First of all, I'm really so very sorry for commenting so late. Because I have been so caught up with a lot of stuff lately I had seen the update PM in my inbox but I knew if I'd read it in a hurry it'd be such an injustice because even if I wasn't aware of it being the last part, I knew Maaneet post wedding HAD to be epic.
And you left me with no doubts it really has been 👏👏👏
Girl I literally owe you so much thanks. First for being a reader who wanted to read such a soulful and peaceful end. And also because I needed it. For my own reasons. Needed it so badly.
The way Maan and Geet became one. Their union. Even if I have read countless romance fiction and also on Maan Geet too, this very particular one is Very special to me. I repeat. Very much.
I don't know what it was, either the way you wrote about their blissful intimacy or the feeling which they gave me, of two souls finally becoming one, forgetting their past their grief. The purity with which they loved each other so much the so pure so heart melting way they completed each other in all aspects- physically but even more than that they actually completed each other's broken souls, filled in the broken gaps of each other's soul. I cried so much. I didn't realise when did my tears had just made their way down my face. This one reunion is so personal to me. This MG is too close to my heart. And for that, I thank you. Thank you so much dear.
Even though I'd miss this FF but im so agreeing on the point of this story ending here for fair reason. Their story began with Armaan and the best way to end it is just the way you have done.
Thank you again for writing the last part.. This one was SO needed. By them. And more importantly by me too. Thank you.
Its not easy to let go of some irreparable damages in life. Some ugly happenings.. We can't undo or repair them. And coming to the part of letting them go, that too with a soothing pain and happiness. Its so beautiful the way you wrote it. And I'm glad you didn't hurry through the part of their one last address to the one person they both loved the most. Thank you for including their diaries..I couldn't love Maan more for the way he addressed his beloved younger brother and told him he finally was happy. And I felt each and every word of Geet's last letter to Armaan so apt. She tells him she's finally letting the grief go and be happy with the wonderful man who loved her so much and completed her life. The moment they finished their last goodbye to Armaan. that one poetic kiss. Because Maan deserved it. He really did. And more importantly, Geet had to do it, to make their story complete because otherwise it would have been left unfinished and incomplete.. I love how their imperfections and brokenness fitted so perfectly together. Geet was truly meant for Maan..
And the very last moment. You penned it down with the most perfect gesture the most perfect justice a writer should do to such a beautiful story. The peace they felt and then the soft breeze which flew as if Armaan thanked them both and blessed them. Its so good dear. I don't have more apt words im running out of stuff to describe how it has made me feel.. Letting go .. Only lucky people can get to have a chance to let go and bury their broken parts, that too, so beautifully..
There'd be an epilogue too, I'd wait for that as well.
Thank you for this amazing and beautiful love story on my dearest Maaneet.. Thank you for touching my life with your write up dear. It doesn't undo anything but it still has meant so much.
I hope to see something new from you too soon. Please never stop writing.
Edited by NoshiMaaneet - 9 years ago
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