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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dear all😳
How are u ?? I doing well thank u even before u ask me😃... ahh this is kind of getting weird with me addressing u as readers n me being a writer!😆

Chalo so point ye hai k I have written a new story these days

No juta chapal please😳

Read it completely before u come to conclusions!

I know I have word called love, tiny Surprises, beyond logics, broken hearts, scotch Bottle, Act, prince charming, incomplete story, YHM and a promise latest😉 still pending

To be honest I have perfect reasons why I did so

N as I always say I'll complete every thing I started!

Hogaya speech

Ab help me out with the story

See there are 2 leads one who is a boss n one her PA... both are smart beautiful n what not but our super Intelligent hero enters our story n then starts the confusion. ..

He get attracted to one of them n starts giving signals n this reaches the wrong one too

At the end of the day one of them finds out that he is tricking both the girls at the same time n plans to expose him to the world!!

All this happens on the day he actually plans to propose her

So 3 of them are left shattered

Now she leaves the city unable to face the humiliation n boss no one dares to question her seeing her status in the society n he takes a strong decision of not letting any female enter his life!!

Now I actually planned two persons entering the story one who would settle with the hero at the end n other with the other women!!

So the confusion here is what about the 2nd girl!😕

And also suggest a proper end😳

This was a non maaneet story so I didn't post it here😆

-spoorthi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi spoorthi
if its not a maneet story ..ending kuch bhi de do kya farak padeag ...
do as u wish !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tabby999

hi spoorthi

if its not a maneet story ..ending kuch bhi de do kya farak padeag ...
do as u wish !!!


Babaji dekho tho😲

Ok harz karo it is a maaneet story!!

Now tell me😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: spoorthi28


Babaji dekho tho😲

Ok harz karo it is a maaneet story!!

Now tell me😳

second girl ke liye new hero ki entry karwa do ..simple ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tabby999

second girl ke liye new hero ki entry karwa do ..simple ..


Hmmm 🤔

Let me see n end??😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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If not Maaneet story, neither I am reader nor any suggestion from me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kabslocks

If not Maaneet story, neither I am reader nor any suggestion from me.

Dill k armaan aasuoo me behgaye😭

It's ok !
Waise bhi I got a solution!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Why this is non maneet story second girl ki arrange marriage krwado ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanilaa

Why this is non maneet story second girl ki arrange marriage krwado ;)

Good question

Reason 1 no one will wait for the maan or geet making an entry in the second half of the story

N 2 no one here in this forum will welcome me with a new story reason stated above(pending list)😆

Nahi wo second girl will turn into a villain in the next half😈
Ab zara sa twist tho banta hai na😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Spoorthi spoorthi spoorthi... Larkiii... Kaam khatam nahi kartii aur dosre kaam start kar dete hoo...tobah tobah... Dekh leee babajii apni kuri ko...coming to ur post... U said its not on maaneet then on whom are u gonna write???... Answer that question as foe ur second question u urself said ending mil gae...

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