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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Haye... I loved the prologue...and now who is prem???... Maan and geet is going to marry but geet loved some prem ..maan is eager to know who the hell it is...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
congrats for the new story 😊very interesting prologue maan loves geet and they are about to get married but geet loves some prem😡eagerly waiting for the story to unfold😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Lovely prologue
I think maan and prem same guy
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Posted: 10 years ago
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-MY FIRST LOVE-

PART 1


The club was celebration point of the group and maan opened the champagne and his friends hooted.. It was the birthday bash of his girlfriend and he was celebrating it in a Big way.. The way he always wanted.. Maan was actually showing it to the world the hot and handsome maan singh khurana is now taken and the lucky girl who was now the owner of the beautiful heart of his was his Geet..
Maan's Geet.. That's what he like to call her..
She was the most beautiful girl maan had ever known and maan knew that she loved him a lot just like he does..
Maan knew that she won't have champagne so he had already ordered fruit juice for her.. He gave her the glass and she smiled kissing his cheeks.. That his Geet.. Her simple gestures were enough for him..
Maan : happy birthday love.. Maan pecked her lips and she smiled hugging him close..
Geet : mumma gussa karengi itni raat ho gayi hai.. She said to him and it was right 12:15 am in the morning and maan just pulled her closer and his hands held her waist making the exit from the club leaving his friends and hers there.. This was the party that maan had arranged for her and she had sneaked from the home and maan had already taken permission from her mother unknown to his lady love..
Geet sat on the passenger seat and maan drove back..
Maan : geet I am going to talk to daadima and dad about our engagement .. maan said with a little excitement and waited for her reply instead he just listened to the sleepy voice of hers..She hummed and fall back comfortably on the seat..maan , looked at his geet who was snuggling trying to find her it was almost two when they reached.. maan had already informed her brother and he took the sleeping geet in her room.. maan glanced at her sleeping form and left to KM..
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Evening
It was the grand party or say get together that handa's have kept for the occasion of geet's birthday and the one who was sulking was none other than geet.. She was dressed in a beautiful pink gown and was looking absolutely stunning, she was wearing the classy diamond bracelet that maan had gifted her last night and the earings her mother had gifted.. She looked really beautiful but still there was not that charm that has to be there..her friends came there , diksha and sheetal tried to cheer her up but her eyes were on the entrance like she was waiting for someone..
Sheetal : geet what yaar , its your party and you are looking most uninterested person ... aisa hi that oh why did you even called us..
Diksha : sheetal you are mad , she must be dreaming of mr hottie , you see last night he was just into her.. geet yaar your maan is just so sweet and un predictable , he arranged such a nice party and get together but see he himself didn't enjoyed , you two left even before we could have fun.
Geet again hummed and this time Diksha left her.. Maan came with his family.. They had a great time.. But all the time maan was busy with his business clients.. What to do he was the most desired personality and he chose Geet ..

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It was weeks after and their engagement was fixed .. Maan was excited and he was making plans to have full courtship time with her.. He had expected same with her.. She was initially very happy when he had proposed her.. It was in between an interview that maan was giving and his Geet was upset with him and he had called her faking some injury and Geet was the one who ran with jet speed , breaking signal.. She didn't knew that it was live that the channel was showing and maan proposed her in front thousands of people.. In fact more than maan's interview it was that proposal that was aired again and again..

Geet was lying on her queen sized bed and it was one of the tiring day after so much of shopping but still Geet was so much engrossed in her thoughts when sheetal pulled her away from the window pane and made her sit on the window..

Sheetal : what's wrong with you.. Aaj bhi dekha you are lost somewhere.. Tera jhagda hua hai maan se.. Or is he angry ya tu naraz hai..

Geet looked at sheetal and blurted out with a finality in her voice..

Geet : I think I have gone over it.. I have realized sheetal..
Geet said with a heavy voice ..
Geet : I don't love maan sheetal.. I think it was all infatuation..
She said with a confused look..
Sheetal looked at geet, she knew geets confusing personality and she shook her insides..
Sheetal : wow.. That's great.. You mean you are going to end this relationship now.. That's good geet... Now I can hint on him.. Omg now the hot and handsome maan Singh khurana is available...
Geet whacked her arm..
Geet : what the hell.. Stop oogling.. He is still mine...I mean tagged with me..
Sheetal : baby he is just in a relationship jise tu tod rahi hai.. So just chill.. And by the way maan is just so good that he doeant deserve a devil like you.. Waise ek baat bata tere dimag me kya chal raha hai.. I know all this is a joke.
Geet : i love prem only sheetal..
Geet said pouted.. And sheetal rolled her eyes.. Prem for god sake that prem..
Sheetal : prem , are you serious.. How can you love that prem..she smasked making a scowled face..

Sheetal : Geet you have gone mad.. Maan tujhe kitna pyar karta Hai.. And you , you are just mad for that good for nothing prem..
Aur tu.. Ek number ki gadhi hai.. For god sake geet you are getting married in a month aur tum ho..
Geet grimaced at her friend sheetal and said with a cute voice..
Geet : my first and only love is prem sheetal.. He is the one who make me feel loved.. He is the one jiske wajah se I know what is love..
Maan may love me..
I will marry maan
But my first love will always be prem sheetal..
Geet said with a dreamy voice and sheetal shook her..
Sheetal : maan ka kya..
Geet looked at sheetal frowned.. And made her mad with her talks..
Geet : that's his problem , I love prem and nothing can take me out ..
Nothing..

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The conversation that maan heard between geet and sheetal made him look confused and his eyes couldn't believe that his love , his Geet love some prem..
But who the hell is this prem..
Maan singh khurana will make Geet his and no prem can take her away from him...maan thought determined..
But first he has to find..
Prem..

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So that was the first part..
This is a OS and is of three parts maximum..
Do like and comment
Edited by suhaaana - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
hahaha maan so so jealous that geet has crush on some prem
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
lovely part
😆 jealousy maan
thank you dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
geet was happy in mid night party which gaven
maan love geet so much
geet love prem
maan angry hearing geet love
waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Im late here sorry
Woahhh total new concept never read something like dis
Sounds intresting
Ummm y do i feel dat dis going to b some fun loving concept may b n prem doesnt exist or some imaginary character may b i just felt dat
Maan n Geet both are really intresting but kinda mysterious hav to wait till d story moves on
Geet is having d dream life every girl wants but she wants something else
N maan dream man every girl wants but seems like too possessive
Eager to c wat ll happen next
Wat is dis mystery all about
Great story
Thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Nice update di
Maan loving geet a lot!!
This Geet is totally confusing!!
She is ready to marry Maan but will not love any other that prem...ufff
Maan heard this...what will be his reaction? !?!
loved the update di :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Geet is such a confused soul. At first she was enjoying every a t.of maan and suddenly she is thinking about prem.maan heard all conversation And got confused. Waiting for next dear

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