The Vengeance Lover thread 3 complete....link to thread 4 @ pg 1 n 147 - Page 34

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Edited by vandy28 - 10 years ago
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Pari think she is great actress but I have seen people acting so brilliantly that she was nothing infront of them...he smirked...

No...pari won't tell u...

When I said she told me...she acted well that she doesn't know where u r ...but u both forget I m Maan....he gave wicked smile to her

Y u making so much suspense out of it...kill the suspense and tell me...

Ohhhkkk...y getting hyper...actually what happened was...


Flashback

When pari told me she doesn't know about u whereabouts...i knew she was lying. I was sure it was pari whom u talked last time on phone from hospital and she told u something. So I know I have to get information out from pari only but I didn't know my luck was so high...that day itself I will know about ur whereabouts. I was standing outside pari's cabin only when i heard her conversation over phone with someone and at end I come to know it was u...

Yes maam...maan joined today n was asking about u...

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No I didn't tell him about ur whereabout...

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Yeah I will keep in mind...u just be careful of sameera's evil plan...she can do anything to make this deal happen...u being there alone make m worried...

Bye


Flashback end

So since I knew sameera is in paris ... next thing I did was booked flight ticket n came here...

How can office people give u leave again...

Ohh...wohh...i told them u asked me to come here on official trip for some help....he smiled n he didn't looked at her as he felt as teenager making excuses to teachers in college when caught bunking classes...



Geet smiled at him...it was first time she has seen this cheerful n naughty side of maan and whatever he did for her made her feel special. She is happy where maan is lost in past when annie called her that day


Flashback

Maan was relieved to know about geet whereabouts but what pari said being careful to geet made him worried about her too... she is alone n above her being around sameera is sign of danger. After knowing sameera true color he knows that sameera can do anything to get what she want n here geet is there to stop her. With all thoughts surrounding his mind, maan moved towards his cabin and thinking a way to protect geet from sameera if something goes wrong. His thoughts were broken by loud sound of his mobile, he saw annie as caller so picked up the call.

Haan choti...tu thik h nah...kuch hua toh nahi...mein wapas aau...

Bhaiyu...chill...mein bilkul thik hoon...who meine phone geet ko thank u bolne ke liye phone kiya tha ...aap meri usse baat karwao nah...

When pinky was alright, arjun told her about geet. How geet was with maan n supported him but because of emergency she had to leave that day itself...arjun does give his input too by telling how he feels there is something going in between geet n maan...maan was effected by her absence and seems worried with no contact. Annie was happy listening to this...his bhai is moving on in life leaving his past behind her but before this relation proceed further she wanted to know about geet more...want to be sure she is not like sameera.

Woh choti ...geet india mein nahi h...who paris gayi hui h...mein khud use contact karne ki koshish kr raha hoon...but uska phone hi nhi mila rha h...mein khud hi tension mein hoon...who udhar thik toh h...

Bhaiyu kuch problem h kya...is she in danger??

Pata nhi chutki...but woh udhar safe bhi nahi h...

Aapko udhar jana chaiye bhaiya...geet ko apki help ki jarorat h..

Mein kaise chutki...abhi tum thik bhi nhi ho and ab mein tumhe chod kar nhi jaaunga......

Bhaiyu mein thik hoon...ab toh mein discharge b ho gyi hoon n arjun bhi h mere sath...udhar geet ko apki jarorat h...apko uske pass jana chaiye...

Par office...woh bhi ab off nahi denge...

Bhaiyu...yeh kya hua...apke office ki tension le rahe ho...ap toh Mr. bahanebaaz ho...she giggled...

Chutki...maan said bit loudly as he tried to sound serious...

Bhaiyu hum dono jaante h...apke pass toh har kisi problem ka way out hota h...koi nah koi tigdam laga hi lete ho...so use ur brain nah....

Bahut badi ho gayi ho...apne bhai ko advice de rahi hoo...

Annie smiled...n said...apke liye kabhi bhi nhi bhaiyu...mein abhi bhi apki chutki hoon...chalo ap kuch rasta nikalo n mein apka samaan n passport arjun ke sath airpot bhej deti hoon...

Ohk...apna khayal rakhna...bye...

Bye...

Flashback end


So geet tell me about deal n y u want to stop it...

This deal is with xyz pharmaceuticals...Handa enterprises are now getting into pharmaceutics n entering in market by collaborating with this company. We have to set up manufacturing unit here in paris but at last moments there was some budget issue from our sides so in turn of money they are acquiring this land for the set up...I can't give this land to any one...this is my mom's most fav place...she built everything...i tried to arrange money but I m failed...n now I have just today...tomorrow they will sign the deal...I never felt so helpless maan...never...geet fell on her knees and her all emotions comes out as tears from her eyes...she is tired for fighting ...she is helpless...how much she has to suffer ...is there any end to her grief...y she is always at losing end...she lost her mom n now this place where she fell her presence...she feel close to her...



Maan heart went out for her...seeing her so broken n emotional...

Maan bends on his knees n cocooned geet in his arm. Geet tightens her hold around maan's waist and cried hysterically. Maan's hand engulfed around her n providing her warmth which she was missing for long...n making her belief she is not alone. Maan let her cry for few minutes and when her sound become low...he held her face in his palm and wiped her tears with his thumbs n said...


geet don't cry...I m here for u...v won't allow them to snatch ur mom's place from u...u believe me nah......

geet was looking at maan like a lost child who lost her way back to home in the crowd n suddenly got a ray a hope...she simply nodded in her reply...

so don't cry ...n he wiped away tears rolling down on her cheek n placed a soft kiss on her forehead. Both felt a jolt within them when maan's lips were pressed on her forehead. Maan get parted from her n stared in her eyes to see any question or confusion or uncomfortable feeling because of his sudden kiss...but he was relieved that there was none...her eyes was showing hope...hope that everything will b fine soon...

Maan raised her up and they got settled in sofa...maan still holding geet by his and hand on her shoulder n other hand holding geet's hand whereas geet head was on maan shoulder. They don't know how many minutes passed while sitting there in same position but after a while geet looked at maan n said...

maan how can v stop them...i tried arranging fund but it is not possible...n no one is giving land on lease too for manufacturing as it need lots of official work n will take lot of time...

Hmm...did u check the background of that company...

Hm...m not sure as sameera was handling this project from starting but for sure they did that's y collaborating them nah...

Yeah...but there is no harm in checking once more...when u can't overcome ur weakness ...u need to make ur enemy weakness as ur strength...u try arranging funds if u can...i will go through company profile may b I found something which can help us...

Geet nodded and both started to work together to defeat sameera...


P.S... sorry for delay but was held up than later was not able to type anything...so giving big one...hope u all like this...

do check my page too i have updated new edits...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4349026/vandys-page-my-dreams-and-reality-updated-pg-10-25th-aug

Edited by vandy28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE
maan told geet about his talk with aniee n how he comes to know about her whereabouts through pari indirectly 😆
he is feeling like a school kid caught doing naughtiness by teacher in class 😆
they both are trying to overcome probs created by sam 😡
Edited by preetymaaneet - 10 years ago
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Awesome and emotional update dear Vandy..⭐️Maan told Geet that how he get to know about whereabouts..😳and Geet feeling helpless,tired of fighting and suffering..feeling bad for her..but Maan is there for her..❤️loved their moments together.. and Maan's sis too..what will they do with deal now..and how they defeat Sameera..eager to know😛pics are awesome😳 ..waiting for next part.😃
Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! well written! Maan reveals 2 Geet hw he find abt her whereabouts! Emotional Geet tells Maan abt the deal! Maan consoles her! update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing.main narrated geet how he came to know about her address. Geet was amazed seeing his this side which is full of nautiness and mischievousness.I loved Annie and maan's bonding and their love and concern for each other. When maan told Annie that might be geet is in danger than without any second thought she advice him to go there and help geet.now when maneet are together , who can make them defeat. Waiting for next dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic Update

So Maan overheard Pari talking to Geet and also saying that Sameera could be dangerous and he knews Sameera well so he decides after talking to Annie he will leave for Paris and now he is there been Geet's strength which is just awesome because she truly needs someone .
Annie worried if Geet is a good person as she does not wanr her brother again to suffer yet she tells him to go as Geet needs him
I'm hoping that both Maan and Geet can stop the deal and they can also find something wrong that Sameera overlooked .

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. Maan is in Paris to help Geet.
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Posted: 10 years ago
😆😆
busy bee...ajkl thde busy ho nah😆

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