DARK TEMPTATION 2 #2 Updated LAST PART+EPILOGUE on Pg 135/ 8-12-2015

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jasmine15

@jasmine15

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#981

My fav story...finally Maaneet realize their mistakes... Atharav too possessive about his daadu..maan n atharav both wants samarth :) dat was cute scene. Maaneet blessed with twins..love dat line maan says...c wanted child coz c was jealous of atharav siding maan always :D

D passionate , lost duo finally on tracks..n living a happy married life n staying with family... A great journey

Richa keep writing more dear

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hottyangel

@hottyangel

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#982

amazing update... maan and his son fighting to sleep in samrats room is amazing... finally geet and maan started their life afresh... happy ending to their love...

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Kshitija

@krndr

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#983

Lovely part

But I am sad that it ended

I loved the whole story

Loved Maan and Samarth's convo after Samarth returns home late from office and Maan goes and sleeps on his arms holding his father

Ufff Atharav is so possesive for his Dadu

Loved seeing Maan and Atharav fighting for Samarth

Maaneet's consumation scene was too good

It showed their supressed longing for each other

Loved their confession and Maan's care for Geet's pain

Father and Son have become one team but only cant share Samarth and poor Geet is sidelined

The labour room scene wherein Geet cursing and slapping Maan was hillarious

Finally she delivered both the babies

The happiness that has come to this Jhalle couple after all the misunderstandings and trying and testing times is worth it all

Hi Richa read in some comment where you mentioned that you are ending all your stories

Plz plz plz its a request think about us readers who love your stories and wait to read them

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#984

last part n epilouge both are great

maan n geet confess their love to each other n live happy life as family with 2 new addiion

very great story

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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#985

superb ending with perfection
their journey start from lust but its complete with love n trust. their elders made their life n realised them , how relations have value and importance.
main n atharev fight for samarth was adorable.
main n Geet's passion was best part. thx for d lovely story.

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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#986

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#987

hi richa

lovely update

one more story ended ..

love the epilogue ..they way maneet bonded again and now they r happy family ..two cute babies there ..

samarth happy to see all happy ..artharv fighting for his dadu ..that was hilarious ..

thank u for lovely story richa

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#988

Both updates are awesome
Finely Maaneet ko apni mistake ka ehsaas hora hai aur wo samarth aur sanjay se uske liye maafi maangte hai
Awe aatharv is possessive for his dadu
Maaneet are blessed with twins
Beautiful ending
Beautifully written
Loved it

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#989

awesome ending...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr lovely story...

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#990

Beautiful parts. Maan and Geet realized their mistakes and apologised from Samarth, Sanjay and Meera. Maan came to Samarth room to sleep with him. Atharv is jealous and try to throw Maan away from his dadu. Maan and Geet also resole their mistakes and start a new life. Geet gave birth to twins.