n watches! Maan offers 2 take her in! she refuses! Maan stunned seeing her cry! he apologises! Geet in her room! Pari leaving! she insists Geet come down! Maan realises she is the bride's sister! he goes 2 attend to a call! some ladies pity her. Geet! she is in tears! update soon!

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Binish

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow superb concept and start yaar.. Ppl r such a**.. Poor geet.. Every girl dreams of mr. Perfect or atleast someone to love and protect her.. But having something thats not normal for the society it becomes hard to live in that same society.. I honestly hate our society for having such backward thinking.. Cont sooon hun.. Very iteresting

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Soni

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice os...the start is good and the topic too everyone want Mr or Mrs perfect but everyone is special in their different way of life...Poor Geet...update soon dear

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ambbiha

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Posted: 10 years ago

Interesting

Would love to read more😉😉😉

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Hanishadevi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Very sad fr geet n her fly... Just bcs of short leg she was rejected fr marriage... She persuade her parents to get Pari married first n avoid the function.. She met maan n both feet attracted but push a side... Maan is a wedding planner.. Can't wait for next part.

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Twenty1st

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hi Caller123 firstly I didn't know you wrote that too so beautifully until I checked your hyperlink, man where have I been, not here that's for sure 😆 will try and read your previous work hopefully but don't quote me since life is incredibly busy these days

Coming to this OS it is extremely nice, totally different. Geet has a physical abnormality which isn't exactly something to discriminate against but people would be people that too shallow and low minded. How rude and insensitive if them, Geet now feels lowly of herself regardless of what her family thinks just because of some cheap mentality. I feel for her but I'm sure maan would show he real beauty soon and fix those secluded people a thing about inner beauty

Can't wait for part 2

Thank you for a diff OS

Sophie