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snehapriya

@snehapriya

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#691

So Dev and Tara are trying to mend their lives and Dev is still deciding things in haste. He should first get to know what happened to Geet and then think about divorce. The sin made once is haunting their lives now. How are they gonna memd it.

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vydehi

@vydehi

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#692

Did not see this coming, feel bad for both of them. Will Geet forgive him? Will Dev Tara meet again? Very nice update. Thanks for updating.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#693

Part 58 - Oh...i didn't expect this. I thought they will work out with their questions & answers be together one again after clearing all their misunderstanding, misconceptions.

So dev was really divorcing her...but for her good. He was setting her free just to keep her safe as he was repenting what he did with geet and ready to accept any punishment come his way. He was doing this to find her and ask for apology or punishment.

It was so hurting to see them parting away. Tara knew why he married her and now know why he divorcing her. She at this time also supported him and when she realizes that she loves him.

Don't know where his journey will take him and what tara going to do.

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mayyo

@mayyo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 7 years ago

#694

Ah! The pain of broken hearts shattering beyond repair...

Just couldn't help feeling sympathy for the two souls suffering here. I wish there was a way to undo all the damage that they did to themselves and to others but alas.

They need a clean break from each other, perhaps. They need to evaluate their individual standings in life before they can get back together and be happy with each other.

But Dev's decision to go back and find Geet, regardless of how morally correct it may be, is going to open doors to a major storm in all their lives. Can't predict how the already broken family is going to get through that one. Just hope that things do work out somehow.

Phenomenal writing. Touches the readers deep within the heart.

Thanks for updating! And sorry for being MIA.

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#695

You had already made it hard to hate them and now you are hell bent on making us like the couple.

Dev is right if he had tried to understand her better he would not have done what he did.

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priyasree

@priyasree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#696

Amazing, emotional n wonderful updates

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p4peppa

@p4peppa

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#697

Commenting for the first time, but with an uneasy feeling because it is not a positive one. The Dev I am seeing here, I can not relate to him. I mean his character is not believable.

The one who conspired to cheat a whole family for monetary gains and robed a girl of her dreams, how can he be described in such poetic terms. The last update, if you change the names, seemed like I am looking at Maan and Geet. You know what I mean, the whole chapter matches their character not Dev's.

Ofcourse people and circumstances are not always black and white, but to be a fraud and be selfish and plot to decieve somebody on an elaborate level doesnt happen overnight, it is what you are and you will do it again and again.

As for apologising to Geet, there is no self realisation or rumination over his deed, all that is visible to the reader is his complicated past and present with Tara.

So for me Dev is not a believable character of this beautiful story.

Thank you for such a nice piece of writing.

Edited by p4peppa - 7 years ago