DARK TEMPTATION 2 #2 Updated LAST PART+EPILOGUE on Pg 135/ 8-12-2015 - Page 97

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dragon-Heart

Now u tell what would i do? :(


ya i understand that's a problem . issi liye month me 1 update bhi chalega . don't stop writing plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
This time i am not sure about anything

Originally posted by: metromasti


ya i understand that's a problem . issi liye month me 1 update bhi chalega . don't stop writing plzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dragon-Heart

This time i am not sure about anything


plzzz think about it . its a request
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part-33
Shocking and Emotional update
dint expected this one at all
Maan died no way he can die .. Omg you can't do this to maan how can you do like that nai ye
nai hosakata I know maaneet hurt their love ones Both dig their own grave did so many mistakes even
worst but you can't punish maaneet like that at least gave them a chance !!
Agree humne bhi bura bura bola but aaysa nai chha tha k maaneet aayse suffer kary ok manna spoil kids h but ek chance toh banta h na !!!!
Maan denied to go back then ... Before leaving Maan told athrave him to be a good boy and take care of his mom
n grandpa and all and he left
You made me cry yaar .. it will be break samarth n athrave of course geet too (but I knew it Richu devil h but sweet waali I have full faith on you ) ...

Part-34
Todd you you are the most cutest sweetest devil muahhh love you ...
Maan is alive what a relief but he got hurt n in very critical situation anf fighting for his live ...
But seriously a heart wrenching update and the way you portrayed samarth and athave emotions its commandable
A completely shattered father and his pain and maan is his life line and he can't survived without him !! Other side athrave baby awww he even don't know whats going on while doing last ritual he is scared being in such place goshh my heart went out for him when crying to take him away from here !! Samarth is broken and he got attack he is admitted in hospital and geet is in
Numb or say her weird behaviour ...
In hospital Athrave saw unconscious maan and geet can't pin point her reaction at all ... both samarth
and maan life in danger n everyome is in pain ...
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Part-35
Amazing update
One of the awesome update and amazingly written scenes and last but not the least Athrave-Maan-Samarth moments that's truly magical loved it muaahh Baby
Awww Athrave baby did magic bcoz of him both maan and samarth survived n athrav made his dada come back and
maan made his dad come back such beautiful moment !! Maaneet littile angel who not only brought back his dad and
Dadu from death even he completed his family ... now maan decides that he would go back to his family just for
his baby n dad coz this incident make his realise how wrong was he now he will do everything to being a good father n son
even try to accept geet n good husband though he feels that she doesn't need him !!
And geet seriously don't wanna judge her at all coz don't know what her POV so I'll wait but one thing is sure
something is going on in her mind and she is planning something ...

Part-36
Wonderful update
Finally athrave baby baby got his Dada but he is so insecure for his dada n dont' want to leave him for a second feel so bad
seeing him scared hope maan didn't take athrave's insecurities for granted and gave some time n doesn't
disappoint him n shower his all love n care and fullfil his all needs n being a amazing dada for his baby ...

But as usually maaneet and their never ending cold,wild,hot, etc what not war KUCH NANHI HOSAKTA INKA Grrr mujhyi toh aje tak inkaa looch aayi ulfat he samajh nai aayi and all credit goes to your Devilgiri !!!!!
Maaneet live in same roof and share same room but they are close yet far both are feeling uncomfortable with
each other and not in talking terms !!! Maan avoiding geet or say he giving her heer space n giving his
all time to atharve n his dad and KC and show his Msk skills in business n samarth is so proud of him !!!!
its his another way to avoide geet make him self more busy in business ...
Other hand Geet trying to provoke n make him pour his anger out but it doesnt effect coz now he is completely changed
Samarth feels their cold behavior n trying to send both out but they denied ... but i really feel bad for maaneet can't see them l
in pain yaar...
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Part-37
maan came back from his business tour and he brought so many gifts for athrave,samarth and meera except geet n she feels hurt but didn't show ... but samarth noticed and asked maan about that why he didn't brought gift for her n he simply demise it made samarth angry n he takes her shopping ...
Geet seriously don't know how to expressed emotions and all getting all cranky seeing maan's indifference behavior towards her
she confronted him if he hate her so much so she go away but maan denied, said he cannot seperate his baby's mumma
and he wants to fulfill his duties as a husband and do what geet wants and geet's unexpected demands OMG what was that ???
and maan without any emotions agree ,when hr is ready to fulfil her demands she stop him ...
Maaneet and their complicated relationship ufff they are tooo much yaar :P enko khud ko he nai acknowledge karna aapne feelings what exactly they want ??? pathetic !! But wouldn't blame coz both had their own set of reasons !! He most important Maaneet communication gap and really needed a proper conversation n need to sort out their
differences if not for themselves at least for their baby's sake !!!
maan's friends meet him after a long time and the they spend sometime alone all sensed his changed attitude
and even his friends realize that all's not well between maaneet ...

Part-38
Samarth got to now thru vikrant n adi about maan and now knows maan still hiding his pain n accepted all
just for him n athrave ... he forcefuly send maaneet to vikram engagment and its suffocated him n the hidden
desires he couldn't handle all this and geet finally bursts n their she slapped maan in all this atharave being prey of geet anger she slapped him and and he had high fever that make situation worst everyone is angry with her bedda gark
ho enka aapne differences resolve chhyi but nai enko toh ladna h but seriously felt really bad for
maaneet yaar both did mistakes and now repainting their deeds but in their own way ...
Maan is damm angry which is ok and athrave baby too ...

For meera and her GYAANBANI no comments (just wanna strangle her grrr my inner thought) bcoz ager maan ne
suffer kiya hai toh geet ne bhi kiya h both are equal ager samarth ne yi sab kaaha hotana then I have no issues or wasse bhi maaneet ne aapne rishtayi ka taamasha banna rakha h toh yehi honna h ...



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Posted: 9 years ago
Try to post tommorrow
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Updating soon dear
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LAST PART

Samarth's words made both realize how much pain they gave to him and Sunjay. They did everything to made their lives good but in return only got their rudeness. Maan joined his hands and apologize to both. "Dad you are right. We always only think about ourselves and hurt all those who love or cares for us. Please forgive us."


"I always want to see you happy son and for that I used all weapons. Sunjay wants her to get everything most importantly a respectful life. So what our fault in that? Chalo humara na sahi kam se kam apni aulad ka hi soch lete. Wo bhi tum dono se nahi hua. You hurt him for different reasons. That's why hum teeno ko ye sab karna para. I hope you both will not repeat your mistakes in future or kuchh nahi kehna hai mujhe." Samarth poured out his heart and left the KM.


Atharav was confused why his parents had tears in their eyes. He wiped them and console both in his sweet way. Whole day passed and Samarth spend time in office, not ready to talk to any of them. Sunjay was with him and Meera busy in her own office work. Both are sad coz he was upset with them.

Meera and sunjay came back but not Samarth. "Meera dad kaha hai? Maan asked in worried way.

"Office and he told me to inform you that he will be late today." She told and ready to move when Geet stops her.


"Meera I know what you told me its all a part of a plan but still I want to ask. Are you really think that I don't deserve Maan?" She asked her doubts.


"Geet I have nothing against you. What I said I had to. All I want is to see you both happy and together. Pata hai tum dono bahut lucky ho coz you have Samarth and Sunjay Uncle who love you and take care of your every small thing. Mujhse puchho bina kisi bade k akele manage karna kaisa hota hai." Her eyes welled up.


"You are not alone Meera. You are a part of a family." Both sorted and she expressed as much she can.



Geet apologies to her Uncle also. But Maan was waiting for his dad. Samarth came and straight went to his room. He changed and laid on his bed to relax himself. But soon he found one arm wrapped around him. Surely it wasn't a small one of Atharav. Samarth trying hard to control his smile.


"Agar smile aa rahi hai to usko rokna nahi chahiye." Maan taunts.


"Or tumko nahi lagta ab tum bade ho gaye ho or tume apne room me jake sona chahiye rather than on my arms." Though Samarth snap and asked him to leave his side but deep inside his heart was bouncing with joy. Since he came to know about son, his arms always craved for Maan. He wants to love him made him slept in his arms but that time Maan only flinched off his hands whenever he tried to hold him. And now his 30 year old son laying on his arm and also hold him like a small kid.



"Really dad? but someone told me that bachhe maa baap k liye kabhi bade nahi hote." Maan paste his dialogue to him in reply.

"When your mom left us I tried to make you sleep like this, to comfort my baby, but you jerked me. So now why you come?" Samarth trying to pretend hard.

"Common dad stop faking your anger. Because we both know how much happy you are this time. Your baby, I mean big baby wants to sleep so stop talking." Maan to made him shut with his replies and melts him in seconds. He caressed his head and remembered those days when he was a child.


But their moment don't go long as Atharav found danger to his space. He came and screamed louder. "Dadu threw dad out its my place. Main sounga." Atharav even pushing Maan away.



"Oye you go and sleep with your mom. Ye jagah pehle meri hai", Maan also not less. He to behave like a small kid and not ready to vacate the side.


"No you go and sleep there. Ye meri jagah hai. Hai na dadu?" Now he dragged him and Samarth become sandwich between both. Atharav using his full power to threw his dad, because he can't share his dadu with anyone.


"Maan grew up kyu rula rahe ho use?" He tried to convience him.


"Ye galat baat hai dad.pote k ate hi bete ki value kam ho gai." Maan to emotionally blackmailed him.


Samarth kissed on his forehead. "No one take your place son. You are my Arpita's symbol. But I think this time tume Geet k sath hona chahiye.isse zada golden chance nahi milega." Samarth winked and Maan got up from the bed. Atharav drag him out and quickly locked the door from inside. Maan's eyes widened on his son's possessive behavior.


"Dadu dont made dad sleep here, ok?" He instructs and laid besides his grandfather. Samarth nodded and cuddles him.


Maan went to his room where his hungry lioness waiting for him. She locked the room first before starts the interrogation. She narrowed her eyes on him. "Kaha the?" She knotted and asked, locking him between wall and her. Maan told her the truth. "Then why you come go and sleep there. Biwi wait kar rahi hai karne do. Tume konsa ab mere me intrest bacha hai." Her furious tone made him smile but he hided. Geet leave him and asked him to leave. She turned her back and start walking but Maan grabbed her by waist and tugged her to him.



"You know what dad said. Isse golden chance nahi milega so why I waste it." He rested his chin on her shoulder but she nudge him and trying to move out of his grip as he was teasing her.


"Papa ne kaha isliye. Get lost." She grew angry and her cheeks turn red. Maan smirked and firm his grip.


He nuzzled her neckline. "I will but right now I have some other plans." His husky voice caressing her bare skin as he dropped her nighty in a swift. She swirled and both kissed each other passionately. Both parted when air much needed. Her body was on fire with need and desire which both suppressed since long.

Her voice was shaken violently. "I need you Maan. Love me. Love me like you always do. I want my old Maan." She told her wish and slammed her lips on his. Soon his shirt ws tored apart and laying on a floor.

Give me give me love n give me more
Thoda sa mujhse love le bhi aao
My lover gave you dounce and I feelin' low
Again and again and again
What's danger, what danger, what danger
Take me down, down, down
What danger, what danger, what danger
Take me down, down, down
Take me down, down, down
Take me down, down, down
Aaj dikhade mujhe love karke
Oh baby baahon mein bharke
Oh jo bhi sohca sapnon mein
Woh aaj dikhade mujhe sab karke
Aaj dikhade mujhe love karke
Oh baby baahon mein bharke
Oh jo bhi sohca sapnon mein
Woh aaj dikhade mujhe sab karke
Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera
Tu hi meri raaton ka nasha
Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera
Soya huaa jism jagaa


Both leads towards their bed and she threw him on bed. Maan always love her this side when she dominates him in bed. Geet came over him and sat on his hard member. She moved her soft and warm part against his hard one. Maan groan widely. She leaned over him and licked his salty skin from his navel to his taut peaks, where she made lazy circles with her tip. Maan crushed her hips in his palms pushing her more to him. She move above and Maan locked her hands, while exploring her sweet mouth.

Sardi mein garmi hai
Poori besharmi hai
Jaanam jaayaz jo
Humne woh
Ghalati ki hai
Please dikhade tu gazab karke
Labon ke paas lab karke
Socha hai jo bhi sapno mein
Woh aaj dikhade mujhe sab karke
Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera
Tuhi meri raaton ka nasha
Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera
Soya hua jism jaga


Soon he rolled her down and awarded her for what she had been waiting for. While playing with her mounds he thurst her harder, till she come for him. After 5 years they made love to each other. Whole night spend in their passion.


Maan was laying to relax and she was resting on him. "You okay?" He asked may be first time and amused her to.


"Aaj ye swal you? Its not our first time. ..." Geet asked the reason of his concern.



"But its our first time after a long gap. I know tum nahi btogi but I hurt you. Hai na?" Maan stirred to glance in her eyes. "Our session, its painful right and don't lie as I already knew." Maan said confidently.


"Tume kaise pata?" She was surprised.



Maan stood up and search for some ointment. He got and came back to her. Maan parted her legs and applied on sore area. "After 5 years you done it. The moment I entered in you,it take time jo pehle nahi hota because we are regular. This time it take force as your body not remain habitual. That part set like before." Maan whispered to her and she flushed furiously may be first time. How much he knew about her and without even telling.


Maan took her again in his arms. "So now you trust me na that I don't cheat you."


Maan pinched her nose. "I always knew it, you stupid. Dad told me every thing and I knew he wasn't lying to convince me." Maan caressed her tenderly. "Geet I never admit but now I wanna tell you that I love you. You are the first girl who made me crazy and that will never changed."



Geet raised to glance in his eyes. "I love you to Maan." She to confess and both kissed again before their next session.


The end...




EPILOGUE



ONE year passed and their passion will increases by the time. In last one year both explore their relationship in many new ways. Samarth now don't need to take tension all the time except when Both father and son fight for his warmth. Atharav become aggressive when it comes to share his dadu. Otherwise he is his father's son. Never take side of Geet.


"Hehehe zada khush mat ho. Ye no do aanewale hai na dekhna ye meri side hi lenge. Hai na Meera?" Geet asked to her for assuranc while caressing her big bump.



"Meera ko kya pata. Hai na Atharav. Babies kiski team me honge?" Maan quickly asked from Atharav before she replied.


"Humari." He announced louder.


"Chup kar dady ka chamcha." Geet irritates.


"Nahi aise kaise tumhari. Mumma to Geet hai to babies will take mumma's side." Meera support her words. But same time her labour starts and they took her to hospital. Maan went inside with her while Meera stay out with Atharav. She informed Samarth and Sunjay both. Geet was in so much pain and Maan consoling her.



"Shut up you idiot. Ye sab tumhari wajhse hua hai." Both were fighting there to, while doc aand team trying for baby to arrive soon.


Maan snap as he distracting her. "Really its all my fault? And what about you. You jealous freak you want new baby who take your side." Maan provoked and she slapped him made him numb.


"Relax jaan just relax." He hold her hand firmly, meantime first baby come out. Its a girl. Doc handover her to nurse for cleaning. Maan kissed her. "Its a girl just like you. Cute and adorable.


Before she took relief breath her labour pain starts again. Second baby to ready and soon arrives to the world. Its a baby boy. After cleaning they handover their babies to them. Both are small but adorable. Atharav came inside with his dadu and bua. All blessed the babies. "Sunjay b sham tak pahunch jayega. God bless you beta. I am so happy today." Samarth's one decision finally turn fruit ful. His Children not only happy but was on a right path. Now his tries showing through Maan's sucess, Geet's care. Their love not for each other but for whole family.


Their journey which starts with Lust now strengthened with love, care and trust. All are happy, and Atharav have no boundaries as he got two sibling together. Their Dark Temptation leads them towards light of LOVE and they got their true soul mates in each other.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice part yaar super finally sab thik ho gaya nice epilogue awazing dear

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