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Posted: 9 years ago
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are u thinking of hanging the story in middle please dont do that please update
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every moment she was craving for her children. arjun was the only link which let her know about her kids.
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Desperately Waiting For An Update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats for the new thread...
part 40
grrr kiddo tune rulaya meko again 😭
geet's pain is unbearable yaar...she is in so much pain...
bas choti si khusi chahiye thi usse wo bhi nahi mil rahi...geet poor her seeing pics of kid hearing audio if their 1st words...it was most painful for any mother to not present with her kids when they are growing...
i'll kill maan mujhe isske kisi bhi reason ko nahi sunna isska pain bhi nahi dekhan...
he is only missing geet but he has his kids with him his family too...
geet ka kya she has no one with her... na bache na pati na hi pariwar...
grrr yaar kiddo aur kitna rulana hai????
why i think past over hone k baad bhi our crying is not over??!!!
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oh n congrats for the new thread..
sorry for late kiddo...
part 37-39 comment on last thread
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi Happy Diwali! please update soon! thanks
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wow loved ur story its so painfulll geet had suffered so much and maan is so ruthless but geet so easily forgive maan that what he did to her contiue dear waiting...for ext part
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Waiting ...
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Originally posted by: geetsmile

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THANKS MOHI DII FOR HELPING IN PUTTING SONG
N PRIYA DI N PRIYANKA DII JINKA BHAUT DIMAG KHAYA MAINE
Part 40




(THANKS SWETA FOR BEAUTIFUL BANNER SPCLY FOR THIS UPDATE)


Life is a rollercoaster we all now...all have to face some part of happiness and some pain in their life but for geet her happiness ended with her mumma. She was a small girl who carved for love from her father. She was princess of her mumma, who used to pamper her to core, her every wish was fulfilled even before she voiced out but after her mumma her wishes were waste...and after some time she stopped wishing too. But once again expectations and wishes came in her mind when she got married to only man of her life. But that was also broken...not only her dreams and expectations were broken but she was broken from her inside. She never asked questions to her babaji never complained but today she wanna to know, ask why she only...why.

It was week she have seen her babies and her heart is again crying for them..their one mere look. Arjun brought her to his mansion which was his parents. Geet has became more zombie now she didn't speak nor answer now. Spend her whole time in thoughts n the tab which Arjun has given her with kids pics stored inside. These pictures were oxygen for geet to live her life. Arjun gave her one of the best room of the mansion to live, there was beautiful view from balcony, he once again brought her medical books for her to read but now these things too cant take place in her life. She was happy to be alone once but now she want her kids n mere presence of maan. She was satisfied seeing and admring him in morning, her life was happy with these things she never demanded more but now once again far from her home...making her too much weak.

Arjun used to spend night in his mansion soo that she didn't get scared. But one moring she came near him n spoke after long time of silence "bhaiya mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai" Arjun looked at geet who was silent for almost week speaking after that evening, he nodded his face "bhaiya aap mat aaya karo yaha itna, I know u care for me but aniee dii and dishu too need u. I don't want u to ignore them for me" she was cutted by Arjun "aese ku bol rahi h tu geet...tujhe sach me dil se behan manna hai or jo v kar raha hu apni pyari si behan ke lie kar raha hu" geet was overwhelmed by hearing soo loving words from him and tears came in her eye and she spoke "I know bhaiya but aniee dii n dishu too needs u bhaiya plzz aap unke pass jao, pura din aap office me hote ho phir yaha...dii or dishu ka haq mat cheno bhaiya. Itna toh mai janti hu ek patni ko kitna intejar hota h uske pati ka sham me woh haq mat cheeno bhaiya maine woh dard jiya h bhaiya woh dard aniee di ko mat do.aaj se rat me mat aana mai akele reh lugi...wase v ab yehi meri zindagi hai." Arjun wanted to oppose but geet folded her hands n said "plz bhaiya...its a request plzzz mere jaans ka v khayal rakhna bhaiya, unse kehna unki mumma unhe bht miss karti hai or bhaut pyar v karti h" saying this geet ran from there crying. Arjun smiled with tears in eyes thinking how much she care for others but nobody is there to care for her. He knows she is missing ammy, mithi and maan too, she is angel who is just wanted love nothing else but got pain only in the name of love. He signed n thought to make her see kids once again as only this can make her smile in her pain too.

Geet ran in her room n lied on bed hiding her face inside pillow, crying her heart out she wanted her babies with her, she is yearning for love, she wants her mother, she wants her dad and somewhere inside her heart she wants maan to be her side too. She miss the giggling n blabbering of her kids she miss them madly, tears were rolling continuously from her eyes she hugged the teddy n started talking with them like talking with her kids. Arjun looked at her crying bitterly standing at door but unable to do anything for this gal, tears of guilt escaped from his eyes and went out to go KM as today is Sunday.

Zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba

Aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba

Dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoon

Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba

Geet slept for hours due to weakness, when woke again felt empty n crying she denied to eat her food n went n sat in garden for hours but tears didn't stop from her eyes it was pouring like rain, she was unable to hold it today, she was feeling emptiness everywhere in home, in her heart in her life everywhere.

Jaate jaate koyi meri khushiyon ko le gaya

Sooni sooni akhiyon ko gham, koyi de gaya

Aas jo lagaayi hai, aankh bhar aayi hai

Itna bhi koyi, sataaye na rabba


Somewhere maan to know what he has lost in his anger or say helplessness but this loss no one can understand no one can see the pain which he is going through and he is unable to share too but the love and happiness he felt after geet coming in his life he is missing her warmth, he cute cute faces her smiling face with kids, but he know somewhere deep that he did correct as there was no other way

Zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba

Aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba

Dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoon

Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba

Geet looked at kids pictures in tab n caressed their face, kissed their face on tab and closed her eyes with pain to digest the fact once again that she cant live with her kids ever. Tears rolled down from her closed eyes. She opened her on the sound of beep, she wanted to ignore it but there was another msg on her tab from arjun she opened the msg n smile appeared on her face, to see her babies cuddling with eachother n sleeping. She opened another picture to find her kids smiling cutely, in next she find both her cuties were covered with pink towel which she have brought for them, in last one both her babies were dressed like elephant n looking soo cute that she cant control her tears n cried hardly hugging the tab.

(THANKS ZEBA FOR THIS SPECIAL EDIT)


Dil lene waale pe zor nahin chalta

Pyaar ka ye sikka, kahin aur nahin chalta

Yaad teri aayi hai, tu harjaai hai

Itna bhi koyi tadpaaye na rabba

Her heart cried to hold them, cocoon them but somewhere happy to see them, she send a thanks to arjun n went in her room n spent her nights in adoring her life, kissing them hugging them on intervals. but somewhere she was angry from maan to give her lifetime punishment which she never committed of thought of doing too. But somewhere in her mini heart she carved to see him too.

Zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba

Aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba

Dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoon

Toh pehle koyi hasaaye na rabba

Days passed like this only on geet's request arjun started spending tym with his family but both arjun n aniee were thinking about her only everytime. Arjun got her day to day routine from his trustworthy servant gopal kaka,who always say one thing only she didn't eat properly and cry every time in her room, she didn't spoke a word.

These things disturb them but they are helpless, they tried talking with her but she only spoke "how are my babies, do they eat timely, do they sleep timely, are they happy" her every words are filled with kids, she never answered about herself. Arjun and aniee also noticed her unsaid words about maan.

It was like her life was moving, she now doesn't read books now, she don't want to become anything now in her life she just wanted her kids and her isolation is her life now.

Whereas kids were growing with their papa, maan is pampering them, loving them but he feels helpless when they cry for geet their mother while sleeping or while feed. It was difficult for maan to make them calm.

They are together now but not only geet, kids maan too lost some precious time of their life, they lost their family.

Kids were growing with time, they started crawling, walking, speaking small small words, they were somewhat happy with their papa but one soul is missing them with her every breath every heart pulse. Arjun used to send her pics of kids every activity but too late when everyone what kids did, it somewhere hurts geet always that she is not the 1st to know about her kids activity n cherish it. When arjun send her audio of them speaking maa, it was like her heart broke hundred times in pain it doesn't smooth her aching heart, she cried for hours hearing that audio wanted to die. She cursed her life her fate now everyday that god at last thought to give her freedom from her pain but who knows what is written in destiny she tried to hide something, he tried to hide something but both once again got their togetherness to fight for eachother and with each other.

She wanted to know the reason of her pain and he wanted to give her happiness of life, but today she is suffering from a disease will he able to take it away that from her life and fill her life with happiness after 3 years of marriage will they got their love back n live like a happy family

Is there WAITING is going to over

Or they have to STILL WAIT...

Now past over and all parts will be in present..hopefully u all will like update and sorry for late update n m not going to give reason as my reason is same

Thanks to every reader who wait for it...THANK YOU for being with me n loving this ff


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Posted: 9 years ago
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i forgot this is new thread 😆

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