ll Muse ll MG SS.. new n unedited version Short SS

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Posted: 10 years ago
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ll MUSE ll
This is Behene De Anniversary Short Stories...
This is New unedited version of "MUSE "
What side I didn't explore during anniversary will be here...

but few of my readers read the OS n few didn't...n I got many pms as they want to read it as Short stories few said full FF but I am already having 5-6 FF running so can't give more time..but as I promised my readers I am giving 5-6 parts story short story its...
So, my readers who aren't read it pls try it n give ur view..as its new
who r already read it pls read it as its not same OS it's different unedited version n give me ur view...


So pls try my new SHORT Story
"MUSE "
Love
Rakhi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Muse

Muse An inspiration ...for artist for a person...some time muse turn a beautiful dream sometime a distant dream ...But artist still dream about muse...

Muse is not only inspiration but more than inspiration...

As per Greek Mythology & Roman Mythology, Muse is each of nine goddesses, the daughters of Zeus and Mnemosyne...

Concept:-

Muse...a small SS based on two friends who r each other muse n lover yet they don't know their love is distance love unless something happen..someone become catalyst between them n the Muse turn Lover...Soul mate

Character Sketches:-

Maan Singh Khurana 22yrs old pursuing Master in Arts from famous Arts college..he is already famous for his work..he start exhibition ...he is perfect yet has disturb family life...

Geet Handa :-16yrs old young girl who loves painting dream about her prince charming .her father don't like her cause she is girl...she don't hear properly n can't speak also properly..

Edited by Krishna_Sourav - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue:-

She is just 11yrs old n he is just 17yrs old teenager cum going to be adult boy...

She is running n running ..she almost falling when he hold her n said kya hua sweetu...itna daur kyuon rehe ho...

She smiles n said seee see this...

He took it n said hmmm...She said with pout Aapka painnntting aayyyaa hainnn...

He said hmmm..

She said hawww...apkkooo khushiii nehiii huaaa...

He sat on the rock n said Vikram fought again mom want to send him to hostel...Dadi ma having chest pain...then Mom said if dadi ma didn't listen then she will give divorce to DAD n blame him for all n take us all..He narrated his family problem , his only solace , his sweetu with whom he can share anything...

She gasped n said whattt? Shaadddiii kiassee toddd sakkktteee hainnn...

He shrugged it off then she said iyeee tohhh Sathhh janaammooon kaaa risstttaaa hain...

He smiles , he want to say something to her but he can't , he said kitab mein hota hain sweetu...

She nodded nooo realll mein hotttaa hain...

He want to argue but he didn't want to break her heart by hard reality n nodded n she giggle to see him agreed...when he notice a burn marks on her palm n said what is this?

She said ohhh I falll downnn..

He said sweetuuu she hold her ear n said sowwieee

He laughed at his cute gesture n said my sweetu...

She giggled then He took her with him to his room..when his mom said u bring her here again.u know Dr said no stress for ur dadi ma..

He hold her hand tightly n said if u stop doing any more drama MOMMM then there will be enough peace n no stress for DADI MA or anyone else now...she is my best friend .. don't like when other interfere in my life ..

When Sweetu Gasped n said appp iye kyaa kehe rehe ho

His mom said how dare u? n slapped him hard n said girl dare u interfere in our life ...thik se baat karna nehi aataa aur chale aaye muh uthake

But he took her in shield n said if u think m bad then blame me but dare ur blame my sweetu...

His mom was going to say but then said I will see u n warned her

He took her n apply balm when she cried n he asked does it hurt ...

She nodded no then took the little balm n apply to his cheek...n blow it as if soothing the pain unknown then a teenager who r going to be adult boy feeling something ...


Umeed ko aag laga zara

Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara

Ghan itna baras ke galne lagoon

Mein paani ke upar tarne lagoon

5yrs later

Now sweetu turn 16 n her all-rounder (oops she called him fondly as he know n do everything perfectly ) turn 22 ...

She laughed hysterically when he said u again fall down n now r laughing...She jump n dancing like crazy n said u won u won u won...IIi knowww ittt...

He shook his head n took her hand n make her sit n said shut ur mouth...ek dam bacchi ho..

She nodded when he apply the balm again n said this is burn marks sweetu u r hiding something...

She looks stiff then said I...fall on hot thinggg... she didn't look at him

He squeezed his eye brows n remember yash (their close friend ) said same something wrong with her family but what...when she asked yyy ur cheeksss r red..

He shrugged it off n she said again aunty jee...n mujhheee lekeee...

Maan apply balm n adjust her hearing aid n said chalo kya drawing karna hain bolo..

She pout n said Dusshhhttt Danaav...then said rukooo n took the balm n apply on his cheek then blow...now the teenager boy turn man of 21yrs old n he know this feeling but she is still nave or she know ...her eyes speak something for a moment then hide it...

What she is hiding...

Are aankh se boond gira koi

Chingari ka tukda jala koi

Umeed ko aag laga zara

Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara

She said when will Vickey n Yash will come..

He adjust his specs n said y u r not liking my company...

she pout n said nehhhii toh...then said.. but we r going to picniccc n I ammm tooo happyy.

He shook his head n said last month we went for picnic n u r still excited...

She nodded n said we will all play..u know Pari , meera all r coming.. n think nehi toh papa don't let me play with them as they will turn bad by my effect., she quickly hide her tears...

He smiles , they r his sweetu's cousin sister but too sweet...they tie rakhi on his wrist...

he took our few loose paper n placed them neatly inside the folder n said have it sweetu...

she opened them n jumped ,yesss those sketches n said where r those sketches ,,, I have seen when he said there r nothing more n rest r not good so I tore them...

She sat on her knees n said howww Dareee u torreee my sweetu's paintinggg...they r bessttt alwaysss...if u do next time thennn...

he laughed then turn his face n as his eyes fall on his cupboard where they lying safely... those r more precious prized possession... when she said I will be back by eveninggg n yes check my drawing book n see those paintings r fine ...then will submit ...I wanna take Painting as my Additional subject..Maaan smiles n she ran..when he nodded as he needs few time..he went to his cupboard n caressed those precious painting...her eyes , nose, lips face but he can't disclose it.

Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe

she entered the home to find her father is in home n if he see her coming from outside then will break the stick on her back..she felt chill down but she took deep breath n went to back side n jump to wall then by back side balcony entered inside her study room...from there she sneak inside her room after avoiding her father who was fuming as he came to know she was outside...her hands scratched legs also but she doesn't care...

she safely put them inside the cupboard then look at the half made drawing a out line of a face, his face...her allrounder ...

they share their likes, dislikes they grown up almost together , they fought play, but with growing up time they develop some kind of feeling which they don't understand n try to hide it ..they r confuse they r innocent yet they r drowning in to something which is unknown yet beautiful yet dangerous

Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe

They r lost in their land when Vicky came n shouts MAAN bhaiyaaa...n yash came to meet her Geettt...they turn n smiles...they r none other Maan & Geet...Sweetu n Allrounder ...

Hope u all like the prologue
Pls give ur review...
the story will have 5 parts or maximum 6 parts
so pls shower ur love
Love
Rakhi

Disclaimer :- this story & concept solely belong to me and my property if any one try to copy without telling me or try to take this & try to copy & paste it any where then I'll take legal action against him or her , pls don't copy this FF & it's concept


Note :-

Any scene or situation , moment of this ff is an imagination. If any match to any other thing that is merely a co-incidence. I haven't copied any scene N I want to let u know beforehand. Still if anything match it will be only coincident.


P.S .:- any one want pm for this FF then send me buddy req or post a comment here

Edited by Krishna_Sourav - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Index :-
Concept :- Page 1
character Sketches :- Page 1
Prologue :- Page 1
Edited by Krishna_Sourav - 10 years ago
KrishnaRukmini thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Hi all dearies
How r u all



Pls have a look
Love
Rakhi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
sooo beautiful Di ... n flow of this story really amazing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww awesome maaneet pic n wonderful edite Di ❤️ ...will comment in details let me after sometimes my net troubling me a lot grrr...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Beautiful And Soulful Prologue

Both Maan and Geet having issue in their family
it seems like Maan's mother is not happy with her own family and causing his Daadima to fall ill while Geet's father simply dislike her because she is a girl and but worst as a father he finds the excuse to hit his daughter and she also seems very terrified of him .
Maan's mother slaps him because he is with Geet while she soothes his pain and makes him comfortable on the other hand every time he sees her hand and it has burn marks but she tells him she falls and hurts herself while he too soothes the burns
Geet and Maan both are into art and enjoy drawing

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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOWW...😛
Rakhi U make it SS..Gr8
Keep it Up...!!!👏


Tama❤️

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